This is not going to be the first Marauders story I write, and I doubt it will be the last. The problem is that I never stay interested long enough. I'm planning on actually finishing this story for a change. I'd appreciate reviews and tips on how to improve my story. Thanks.
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter or any of the original characters. But I do own the plot ( or half of it), Leslie and Cheryl and any other thing or characters that you don't recognize.
Summary: Lily Evans comes to Hogwarts alone with only a pink and fluffy diary. In it she writes all the friends, adventures and loves she gains and loses. And helps someone come to the conclusion that, no matter what, the past never dies.
Chapter One: Owls, letters and Happy Birthday
The alarm was set to ring at exactly 10:27. So that when'd newly 11 year old Lillian Evans got up, her mother would already have her cake and her presents in order.
But as any birthday girl Lily was awake hours before that. On her bed dresses, skirts, pants and t-shirts laid along with millions of other things.
Lily was going crazy with so many clothing to choose from and because she had nothing to wear.
She finally settled to a green skirt and a white shirt that said Sweet Flower. Along with a par of white Mary Jane's with a green streak on the side.
She ran to her parents room to see her self in her mom's big mirror. She made a complicated pony tale with her long, dark red hair and used her mothers flower pendant to give her look a final touch.
She went back to her room and sat on her bed. She looked around with glee and some unexplainable feeling filling her inside. She closed her eyes as she laid her head over her white pillow.
"LILY! BREAKFAST IS READY!"
Lily ran to the kitchen to find that on top of the table was a small kitty. It was white, totally white with no exceptions.
Her mother stood beside it, smiling with her always warm smile.
Lily screamed as she ran to grab the kitty but it got scared and ran away making Lily chasse it all over the house.
Later on( after she caught the kitty)
Lily sat on her bed, hearing India purr as she stroke her furr.
She sat in silence until she heard a small sound coming from her window.
She got up, putting India aside and walked up to the window. There she found a black…owl…holing an old looking letter. She was a bit scared to open the window but as time slowly went by she got the obvious point that the owl wouldn't go away until she got the letter.
So, she slowly opened her window and the owl flew into her room and stopped on her desk.
She grabbed the letter and with shock she read:
Dear Miss Evans
We are please to inform you that you have been accepted in Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
End of Chapter One
Wow…I really hate to write first chapters. Well, would you be so kind to review?
