Long time no read, huh guys? I guess its not very surprising anymore that I take FORE-FRIKKIN-EVER to update…its been months...heh heh heh…I bet my fans will be like…Oh my god! She updated from 100000 months ago! XD lmao…. ; G-gomen nasai….

Chapter 14:

Bing bong Bing bong

Yusuke stretched his arms in the air "Boy am I bushed…that test took more energy outta me than when I'm saving the world…. This sucks…I know I failed…" Keiko patted Yusuke on the shoulder,

"Hey Yusuke! How did you do?"

Yusuke gave here an evil glare, "How the Hell do you think I did? I did terrible! All that studying…and for WHAT? Nothing! Gah!"

Keiko crossed her arms, "Well, If you spent less time reading manga and sleeping while I was trying to quiz you on some topics, maybe you would have done much better! Hmph!"

"But what about Kuwabara? It looked like he's been studying a lot! He was finished before you were!"

"Hey guys!" Yusuke's eyebrow twitched to that annoying voice that seemed to pierce ones ears when excited…

"Kuwabara…"

"Man! That was some test wasn't it?"

Yusuke pointed to him, "What the hell is wrong with you? Wasn't it hard?"

"Heh heh yeah…I gave up trying on the first question. So I just decided to draw a picture with the dots."

Yusuke falls down anime style, "I knew it…."


Kurama hopped out of a black portal in the sky that was a tunnel that led him into the Makai. He stepped down to the ground with a light tap and he stood up and looked at his surroundings.

Kurama sighed, "I didn't notice how big this world really is…Its going to take forever for me to find him…if he's even down here…" Kurama meshed his hands in his hair as he began to walk in what seemed like a little wasteland. "Now…I haven't been to this part of Makai before…I'm really not sure in which direction I should be headed… Maybe If I---" Kurama's words cut short as he slipped in a puddle of mud that sent him straight into the swamp ahead of him. "Gah! Oh no…my clothes…" Kurama sat in the swamp as he wiped his face. And instead of getting clean, it just smudged the mud around making it dirtier ands dirtier. Man…this isn't working…" He stood up brushing off some of the goop. "This isn't going to work…its not coming off…Its going to be stained..." He shook his hands and wiggled his fingers as he looked ahead of him and sighed, "Well…I'm already a mess…I might as well cross this pond like this…." Kurama made his way across the foggy pond with each and every glompy gloopy step.


"My my my…the sun sure wants to stay up today doesn't it?" Karasu walked around the room with his hands on his hips, flipping his hair out of his face every few steps he took. "Don't you agree Hiei? I mean…there's no way you'll be free until we are satisfied with your sister. And that wont happen until nightfall…" Hiei stared at the ground as he began to grind his teeth as he looked up at Karasu.

"What the Hell do you want me to do! What the FUCK is your problem? Don't you know! Kurama's not coming! He doesn't care for me! Why the Hell would he?" He looked to the side towards the window. "Why the hell would he want to come to rescue me…how the hell would he even know I'm here! I'm Mortal now! He won't be able to feel my spirit energy! Did you ever think of that? Huh, AssWipe?"

Karasu had to laugh at this sight. "Hahahaha! Don't you think we thought of this before hand? We knew he wouldn't be able to feel you without your spirit energy. But Kurama…he…is determined. Determined to get what he wants…. He'll do anything. I should know…He killed me for it…and it…. was you…."

Hiei's eyes opened wide and he took a glance at Karasu. "You remember don't you Hiei?" The truth was…he did remember…he remembered everything…how could he not? Kurama turned Youko and saved him…. But that was then…

Karasu walked towards the door of the cellar. "Well, I must be off. I've got stuff to do. Things to kill. Girls to rape. You know, the usual." He walked out with mechanical laughter covering his mouth with one hand as he slammed the door to Hiei's cellar shut.


Kurama reached the end of the pond and stood on muddy grass. "Hmm…there's no way I'll find him…this place is just too big…." Even though saying that, Kurama went on ahead, cupping his hands by his mouth he started to call out Hiei's name. But…of coarse…no answer…He went further and further into the parts of the Makai that he had never seen before. " Hiei? Hiei? Can you hear me!" Kurama sighed. "Nothing…hm?"

