HELLO MY DEAR READERS, THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC CALLED DARK ANGEL: 452 OR MAX, IF ANYONE HAS A BETTER NAME PLEASE TELL ME. IN THIS STORY LYDECKER IS STILL IN CHARGE OF MANTICORE, BUT IS AWAY AT THE MOMENT, HE WILL RETURN THOUGH. ADDITIONAL INFORMATION WILL BE ADDED AT ANY TIME. SO I SUGGEST YOU READ THIS IN CASE OF ANY NEW INFORMATIN THAT HAS BEEN ADDED TO MY STORY.

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DISCLAIMER:I DO NOT OWN DARK ANGEL, IF I DID THERE WOULD HAVE BEEN A THIRD SEASON.

SUMMARY: ATTHE END OF "AND JESUS BOUGHT A CASSEROLE" OUR FAVORITE SHE-RO X5- 452 OR ALSO KNOWN AS MAX IS CAPTURED. NOT COMPLETEING THE MISSION, THE D.N.A. LAB IS STILL INTACT, AND SHE GETS SHOTS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHEST. ZACK, SYL, KRIT, LOGAN, AND LYDECKER ESCAPED. SHE DIDN'T, THIS IS HER STORY...

"TALKING"

'THINKING'

452. Treat her with the same respect that you show any other officer of status."

As he said this, there was a moment of silence before outrage took place. He tried to take back control but it was useless. They had never acted like this before. They had always listened and respected him. But now they were like wild animals. Yelling at him in outrage. He had no idea what to do, nothing like this had ever occured before. He saw his new Second in Command stand up and she started to walk towards him.

"Sir," she started, "is this how your unit acts every time they get a new S.I.C.?"

"No," he replied, "511 has been the S.I.C. since we were kids. Like I have been the C.O since we were kids. But she usually doesn't act like that. But after what happened in 09' we all had to go through months of psy-ops. So she probably blames you and your old unit."

"For that I apologize sir. I was following orders of my old commanding officer. But we need to gain back control of the unit and the situation, if you don't want them to bring a trainer, the directer, or the colonel down here. They can go to solitary confinement for this, or return for another visit to psy-ops."

He nodded his head in agreement. At once they turned their attention back to the unit, who was still in outrage. Only a few of them remained, but they made the loudest noise.

"SILENCE." They both yelled.

The remaining, enraged X5's looked at their commander and the S.I.C.

"What do you think you are doing," he said, glaring at all of them, "she brought this on herself. If anything you should be mad at her. She underestimated her opponent, and lost because of it. She had ten years of training, and still lost.511 couldbest any one of you. She lost, to someone who had no training. What does that say to you?

452, is your new Second in Command get used to it. And if you don't want to there is always solitary or psy-ops. If worst comes to worst I can have you transferred to a different unit."

"But we don't want a new S.I.C. And we certainly don't want a damn 09er as one either. She is probably infected with some disease, and she'll probably try to escape again and then it is more psy-op for us. She can go to hell." Said 510.

As these words flew from his mouth, 452, blurred in his direction. This was all the warning he had before she was in his face.

"The directors and others may take your attitude, 510, but I will not. I have gone through hell and back, 511 underestimated me, I pray that you do well not tomake the same mistake. Is that understood, private?"

"I don't care what you say, you little..."

But that was all he got out before she interuppted him.

"Be careful what you say, private, you may end up hurt...or worse. And you wouldn't want to be injured with all the extra training tomorrow, would you?"

"Fuck you."

Her eyes flashed, and her knee found her way to his groin.

"What was that 511?"

His eyes, who before had a look of defiance in them, now held fear, and a little bit of respect. He looked at 452, and said in a soft voice..."

"Nothing ma'am."

While this happened, all eyes were on them. Mouths dropped as they saw what she had done, then heard his words. She had not only scared, but had also earned the respect of one who held little respect for almost no-one. Whispers began pouring out of their mouths, but were silenced from a look from her.

