HELLO MY DEAR READERS, THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC CALLED DARK ANGEL: 452 OR MAX, IF ANYONE HAS A BETTER NAME PLEASE TELL ME. ADDITIONAL INFORMATION WILL BE ADDED AT ANY TIME. SO I SUGGEST YOU READ THIS IN CASE OF ANY NEW INFORMATIN THAT HAS BEEN ADDED TO MY STORY.

NEW INFO: WHEN I GET TO CHAPTER TEN I WILL BE REVISE CHAPTERS ONE THROUGH TEN, AND ADD NEW INFO TO THE STORY THEN. FOR FULL INFORMATION ON THE X-5'S GO TO x52599 ON THE FF WEBSITE. I ALSO HAVE A YAHOO GROUP WITH PICS OF ALL THE CHARACTERS THAT I HAVE USED SO FAR.

DISCLAIMER:I DO NOT OWN DARK ANGEL, IF I DID THERE WOULD HAVE BEEN A THIRD SEASON.

SUMMARY: ATTHE END OF "AND JESUS BOUGHT A CASSEROLE" OUR FAVORITE SHE-RO X5- 452 OR ALSO KNOWN AS MAX IS CAPTURED. NOT COMPLETEING THE MISSION, THE D.N.A. LAB IS STILL INTACT, AND SHE GETS SHOTS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHEST. ZACK, SYL, KRIT, LOGAN, AND LYDECKER ESCAPED. SHE DIDN'T, THIS IS HER STORY...

CHAPTER: 10

Our current Commanding Officer has nowbeen driving for about an hour, and was coming up on the welcoming sign, that was placed just on the border-line of Montana. She heard a buzzing sound coming from cell phone. She pushed a key on her phone, which let her talk into her head-set.

"Commanding Officer 452." She spoke into the phone.

"Ma'am, we have succefully landed into Alaska, and are on our way to the base."

"Good," she said, "go about fifteen more klicks, then stop for the night."

"Yes, ma'am. How is everything going with your team."

"Good, we all have purchased vehicles and are meeting in Montana."

"Okay, I will report again in three hours."

"Very good, 494. Stay safe."

"I will. Bye."

"Bye."

'I wonder if he will be okay. He seems to attract trouble, and from what I here, he gets into a lot of compromising situations with females. He better not mess this up.'

She was brought out of her thoughts by another buzzing sound. She answered the phone once again.

"Commanding Officer 452."

"Hey Max its me."

"Hey Jondy. Did you call Zack for me?"

"Yeah, he told me to tell you that he will call you in a few hours. He has already contacted everyone else."

"Good. I need a big favor from you Jond."

"Okay, what is it?"

"I need you to gather everything you can. Things like food, water, electrical supplies. Lydecker kinda gave me the feelin' that something big is going to happen. We are going to need enough for a couple thousand Manticorians. Tell everyone this. Once you have everything head to Seattle, and move into Terminal City. Here are the directions."

"Are you sure about this Maxie? It could be a set up."

"You are right it could. But it is a chance that we will have to take. Once Zack calls I will tell him."

"I'm not sure Maxie."

"Jondy, if you don't do this, and it turns out that I am right, it will mean total exposure. Do you think that ordinaries are going to welcome us with open arms?"

"No. Okay, I'll do it. How long do I have?"

"As soon as possible. Get everything you can, and get out of there. Exposure can happen at anytime. I'll talk to you soon. And please try to rememberyour training, we will all need it.Bye."

"Bye."

She hung up.

'This is getting more complicated by the day. This was supposed to be an easy mission. But the Colonel, had to make it harder, didn't he.'

'Of course he did,' said her other half, 'he loves you. He has done so much for you. Trained you, and given you a life that you wouldn't have had. Guess I had better start looking for a place to stay.'

She looked at places, and finally saw a spacious hotel. She checked in and got three bedrooms, with two beds in each. She called the rest of her team, and gave them the location. Luckily, they were all less than an hour away. She layed on the bed, and let her mind wander.

Time passed quickly. She heard a loud buzzing noise, and picked up her phone.

"Commanding Officer, 452."

"Max...Maxie is that you."

"Zack. Oh my god Zack."

"Maxie. It's great to hear you voice again. Where are you? I can come get you, and move you to a new location."

"I'm sorry Zack, but I am on a mission."