Kurama kneeled down and examined the ground. "What's this?" Kurama reached down and picked up a long white bandage-like cloth. "This is…Hiei's…He used this to wrap his arm…what's it doing here?" Kurama stood up and clenched it in his fist. "Well, no matter. I'm getting close." Kurama began to walk slowly checking his surroundings making sure not to get lost. "Going through all this trouble…I feel like a stalker of some kind…Maybe If I just waited in the Ningenkai, Hiei might have just come back…" Kurama tucked the bandage away in his pocket and sighed, "Maybe he just really needs his space…I wouldn't come back if I would have seen what he saw…I bet I can guess exactly what he feels like right n…" Kurama stopped as he squinted through the fog and leaned in closer. "What's that? A building?" He took a few steps closer. "A…castle? Its humungous! What's a castle like this doing so far out in the Makai." Kurama walked closer and examined it amazed at the size and location of it. "Its very complex. Pretty…in a crappy sort of way…" Kurama stepped back and scratched the back of his head, "Ah, I have no time for this now, its not like he would be in there anyway…"

"Damn, This is really a bother." Yomi and Karasu stepped out onto the balcony of the castle front.

"Yomi? What? Karasu, too?" Kurama ducked around a corner of the castle and peeked around. "I don't believe this! I-I swear! I killed him! How can Karasu still be alive?" Kurama's heart started racing as he kneeled onto the grass and eavesdrops onto their conversation."

"Calm down will you now Karasu? You'll get what you want soon enough…Just quit whining."

Karasu leaned against the rail facing Yomi, "You keep on saying that. But how do I know your plan will really work? I hate waiting!"

Yomi rolled his eyes moving in closer to Karasu as he leaned into him, lifting his chin with his finger and stared into Karasu's eyes with a cold stare. "What? You don't believe me? I may not have created you, but I brought you back to life, and I can certainly send you back to hell."

Kurama covered his mouth, "Yomi did this? He actually revived Karasu? But...how? He doesn't have a scratch on him! Its like I never even touched him!" He gazed up with a stare of astonishment and anger; he didn't know which to feel at the moment.

Karasu turned his head to the side, "I-I know that! You don't have to tell me twice."

Yomi put a smirk on his face and leaned in closer to Karasu wrapping an arm around his waist, still staring in his eyes."

Karasu felt a tint of blush cross his face as he pushed Yomi back. "G-Get the hell offa me! What the fuck do you think you're doing!" Karasu moved to the other part of the rail still looking at Yomi with anger on his face.

Yomi shrugged, " What's the problem."

"Don't act coy with me! You're not supposed to touch me like that! That wasn't part of the deal at all."

Yomi laughed behind his hand, "You don't have to be so innocent! Because even I know that you are not."

"Shut the hell up. The only one I want is Kurama, and THAT'S IT! I didn't come here to be raped by you like that boy and his sister, ok! Me and you are just business…and nothing else, you got that?"

Kurama looked to the ground, "Boy and his sister? Who are they talking about? Raped? What are they up to?"

Yomi began to walk back inside the castle and stopped, "Aaaw Karasu, it sounds like true love." Yomi laughed and put a hand on his hip, "You really are just a poor lonely innocent guy aren't you. You not fooling me. I know what you want, and just how you like it. Just because We have Hiei and Yukina here, doesn't mean we have to behave in front of the children." Yomi smiled as he put a finger up to his temple, "Bang." And walked back inside.

Karasu flicked up his middle finger, "God dammit Yomi! That's my frikkin signature! Don't use it if you don't know how!" Karasu crossed his arms and pouted as he made his way into the castle. "And don't think that you know so much about me either. It's really aggravating."

Kurama rested his back against the castle wall staring into space with his eyes wide open and his whole body quivered, "H-Hiei…Yukina? I-d-don't under…stand…what…what are they doing in there? I don't…" Kurama slowly wobbles as he tries to stand clinging onto the castles bricks. "They're in there…" Kurama looks back up to the balcony, "I have to go in there…If they did anything to hurt them at all…I'll show no mercy…

TO BE CONTINUED >>>>>>