Thanks for all the reviews. Glad you liked my first poem! Hope you guys like this one. Just made it off the top of my head. Thought it was a good idea. Hope you enjoy! And what do ya know…it's about friends.
FriendsA friend has more meaning
Than what it seems to be
A person may be leading
Others other than to be free
Trust I want in all of them
To hug and to hold
More than just a friend
Have I been told?
Lost in the anger of words and scars
Fought side by side
But only to see the stars?
Must a friendship be liquefied
Once it has so far gone together?
I do not know what has become
If you cannot trust me now…or ever
We must go on
Hand in hand
As so long
Our friendship doesn't end
If we are to know
Us five standing here
What will it show?
When it comes to be near
What are we destined to become
Of one silent tear?
What would be won?
If we don't have each other here
What would be clear?
Beside the blocking fog
In a deathly bog
But to only cause the fear?
A friend has more meaning
Than just a pitiful word
It may even be one day seeming
To be nothing but absurd!
But no, dear friends
It is more than that
It is more if we sat
And listened to each other
Breathing
It is more if we sat
And listened to each other living…
Special thanks to Kali Donovan, The Last, and Psycho-Freak-Chick. All your reviews really do help me make these poems great for you guys.
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