HELLO MY DEAR READERS, THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC CALLED DARK ANGEL: 452 OR MAX, IF ANYONE HAS A BETTER NAME PLEASE TELL ME. IN THIS STORY LYDECKER IS STILL IN CHARGE OF MANTICORE, BUT IS AWAY AT THE MOMENT, HE WILL RETURN THOUGH. ADDITIONAL INFORMATION WILL BE ADDED AT ANY TIME. SO I SUGGEST YOU READ THIS IN CASE OF ANY NEW INFORMATIN THAT HAS BEEN ADDED TO MY STORY.

NEW INFO: WHEN I GET TO CHAPTER TEN I WILL BE REVISE CHAPTERS ONE THROUGH TEN, AND ADD NEW INFO TO THE STORY THEN. FOR FULL INFORMATION ON THE X-5'S GO TO x52599 ON THE FF WEBSITE. AS A YOUNG CHILD, FOR SURVIVAL, MAX TO A NUMBER OF MARTIAL ARTS CLASSES. MORE INFO WILL BE ADDED. I ALSO HAVE A YAHOO GROUP WITH PICS OF ALL THE CHARACTERS THAT I HAVE USED SO FAR.

DISCLAIMER:I DO NOT OWN DARK ANGEL, IF I DID THERE WOULD HAVE BEEN A THIRD SEASON.

SUMMARY: ATTHE END OF "AND JESUS BOUGHT A CASSEROLE" OUR FAVORITE SHE-RO X5- 452 OR ALSO KNOWN AS MAX IS CAPTURED. NOT COMPLETEING THE MISSION, THE D.N.A. LAB IS STILL INTACT, AND SHE GETS SHOTS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHEST. ZACK, SYL, KRIT, LOGAN, AND LYDECKER ESCAPED. SHE DIDN'T, THIS IS HER STORY...

CHAPTER: 7

The fight commenced. Punches, kickes, flips, and other styles of fighting were put to use. Both of them were sweaty, but only one came out on top. 734 stood above her younger sister. She had a triamphant smile on her face. Lydecker started walking towards them. That was when she made her move. She moved both her hands, one towards her shin, the other made its way towards the back of 734's knee. She jumped up, and kicked her in the face. 734 was knocked out.

"452 is the winner again. Take 734 to the infermery."

"Next is Commanding Officer 494 against Second in Command 452."

494 smiled at her.

'Better watch my step with her. She tends to fight a little dirty. But I have studied her. I think I can still take her down.'

They circled each other, throwing punches and kicks. Finally 494, blurred foward. 452 moved to the side, and waited for him to get close enough. Once he was a few feet away, she dropped to the ground, and threw her leg out, preforming a well aimedsweep kick.

494 barely seeing this, reacted a few seconds before he would have been brought down. Flipped over it, and landed behind her. He threw a punch to her head. But before it landed, she ducked, grabbed his arm while standing up, and delivered a kick to his ribs.

He jumped back holding his side. He waited for her to do something. She blurred forward, and flipped over his head, which he ducked under. She was not expecting him to deliver a punch to her back. Once back on the ground, she growled at him. She set herself into a differnet fighting stance.

He smiled, thinking that he had her on the run. He blurred foward, fist out in the open, for the win. But she stop him in his tracks. He was suddenlyon the ground whimpering. She had done something so dirty that she should have been sent down to the anomolies. She kicked him in his nuts.

The crowd was quiet. They all looked at him. No-one saw what happened. Slowly his hands went to cover his manly portion of his body. They all gasped and slowly started tolaugh. The female portion at least. The male portion covered theres and winced.

"That is enough!" Yelled Lydecker. "452 is the winner. Somebody go get 494 some ice. The Commanding Officer and the Second in Command of Special will be determined when the rest of the units have gone. Everybody who does not wish to try out, or has already failed return to your unit. For you all who have made it report to cell block 7. Most everybody left.

"Well, I guess we better go." Said 452.

She started to walk away, and the others followed. When they arrived at there new cell, they started into it. It looked more like an apartment then anything. The girls had there own section, as did the boys. They also actually had a toilet, and a kitchen. They sat down in a big padded area, with soft seats.

"I guess I'll start," she said once they all had sat down. "I am X-5 452."

They went around intoducing each other. Two hours had come by, and some more transgenics had come in also. They also introduced themselves. One of the girls started to talk, after walking in and sitting down.

"Well I am from your old unit ma'am. Don't know if you remember me."


