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Jason: Thank you and I will keep writing as long as people read it.
Konami Ishtar: Well I'm glade you think it is cool, and I hope you will like his chapter.
Finnigan Irish: Thank you and I do hope that they can bring people back from the dead too, I guess we just to wait and see.
Kaylee-Smith: I'm happy that the idea of immortal Harry is new to you, because I was afraid that I would be accidentally copying someone and I'm interested that you are interested in this story.
Chapter 2
"What?!?" I said in pure shock. The possibility to bring people back from the dead unimaginable and understandably I was shocked and almost relieved like there was a chance to maybe seek some forgiveness that would be bring me a little peace from this endless guilt I felt. Though the sensible part of me kept telling me this was impossible. Then what felt like eternity but was really only 59 seconds Talon spoke.
"I'm sorry, Harry, I didn't mean to get short fused but the other immortals and I were excited when we found this out and we thought that you would finally meet your friends again, then you can let go some of the guilt you hold."
"Talon if you can bring people back from the dead why haven't the other immortals done it already, I mean I know for a fact that all of you have lost loved ones in an untimely death." I said, trying to be logical even though secretly praying that this impossible thing could happen.
"Simple Harry, the closest friends you had fell thru the veil and you can only bring people back from the veil." The moment that was said all you heard was the crack of a whip and I was in the Department of Mysteries with all the immortals looking at me and Talon still on her cell phone smirking.
"Talon," I said to the tall woman "don't say a thing." And the look I gave her confirmed that I was here to help the world even though this seems illogical, but of course secretly my hopes were strong.
"Okay, Harry, but do you want to know why you're allowed to go thru the veil and back?" said a women with black hair like Talon but her face had more of a strict feeling to it.
"Yes, Skye, I do, now can you tell me." I said to her and she smiled with happiness for my curiosity.
"Fine." She said her smile ended and her tone gain one of a teacher teaching a long lesson in history. "The veil as you know traps the soul and body of the mortal who falls in, but we speculate that an immortal can go in and return body and soul intact and with other people soul and body too if the immortal is somehow toughing the person or the person is toughing the person who is toughing the immortal."
"So," I said, sighing, "You want me to play lab rat and try my luck."
"Yes," said not a women but a man with blond hair, narrow face that naturally had a smirk on it, and steely blue eyes that gave the deception of this man of being ruthlessly cruel; which was the opposite on how he acted in general.
"Okay I will, but I am curious - what will Fudge think of this experimentation, I mean this is in his own governmental building?" After I said that the look that the 4 immortals in this room resembled one that Ron and Hermoine would give me if they were going to reveal something that would get me pretty mad and do something reckless and probably; stupid. "Okay tell what you are hiding Seth, or anyone else in this bloody room." I waited for my blond-headed friend, Seth, to answer, but yet instead of him the final person in this room answered, her tall frame and brown eyes matching her brown curly hair showed uneasiness.
"Harry, Fudge knows about this possibility since he was in office and told us only a couple of days ago about this idea." After Joan said that I was at the least enraged. All the years that they could have been out of that cursed veil was gone and can never be retrieved, but running into Jonathon Fudge's office and giving him a piece of my mind would also waste time.
"Okay, now if you excuse me I will be entering into the veil." With that I walked over to the veil and entered but instead of the veil pulling me in - it felt like it was trying to push me out. Like I was not welcome and did not belong, of course I didn't. That is the price of immortality, never truly living.
When I enter, the first thing I notice was the atmosphere- it looked well alike a prison. All over the walls of the cavern that was inside the veil were cells stock full of humans. I couldn't see but the insides of a few cells. However, I could hear every moan and scream both sane and insane. Even though I could see no end to the cells - each cell was packed full of people. I shudder at the site, then all of a sudden a voice - one of age and command, I quickly placed the hood over my head to hide my face for no reason and I turned to face him with my wand out.
"We have been expecting you Mister Potter," said not a man of entrapment but a black winged guard with an Irish accent, "you are here to pick up your friends."
"Yes, but I am curious why are you not attacking me? Are you not the guard?" As I said this he laughed hard.
"Why should I attack an immortal Mister Potter? You have been destined to save 5 people from here and it is smart of you to hide your face from them." I sighed in agreement it was true it was smart to hide my face for them, though from fear not for their safety.
"Now," I said looking at him with a tone of determination and professionalism. "Can you take me to them, sir?"
"Yes; but what should I call you when we are in front of them? I mean I could call you Dragonlord, or Wolf from your animangus form, or-"
"Just call me from the job I was given by destiny; Guardian or by what I am Immortal. The choice is yours to give, tainted angel." He gave me a wry smile with my comment.