She quickly explained her mission and her plans.

"I'm not sure about this Max, are you sure you can trust him? Are you sure we can trust him? You remember what he did to us."

"Of course I remember. But don't you find it a little weird, that whenever he was testing us on something, there was always somebody with him. Maybe they were watching him. If hereally wantedto kill one of us, he could do it. But he hasn't."

"Yeah, he did. He killed Eva and Jack."

"Eva's alive. He shoot her in the arm, and Jack he had no control over."

"She's alive!"

"Yeah, were meeting at a hotel in Montana in about half an hour. Anyway Lydecker,he raised us, he made us, he looked out for us when we were in danger. He also gave me the Commander Seal."

"He what!"

"I know, but here is what we need to do. Gather every Manticorian and go to Terminal City. I already told Jondy, and she is gathering supplies and is on her way there."

"I don't know Max."

"Look Zack, how about we meet each other. I can bring Brin and everybody else who was in our unit."

"Are you sure...you know how she was?"

"It's okay. Oh and I'll bring Eva andBen too."

"WHAT. Are you sure?"

"Absolutly, they should be here any minute. Why don't we all go out to dinner. We can go onto the base tomorrow, give the message to all of the transgenetics, and be off to the next location."

"Okay. In the mean time, I will call everyone else, and have them gather everything that they can fit in their vehicles. Then send them to T.C."

"Thats great. Have them bring weapons, and we need the whole place fixed up to. We'll talk about it tonight, okay."

"Okay. Lets meet up downstairs. Bye."

"Bye."

Then they hung up.

'Zack. It's been so long. I wonder if he will go along with the plan. I hope so, I don't want to fight tonight. I know that he doesn't trust the Colonel, but he is our only chance. I hope this works out.'

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REVIEWS:

Master and Commander: Listen you self righteous prick. If you do not like my story...guess what don't read it. If you really had the balls to leave such a review, you would have logged in, idiot. Go to hell and don't come back. Asshole. Do not insult my readers. If you did not like it, why did you contiue. I already stated in many chapters, that there would be spelling errors, and that they would be fixed after I finished the first ten chapters. Go to hell.

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Lozz422: Thank you for the review. The reason I typed it that way, is because Max is loyal to Lydecker, she hates Renfro and has the better part of her memery back. She is still the best soldier out there, and has the respect of most of the Manticorians, but some.

Guest Type Person: Thank you for the review. I hope that you continue to read and enjoy. Yes, Max is the smallest of her siblings, but she has always been the most mature between the younger siblings. My friend has all of them listed on his author page x52599. Thanks and keep on reading.

DarkAngel102: Thank you for the review. Yes Logan will be in the story. But I have that all planned out. He will still be in the story, just not playing a really big part.

Shygirl1: Thank you for the review. I wish everyone shared your opinion. Thankfully most do, but I have gotten a couple rude ones. Hope you liked this chapter, enjoy.

Kill Bill Rocks: Thank you for the review wailing uncontrollably, while smiling widly. Thank you so much, I would like to thank well...my imageination. LOL. Yes they are together again, and more appearance by...

Iredescent Twilight: Thank you for the review. It slipped you mind...sssuuurrreee. Save it for as long as you want. Make sure to ask a good one though.

Cora: Thank you for the review. On word, Terminal City. That should be a big hint, Yes they all will be together again. Remember that Zack never sacrificed himself for her. So he already has... you'll see. It will be great. Johndy wont be the only one though.

Angelofdarkness78: Thank you for the review. He may make an appearance next chapter, or five chapters from now...I am not sure yet. And since I am a really nice guy...(ego blowing up, maniac laugh) max is going to do something and put zack through sexual hell.

Blackrose9: Thank you for the review. Max will not be going psyco on him. What he did to max, she has no idea about. All she knows is that Renfro talked to somebody and turned up the pain...that gives me an idea. HEHEHE. Decker and max will have a get together though, after a little fire...

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IF ANYBODY HAVE ANY IDEAS, OR WRITING THAT THEY WHAT ME TO ADD TELL ME, AND I WILL PROBABLY ADD IT. AS FOR THE TESTS, THERE WERE OTHER TESTS THAT THEY HAD TO PASS, BUT I DONT KNOW HOW TO WRITE THAT WITHOUT TAKING SOMEONE ELSES WORK.