"Zack, shes seizing, we have to get her out of her."

"I know, lets give the signal and you cover her I'll lead."

"No, you cover her I'll lead. You know your way around the base better than I do."

"Fine."

He gave the signal to go, and they left. They rounded the corner, and saw a guard with a his big gun pointed at them. The girl shot the gun she had, but got shot in return fire.


"Eva, oh my god, Eva. How are..."

But that was she got out beforethe other girlran into her arms.

"Little sister. I didn't know if you escaped. I was so scared. I had to go through so much. But you and the others es..."

"What are you talking about escape. I only followed orders. We were on a mission, that went sideways. 599 didn't contact me, so I stayed were I was told to. Seattle."

"Psy-ops really did you in didn't they."

But she did not answer. She looked to her other sister, 734 but she gave a shrug. The others introduced themselves. A medium size white male indentified himself as 344. He specialized in recon as well as 291. Whowas a asian female. 510 was also there, as well as 921. 202 introduced herself, with 766, 633. It was then that someone else walked in.

"494, where did you go."

A voice came from behind her.

"452, what are you talking about, I'm right here. Then who is that."

They all looked at the new comer. It was an exact double, of 494. Only the 09ers reconized him though.

"Ben, oh my god, ben. I thought you were dead. I'm so sorry."

"Maxie. Its okay Maxie. They found me and saved me. I don't blame you maxie. I am a good soldier. I didn't tell them anything."

She gave him a hug, while the other 09ers, came and gave them a hug.

"Well this is everybody then." Came a voice from behind them.

Once they saw who it was, they all snapped to attention.

"Very good soldiers. I am currently trying to get you all on a mission. But training comes first. What you have been through so far is nothing. The real training starts soon. 452 is your C.O. and 494 is your S.I.C., dismissed."

Most of them left, while 452, 766, 734, amd 493, were left behind. For hours they talked, about their experiences. Slowly 452s memeries came back. Once again she was Max. But now had a plan in motion. They would all escape, every last transgenic.

FOR PICTURES OF ALL OF THE SPECIAL OPS GO TO MY GROUP. IT HAS PICS OF EVERYBODY THAT I HAVE MENTIONED SO FAR AS WELL AS SPECIAL OP. THANK YOU FOR READING THIS CHAPTER. ANYWAY IF ANYONE OUT THERE HAS ANYTHING THAT THEY THINK THAT I SHOULD ADD PLEASE TELL ME OR SEND ME THE PIECE OF WRITING THAT YOU WOULD LIKE ENTERED IN MY STORY AND I WILL GIVE YOU CREDIT. AND REMEMBER TO ALWAYS READ AND REVIEW.

REVIEWS:

Mands: Thank you for the review. So far, I doubt it will be Max and Alec, but I think you will like who he ends up with. I haven't completetly made up my mind yet.

Cora: Thank you for the review. Thanks for the compliment. If you have any suggestions please tell me.

Angelofdarkness78: Thanks for the review. Max always kicks ass. More so now, than before. It will get better quickly though. Mission time.

BlindAngel: Thanks for the review. That is just the way I do things. Sorry, if it hard for you to read. I only use caps for authors notes, or for yelling. Thanks again, hope you continue to read.

Inderescent Twilight: Thanks for the review. Just having a bit of fun...or am I. LOL

Kaite05: Thanks for the review. Some of the other unit will be in special ops, but not all. Like the ones that are dead (tinga). But some of the ones that died in the pilot are in here. Only one though, I have already mentioned the person. If everbody give me little ideas, I can continue this story much faster.

Willow98002: Thanks for the review. If you can send me that link via email, I can check it out. Thanks. Hope you are injoying it.

Lozz422: Thanks for the review. It most likely will be Max/Zack. But maybe not I haven't completely decided yet. Not all of the unit got into it, but some did. Some of Max's old unit (hint, hint) and two or three of alecs unit. There were other tests, but I have no idea how to write them without copying some other authors works. As for alecs behavior maybe there will be a name change. To...

AND A SPECIAL THANKS TO: Kill Bill Rocks.

IF ANYBODY HAVE ANY IDEAS, OR WRITING THAT THEY WHAT ME TO ADD TELL ME, AND I WILL PROBABLY ADD IT. AS FOR THE TESTS, THERE WERE OTHER TESTS THAT THEY HAD TO PASS, BUT I DONT KNOW HOW TO WRITE THAT WITHOUT TAKING SOMEONE ELSES WORK.