"I see you know your mythical creatures well, Immortal, but you also know you are a tainted creature as well. Not just in dragonlord blood, but also in immortality. You know that Immortal that no human is ageless?" I was happy at that moment that my hood covered my face, for if it was not he would have seen the guilt and disgust myself on my face.
"Yes." With that we started walking. A pregnant silence hung in the air and gave it the feeling that it was impossible to breath in it. After what seemed years we reach a rusted door with the words the holding cell etched into the old steel.
"I'll wait here," The tainted angel said bringing me out of the trance that the silence brought on. "The door will open for you and take your time to ask what you need." I sighed and gathered my courage, for this at of all the 5020 years I lived was the scariest thing to do. Then I opened the door and went in.
Inside there was only one cell and in that cell were 5 people; Ron, Hermoine, Ginny, Remus, and Sirius. I gasped and was in near shock for they look like they hadn't age a day since they came into the veil. They even were wearing the same clothes that I last saw them in. The noise that came from opening the door brought their undivided attention to me and I thanked God that I had my face covered.
"How long have you been here?" I said breaking the silence.
"Who are you?" was the responds from Sirius.
"That is not important what is that I can get you out of here but first I need to ask a few questions like how long have you been here." "Well," said Ron suspiciously, "Sirius has been here for 2 year and the rest including me have been here 1 year and Sirius is the one-"
"I know who you are." I sighed inwardly for they did not know how long they were truly there. "Now the next question is for Remus will you answer?"
"Fine but only if you promise to get us out of here, all of us need to get back to thing and a year or two will really make it difficult to return to it." As he said it he gave me a defiant look and I couldn't help but smirk at this.
"Sure, now Remus how did you get in here?" Even though I knew this I wanted to know his view of the story and if they hate me for causing this.
"Well he-who-must-not-be-named sent a henchman to hurt Hogwarts so my student Harry Potter with the help of other students went to stop him, and even though he is strong he is not near enough trained to defeat this minion of the dark lord. So I followed him and when I got there he was barely keeping his friends alive and himself, so I jump in and fought this henchman but I was no match so finally I ordered Harry to leave. The problem was that he wouldn't leave without his friends, so they made a huge choice to let him leave without them and to get thrown into the veil with me, and when we were thrown in we passed out and awoke here." With that Remus ended his story and he sighed. "I hope that Harry made it out of there alive, the world needs him."
"So" I said in curiosity "do you hate this Harry Potter?" With that he gave me the strangest look ever, probably for acting like I did not know myself.
"No I don't and none of us do now will you let us be free, stranger?"
"Yes and I will lead you out with the help of a tainted angel." With that I opened the door to the cage and they followed me out to where the tainted angel was.
"I have them free, will you helps us out of here...O - one with wings?" He gave me a smirk from my proper naming and replied.
"O yes Immortal and thy name is Enoch just to let you know. Now follow me, Immortal." With that we followed. Enoch and I were silent but the rest were not.
"Who is the one with the hood?" said Ron
"If I knew I would tell you," said Hermoine annoyed "but by the sounds of it he is immortal so is not human. Another thing is that he is getting us out of here so we should just be quiet so as not to anger him."
"I know that but what if he is a dementor and will give us the kiss when we get out." When I heard Ron said that I replied coldly.
"I am only immortal and have no wish to kiss you for more then one reason." I was guessing the look that Ron had was priceless, for Ginny and Hermoine were giggling. The rest of the way was in silence then we made it to the entrance.
"Now," said the tainted angel, "each of you must be either touching the immortal or touching a person who is touching the immortal when you leave the veil, now I take my leave but remember Immortal that being inhuman will save the lives to all you protect." With that he disappeared and then everyone grab on and we went thru the veil and into the real world.
It must have been hours - for the early morning had turned to late night, but the immortals were still there, waiting. As I entered the room they stop what they were doing and just stared form shock of actually bringing people from the dead. Then the pain from my wound kick in and blood started dripping onto the floor but that did not bother me but it did bothered Talon and to my worst fears she said the one thing that would blow my cover.
"Harry James Potter you went into the veil while injured?!?!"
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Well that ends chapter 2 I hope you enjoy please review but do not flame. Now last chapter 1 promise that I would give you the couples that you can vote on so here they are:
Harry/Hermoine Harry/Ginny Harry/Talon
Now those are the couples you can vote on to have now I will update in about a week because I am leaving for a week on Sunday but I promise I will update as soon as I get back. So until then be safe and review but do not flame thank you.
