Over 100 reviews! (Swoons and almost squishes Pie who bites her) Ow! Thank you everyone who has reviewed. I would write you all personal replies but then they'd be longer than the epilogue.
Some liked the romance scene, others didn't and you can never please everyone so I'm just going to leave it as it is and endeavour to do better next time. I tried to incorporate all the things people wanted here. I really appreciated all constructive criticism. Sorry it took so long for me to put this up. I wasn't purposely ignoring everyone. I just had exams and was forbidden from going on the laptop but I've finished now. So here you are.
Zing! Zing! A Luke Skywalker look alike whirled his light sabre. It crashed into a red one held by a Darth Vader figure.
"I'll never give in. You killed my Father."
"No Luke, I am your father." (A/N There you go Mary-Lou)
"Nooooooooo!"
Darth Vader shut off the light sabre and took off his helmet revealing a dishevelled Jareth.
"I don't think I'll ever understand why you insist on playing this."
Toby shut off his light sabre and grinned.
"Aww c'mon. 'Star Wars' is great, especially when we play it in here." He gestured to the Escher room.
"Here you are!" Sarah exclaimed walking through one of the doorways. "I might have known."
11-year-old Toby gave a cheeky smile.
"You know Jareth does have a kingdom to run and I need him to go over some work with me."
Toby sighed, "That's so boring."
"And where are our children?" Sarah put on a mock serious tone.
"Oh Cub said he'd watch them." Jareth replied.
There was a happy yip and Cub trotted in at the side of a giggling three year old girl with mahogany hair and mismatched eyes. Behind them was Fang with a baby boy on his back.
Jareth picked up their daughter and Sarah picked up their son.
"Now about this paperwork…"
Summery: Toby stayed in the underground with Sarah and Jareth. Sarah and Jareth got married and had a daughter followed by a son. And they all lived happily ever after. The End.
Man I am so kicking myself for asking if people wanted an epilogue. But I hope that satisfied everyone. I know it sounds rushed and may be a tad patronising but I said I couldn't do epilogues so there. I did warn you. By the way if you hate this I will go cry in a corner somewhere. Just kidding, Fang and Pie would bite me till I got out and typed more so no worries. I do want constructive criticism, especially if it helps my writing.
My next fanfiction is almost ready.
Thank you all for reviewing. Ciao.
