HELLO MY DEAR READERS, THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC CALLED DARK ANGEL: 452 OR MAX, IF ANYONE HAS A BETTER NAME PLEASE TELL ME. IN THIS STORY LYDECKER IS STILL IN CHARGE OF MANTICORE, BUT IS AWAY AT THE MOMENT, HE WILL RETURN THOUGH. ADDITIONAL INFORMATION WILL BE ADDED AT ANY TIME. SO I SUGGEST YOU READ THIS IN CASE OF ANY NEW INFORMATIN THAT HAS BEEN ADDED TO MY STORY.
NEW INFO: THIS CHAPTER HAS BEEN REVISED
DISCLAIMER:I DO NOT OWN DARK ANGEL, IF I DID THERE WOULD HAVE BEEN A THIRD SEASON.
SUMMARY: ATTHE END OF "AND JESUS BOUGHT A CASSEROLE" OUR FAVORITE SHE-RO X5- 452 OR ALSO KNOWN AS MAX IS CAPTURED. NOT COMPLETEING THE MISSION, THE D.N.A. LAB IS STILL INTACT, AND SHE GETS SHOTS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHEST. ZACK, SYL, KRIT, LOGAN, AND LYDECKER ESCAPED. SHE DIDN'T, THIS IS HER STORY...
"TALKING"
'THINKING'
CHAPTER: 6
The extra training that they all had to endure was pure hell. Everyday each of them had to spar with their new S.I.C. None of them won. It was no picnic either. The only member of the unit not to fight was the C.O. He would get his chance soon enough.
Three days later, and 511, finally saw the light of day. Her plan was in motion, she would get her revenge on 452.
'Since I am the Second in Command, this should prove no problem. The others will no doubtly want to join me. I better head back to the unit. They will not have left yet.'
She quickly returned to the unit to find, them lined up at the door, with her C.O and the 09er leading them.
'What the hell is going on.'
"Yo, 494, I'm back." She said, while glaring at the 09er.
"511. You better get in line."
"Definitly." She turned to the 09er and glared harder at her. "Move, damnit. Behind the C.O. is where the S.I.C. stands, you filthy piece of gutter trash."
There was a gasp and a few whisperings. 494 held up his hand. He leaned toward the old officer.
"You got replaced, 511. This is the new S.I.C. Sorry, Lydeckers orders. Get to the back of the line."
511 stared at him, then back to the female.
"Bitch, you damn bitch." She said.
"I may be new," she said, her new attitude shinning through, "but I will not take any hostility, by a comrade. That was your only shot. Any more and you will be reported. You are dismissed."
"You finally got a bit of power and it went to your head. You are nothing but a 09' escape, and I will never follow your orders."
"Is that so 511," said a deep voice behind her. "Well if you won't follow a officers orders, maybe a trip to psy-ops will change your mind."
"No, sir. That won't be neccesary."
"Did, I ask for your input, Second in Command 452?"
"No sir. Permission to speak, sir?" She said, her eyes full of fear, with a hint of danger lurking in them.
The older man gave a sigh.
"Permission granted, 452."
"Sir, 511 has just gotten out of solitary confinement. Last she knew, she was the S.I.C. It is just a shock for her. I can assure you there will be no problems in the future, sir."
"Is that so, 511."
"Yes, sir, Colonel Lydecker, sir."
"Very well then." He turned to talk to 511."If it wasn't for your S.I.C. you would on your way to hell. Be sure to thank her...NOW."
"Thank you, 452." She gritted out.
But with a look from the man...
"I mean, thank you ma'am."
"Make sure it doesn't happen again, 511, you are dismissed."
"Ma'am, yes, ma'am." She once again gritted out.
She saluted them both." (452 she did hesitantly)
As they made their way out to the yard, Lydecker leading them, they saw the other Manticorians, out there as well.
"Today," he started, "is Special Ops, recruitment. Anybody who makes it all the way, will be known as Special Operation, followed by your barcode. This is a great honor. Do not fail me. We will start with the X5's, then the X6's. Unit 2 will be going first.
"Second in Command 452 against 511 ."
511 swaggered her way up, while 452 blurred up there. As she finally arrived, the fight was on. They both circled each other. 452 made the first move. She blurred forward, with her fist out as to punch him. 511, copying one of her moves, slide to the side, and kick out to the side with her leg.
Noticing this, 452 dropped her punch, and flipped over her leg, and aimed her leg into the other girls stomach, once she landed. 511 double over in pain, as the attack found it target.
452 backed up, as 511 blurred foward. A fist in her hands. 452 allowed her to get close enough before dropping to the floor. Tripping over her S.I.C. and landing on her S.I.C. back was quite, humiliating. But 452 was not finished. She stood up with 511 still on her back, and fell backwards, crushing 511 to the mat floor. She stood up again and punched her in the face. She was knocked out.
"452, has completed the match. Take her to the infermery. Next we have..."
And so it went on. 452 got some injuries, but inflicted much more. It one of the final fights of the day. She stood across from her older sister. Her eyes glazed over as memeries assualted them both. They looked at each other with a smile on their faces. Then took on a fighting stance. 452s face went blank. 734 looked worried. At least they all had a place in special ops. The only question was who would be the leaders.
THANK YOU FOR READING THIS CHAPTER. ANYWAY IF ANYONE OUT THERE HAS ANYTHING THAT THEY THINK THAT I SHOULD ADD PLEASE TELL ME OR SEND ME THE PIECE OF WRITING THAT YOU WOULD LIKE ENTERED IN MY STORY AND I WILL GIVE YOU CREDIT. AND REMEMBER TO ALWAYS READ AND REVIEW.
REVIEWS:
Fallen Angel: Thank you for the review. Max is slowly coming back, and will be coming back a little more at a time. I am going between Alec and Zack at this point. Zack because he has been with Max from the start, and knows more about her. Alec because I like him, as her boyfriend. Logan will be in this fic, but he will get his.
Cora: Thanks for the review. Max will be showing through a little bit at a time. Haven't decided on the ship yet. It won't happen for a while. Or will it. Lydecker knows everything that goes on at manticore. Think of him like a really evil Dumbledore.LOL
Kaite05: Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you are injoying it. If you have any ideas for me, please tell me. Dark Angel Rules.
Inderescent Twilight: Thank you for the review. I hope you liked this chapter. Next chapter, more action, and maybe a little less 452 and a little more maxie...or maybe not.
Lozz422: Thank you for the review. More of Max will filter through eventually. 511 is the Second in Command, female. I already have a name picked out for her though. Can't tell you...because...I don't want to.
willow98002: Thank you for the review. To my knowledge 511 is not biggs. 510 is. If I am wrong, then I will change it at chapter ten.
And thank you to black rose9 and angelofdarkness78.