Jason: Thank you and I will keep writing as long as people read it.
Konami Ishtar: Well I'm glade you think it is cool, and I hope you will like his chapter.
Finnigan Irish: Thank you and I do hope that they can bring people back from the dead too, I guess we just to wait and see.
Kaylee-Smith: I'm happy that the idea of immortal Harry is new to you, because I was afraid that I would be accidentally copying someone and I'm interested that you are interested in this story.
Chapter 2
"What?!?" I said in pure shock. The possibility to bring people back from the dead unimaginable and understandably I was shocked and almost relieved like there was a chance to maybe seek some forgiveness that would be bring me a little peace from this endless guilt I felt. Though the sensible part of me kept telling me this was impossible. Then what felt like eternity but was really only 59 seconds Talon spoke.
"I'm sorry, Harry, I didn't mean to get short fused but the other immortals and I were excited when we found this out and we thought that you would finally meet your friends again, then you can let go some of the guilt you hold."
"Talon if you can bring people back from the dead why haven't the other immortals done it already, I mean I know for a fact that all of you have lost loved ones in an untimely death." I said, trying to be logical even though secretly praying that this impossible thing could happen.
"Simple Harry, the closest friends you had fell thru the veil and you can only bring people back from the veil." The moment that was said all you heard was the crack of a whip and I was in the Department of Mysteries with all the immortals looking at me and Talon still on her cell phone smirking.
"Talon," I said to the tall woman "don't say a thing." And the look I gave her confirmed that I was here to help the world even though this seems illogical, but of course secretly my hopes were strong.
"Okay, Harry, but do you want to know why you're allowed to go thru the veil and back?" said a women with black hair like Talon but her face had more of a strict feeling to it.
"Yes, Skye, I do, now can you tell me." I said to her and she smiled with happiness for my curiosity.
"Fine." She said her smile ended and her tone gain one of a teacher teaching a long lesson in history. "The veil as you know traps the soul and body of the mortal who falls in, but we speculate that an immortal can go in and return body and soul intact and with other people soul and body too if the immortal is somehow toughing the person or the person is toughing the person who is toughing the immortal."
"So," I said, sighing, "You want me to play lab rat and try my luck."
"Yes," said not a women but a man with blond hair, narrow face that naturally had a smirk on it, and steely blue eyes that gave the deception of this man of being ruthlessly cruel; which was the opposite on how he acted in general.
"Okay I will, but I am curious - what will Fudge think of this experimentation, I mean this is in his own governmental building?" After I said that the look that the 4 immortals in this room resembled one that Ron and Hermoine would give me if they were going to reveal something that would get me pretty mad and do something reckless and probably; stupid. "Okay tell what you are hiding Seth, or anyone else in this bloody room." I waited for my blond-headed friend, Seth, to answer, but yet instead of him the final person in this room answered, her tall frame and brown eyes matching her brown curly hair showed uneasiness.
"Harry, Fudge knows about this possibility since he was in office and told us only a couple of days ago about this idea." After Joan said that I was at the least enraged. All the years that they could have been out of that cursed veil was gone and can never be retrieved, but running into Jonathon Fudge's office and giving him a piece of my mind would also waste time.
"Okay, now if you excuse me I will be entering into the veil." With that I walked over to the veil and entered but instead of the veil pulling me in - it felt like it was trying to push me out. Like I was not welcome and did not belong, of course I didn't. That is the price of immortality, never truly living.
When I enter, the first thing I notice was the atmosphere- it looked well alike a prison. All over the walls of the cavern that was inside the veil were cells stock full of humans. I couldn't see but the insides of a few cells. However, I could hear every moan and scream both sane and insane. Even though I could see no end to the cells - each cell was packed full of people. I shudder at the site, then all of a sudden a voice - one of age and command, I quickly placed the hood over my head to hide my face for no reason and I turned to face him with my wand out.
"We have been expecting you Mister Potter," said not a man of entrapment but a black winged guard with an Irish accent, "you are here to pick up your friends."
"Yes, but I am curious why are you not attacking me? Are you not the guard?" As I said this he laughed hard.
"Why should I attack an immortal Mister Potter? You have been destined to save 5 people from here and it is smart of you to hide your face from them." I sighed in agreement it was true it was smart to hide my face for them, though from fear not for their safety.
"Now," I said looking at him with a tone of determination and professionalism. "Can you take me to them, sir?"
"Yes; but what should I call you when we are in front of them? I mean I could call you Dragonlord, or Wolf from your animangus form, or-"
"Just call me from the job I was given by destiny; Guardian or by what I am Immortal. The choice is yours to give, tainted angel." He gave me a wry smile with my comment.