"Now this unit has extra training tomorrow," said 494, "until you have proved yourself to Colonel Lydecker. You can thank 511 for that. Now it is 21:50. We have ten minutes until lights out, and bunk down. If what happened yesterday happens today, we can expect extra training for a long while, as it is, we only have it for a few days. Now get to bed."


While the X5's were sleeping, 452 was staring at the wall, going over her life, and trying to fill in the blanks in her memory. Suddenly the door swung open, and two guards came in. They were shocked seeing that she was awake, and all ready dressed. She stood at attention, and followed when they motionedfor her to follow.

She was brought to the pool, and was pushed in along with her C.O. They stayed under three minutes, before they started to struggle. Once they were released, they were taken to other equipment. Finally they were both released, and walked back to the unit. That is until her C.O. walked in a different direction. She was about to call to him, when she saw his barcode. The last thee numbers were not that of her C.O, but those of her little brother. They read...

4 9 3


494 looked around to see people starting to rise. He looked to the corner where 452 was supposed to be, and found the bed made and empty, and her no where in site. He looked around the room and found the cell door slightly open. He looked out the window and found her outside talking with Lydecker.

"452, you did a good job this morning, keep it up and I will have to send you on a mission."

"Sir, thank you, sir."

"But 452, I still want to know where the rest of your unit are."

"Sir, I do not know, sir."

He glared at her for a second before opening his mouth again.

"You are aware we have devices to make you talk."

"Sir, yes, sir."

"Then tell me, 452, where are they?"

"Sir, I do not know, sir. X5- 599, never told any of us where the others were."

"Okay, 452, return to your unit. Since you don't sleep at night, and you need to be caught up, you will also have night training. Is that understood, 452?"

"Sir, yes, sir."

"You are dismissed."

As she walked back, 494 turned around, and waited for her.

"Hey 452, what was that all about."

"Sir, that information is confidention sir."

'599. He is legendary. He was the C.O that lead the escape. No wonder they haven't been caught yet. Now I understand how she beat 511. That unit was specially made for special ops."

After she had finshed, she walked towards her bed, sat on the end and started blankly at the sign, on the wall that read, "Mission". Her eyes glazed over and memories invaded her mind.


"Tell us a story, Ben."

"Okay little sister. The anonmalies are evil beings. The are in the bad place, where all bad soldiers go. But people who are good, and are do what they are told, go to the good place, and are protected by the blue lady..."


"452, are you there."

She snapped out of the memory and looked at him in surprise and shock.

"Ben," she whispered. "Ben, I'm so sorry. But I couldn't I..."

But she stopped. A glazed look came over her.

"Sir, are we ready to go, sir."

"Ummm, yeah. Lets go everybody."

And they all walked out into the courtyard to commence their training for the day.


'Mom, I will find you. I know that you probably don't remember me. I mean why would you? I shot you. Anyway I have talked to some of the X's and we have decided. You are our leader now. But until we can talk to you, we will follow Manticore. I love you.'

THANK YOU FOR READING THIS CHAPTER. ANYWAY IF ANYONE OUT THERE HAS ANYTHING THAT THEY THINK THAT I SHOULD ADD PLEASE TELL ME OR SEND ME THE PIECE OF WRITING THAT YOU WOULD LIKE ENTERED IN MY STORY AND I WILL GIVE YOU CREDIT. AND REMEMBER TO ALWAYS READ AND REVIEW.

REVIEWS:

Lozz422- Thanks for the review. I haven't decided on the ship yet. But I hope that it will be as good as some of the other stories that I read.

Iredescent Twilight- Thanks for the review. Max will be coming back soon. Only a little bit at a time though. Its like a wall has been built around her personality. So as the wall begins to crack, her personality will slowly leak through. Hope you enjoyed this chapter.

AND THANK YOU TO SHYGIRL1 FOR ALSO REVIEWING. NEXT CHAPTER WE WILL SKIP AHEAD TO THE FIGHT BETWEEN THE CO AND SIC. I AM ALSO HOPING TO HAVE THE MEETING BETWEEN 511 AND 452. YOU CAN VISIT MY GROUP FOR PICS. ALSO INTRODUCTION SHOULD BE MADE NEXT CHAPTER.