Yay, my first official ficcie!(beams)please please pretty please...read and review it!um..by the way, it's a one-shot.take note!
WARNING: THIS IS A SHOUNEN-AI FIC!DON'T LIKE DON'T READ, DON'T FLAME!YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!IF YOU READ, DON'T FLAME.
the '...' in italics are flashback thingies..
...- Shuiichi talkin(in his mind or out)
(...) Youko.
"..." normal conversation...
Listen to The Sound of A Bleeding Heart
A drop of tear against the cold marble tile. What a heartbreak it signifies. All the pain, anguish, heartache and sorrow contained in a single drop of moisture that could be mistaken as water.
'I don't feel the same.'
Fists clenched, willing the owner futilely not to shed anymore tears for that single statement.
-Where, where was I not good enough? What had I done other than being there for him? Why wasn't I good enough?-
The innocent remark of a broken heart.
(It wasn't us! It was him! We did no wrong, Shuiichi. Stop crying like a ningen!)
The defensive snarl of a counterpart, partly comforting, yet also in pain.
'Hn, if you think I care for you, you're wrong. Get lost.'
The slim figure in the corner of the room covered his ears from some unknown noise that was clearly aggravating him.
- No! Not this again! Stop! Stop it! Just…stop…-
A dull flash could be seen in the dim lighting of the room.
- Anything, anything to make it stop…-
(You're being rash! You can't live through this!)
Tears fell.
'I don't want to hear that again. Not from someone so treacherous. Like you.'
- So be it. I forsake my life.-
(Weak being. You're allowing your feelings to rule your judgment).
An accusation, born out of sorrow and anguish shared with his half, as well as his youko pride, brought forth painful memories of smoldering cold crimson eyes.
'Human emotions? You're weak. Get over it.
- Please, just let it go. Let me go.-
Silence.
Footsteps headed into the small undecorated bathroom.
The sound of water flowing from a tap.
(Shuiichi, stop!)
Clear water flowed.
-No…-
Tinged with a pinkish colour.
(No!)
Crimson.
A weak smile.
-No more pain-
(Hiei!)
A black blur slammed into thewindow, shattering it upon impact,and burst into the darkened room. Usually passive eyes widened in shock as they perceived crimson against crimson.
He ran towards the redhead and, with some effort, managed to stop the bleeding.
A weak voice.
"Hiei…?"
Two figures melded into one as the dark knight held his love closer to him.
"I'm sorry, I lied."
/ Owari/
Author's notes: O.O oh my...i actually wrote that...i didn't mean to..
(Rambling was cut off by a "JAOU ENSATSU KOKURYUHA!")
A crispy critter once known as a fic writer : Please review..
Hiei: Hn.
P.S: If you are interested in poetry stuff, i really hope you can check out my account. my penname is silveryoukoshinomori.
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