"I see you know your mythical creatures well, Immortal, but you also know you are a tainted creature as well. Not just in dragonlord blood, but also in immortality. You know that Immortal that no human is ageless?" I was happy at that moment that my hood covered my face, for if it was not he would have seen the guilt and disgust myself on my face.
"Yes." With that we started walking. A pregnant silence hung in the air and gave it the feeling that it was impossible to breath in it. After what seemed years we reach a rusted door with the words the holding cell etched into the old steel.
"I'll wait here," The tainted angel said bringing me out of the trance that the silence brought on. "The door will open for you and take your time to ask what you need." I sighed and gathered my courage, for this at of all the 5020 years I lived was the scariest thing to do. Then I opened the door and went in.
Inside there was only one cell and in that cell were 5 people; Ron, Hermoine, Ginny, Remus, and Sirius. I gasped and was in near shock for they look like they hadn't age a day since they came into the veil. They even were wearing the same clothes that I last saw them in. The noise that came from opening the door brought their undivided attention to me and I thanked God that I had my face covered.
"How long have you been here?" I said breaking the silence.
"Who are you?" was the responds from Sirius.
"That is not important what is that I can get you out of here but first I need to ask a few questions like how long have you been here." "Well," said Ron suspiciously, "Sirius has been here for 2 year and the rest including me have been here 1 year and Sirius is the one-"
"I know who you are." I sighed inwardly for they did not know how long they were truly there. "Now the next question is for Remus will you answer?"
"Fine but only if you promise to get us out of here, all of us need to get back to thing and a year or two will really make it difficult to return to it." As he said it he gave me a defiant look and I couldn't help but smirk at this.
"Sure, now Remus how did you get in here?" Even though I knew this I wanted to know his view of the story and if they hate me for causing this.
"Well he-who-must-not-be-named sent a henchman to hurt Hogwarts so my student Harry Potter with the help of other students went to stop him, and even though he is strong he is not near enough trained to defeat this minion of the dark lord. So I followed him and when I got there he was barely keeping his friends alive and himself, so I jump in and fought this henchman but I was no match so finally I ordered Harry to leave. The problem was that he wouldn't leave without his friends, so they made a huge choice to let him leave without them and to get thrown into the veil with me, and when we were thrown in we passed out and awoke here." With that Remus ended his story and he sighed. "I hope that Harry made it out of there alive, the world needs him."
"So" I said in curiosity "do you hate this Harry Potter?" With that he gave me the strangest look ever, probably for acting like I did not know myself.
"No I don't and none of us do now will you let us be free, stranger?"
"Yes and I will lead you out with the help of a tainted angel." With that I opened the door to the cage and they followed me out to where the tainted angel was.
"I have them free, will you helps us out of here...O - one with wings?" He gave me a smirk from my proper naming and replied.
"O yes Immortal and thy name is Enoch just to let you know. Now follow me, Immortal." With that we followed. Enoch and I were silent but the rest were not.
"Who is the one with the hood?" said Ron
"If I knew I would tell you," said Hermoine annoyed "but by the sounds of it he is immortal so is not human. Another thing is that he is getting us out of here so we should just be quiet so as not to anger him."
"I know that but what if he is a dementor and will give us the kiss when we get out." When I heard Ron said that I replied coldly.
"I am only immortal and have no wish to kiss you for more then one reason." I was guessing the look that Ron had was priceless, for Ginny and Hermoine were giggling. The rest of the way was in silence then we made it to the entrance.
"Now," said the tainted angel, "each of you must be either touching the immortal or touching a person who is touching the immortal when you leave the veil, now I take my leave but remember Immortal that being inhuman will save the lives to all you protect." With that he disappeared and then everyone grab on and we went thru the veil and into the real world.
It must have been hours - for the early morning had turned to late night, but the immortals were still there, waiting. As I entered the room they stop what they were doing and just stared form shock of actually bringing people from the dead. Then the pain from my wound kick in and blood started dripping onto the floor but that did not bother me but it did bothered Talon and to my worst fears she said the one thing that would blow my cover.
"Harry James Potter you went into the veil while injured?!?!"
.............................................................................................................
Well that ends chapter 2 I hope you enjoy please review but do not flame. Now last chapter 1 promise that I would give you the couples that you can vote on so here they are:
Harry/Hermoine Harry/Ginny Harry/Talon
Now those are the couples you can vote on to have now I will update in about a week because I am leaving for a week on Sunday but I promise I will update as soon as I get back. So until then be safe and review but do not flame thank you.
