Hello again. I'm back, just needed a break in order to get ready for school. I have a headache now, but I'll try my best in writing this chapter. Argh, it's almost too hard to write…
By the way, there is a difference between a flame and constructive critisism. I love constructive criticism, actually. They help me improve.
P.S. the pic that didn't work last time: (copy and paste)
---Kouji Tamino
Love Hina Next: Second Phase
Week 2, Day 11: Getting to Know Each Other. (Return to Hinata House, Part 2)
Shinichi yawned, slowly opening one eyebrow. In the days since the girls had arrived in his mansion, his hair style had become less 'fancy' looking. His hair was now drooping every which way and no longer slicked back. Anyway, he opened the other eye, and finally noticed that someone had been watching him sleep and was about to kiss him. He screamed, jumping from his futon. "Kyyyyyaaaaahhhh!!!! What the hell do you think you're doing??!!!"
Nina pouted, dressed in a very small red dress. She had let her hair out and had matured quite well, physically. It was making Shinichi a bit nervous. "Awww… I was just gonna kiss ya!" She giggled. "You're kind of cute! Keitaro's too old and married, Yamato's also taken, and that one kid is too young…"
Shinichi sweat dropped. "So I'm just on the rebound, huh?… Sounds about right…"
Downstairs, Ami was snuggling against Yamato. "So, Yamato-sama… How have you been lately?" She cooed softly, smiling.
Yamato raised an eyebrow. "I'm fine… How about you?"
Ami sighed in bliss, sitting up and sniffing his hair. "I'm just great…"
"Ahem…" Tokimi walked into the lounge, holding some boxes. "Tone it down, Ami… He's engaged, he can't do that anymore…" She glared at her fiancé. "Right, dear?…"
Yamato chuckled. "Um, yeah…"
Ami pouted. "Awww… But it doesn't hurt to dream, right?…"
Yamato sighed. "Ami, you're gonna have to get over me someday… You can easily get any guy now, I mean look at you! You went from 'cutie' to 'hottie'! If I wasn't in love with Tokimi, I'd sure hit it!" He groaned as Tokimi and Ami both punched him in the head from both sides. "What'd I say?!"
"Pervert!" they both screamed, then giggled.
Tokimi hugged Ami. "It's so great to see you again! Look at you! I remember when you came to Hinata house as a little girl! The boys still eyeing you like crazy?"
Ami smiled. "Yeah…" her smile quickly turned into a frown. "But that's what keeping me from keeping a study job… random creeps, customers, even my employers harass me and occasionally try to use me for sexual favors…"
Yamato snarled, pounding his right hand into his left fist. "Who the hell is it?! Tell me and I'll tear their balls off!"
Ami smiled nervously, sweat dropping. "Um, no… That's not necessary… I already took care of them…" She smirked, her aura appearing. "In my own way…"
Tokimi burst out laughing. "That's our Ami…"
"Yes, it's nice to see that you're not letting the 'normal people' take advantage of you…" Meiruuna muttered, walking in and smiling. "So, want to take a bath with me? It'll be like old times…"
Ami gave her twin a suspicious look. "Just as long as you don't do anything freaky like in the old days…"
Meiruuna grinned. "Why sister, whatever do you mean?…"
Ami sighed and slipped into the water. "As nice as the bath at Shinichi-kun's place is, there's just something about the old bath at Hinata House that makes me feel… I dunno…"
Meiruuna sighed. "How do you do it?"
Ami looked to her sister in confusion. "How do you get so many guys after you?"
Ami shrugged. "I don't know… to tell the truth, I'm starting to really hate the attention. "
Meiruuna huffed, crossing her arms. "Bitch. I want that attention, damn it! I want to be loved!!"
Suddenly, Rikina walked in in nothing but a towel. She took one look at Meiruuna and turned around in order to escape. Too late. Meiruuna already spotted her.
Meiruuna chuckled sadistically. "If I can't have love, I'll settle for lust. Get your sexy tanned ass back over here, Rikina…" She reached around on the ground and picked up a banana. "I've got a fresh banana left over from breakfast, and I don't intend of eating it…"
Ami's eyes widened and she ran out of the bathroom. "My sister's sooo weird…"
Ami sighed as she walked out of the bathroom, fully clothed. Keitaro, Yamato, and Shinichi were on the couch, talking. She watched Negi walk towards the bathroom and she mentally stopped him. "Just where do you think you're going?"
Negi smiled. "Maehara-san cooked a really good breakfast! I was just going to wash my hands!"
Ami coughed. "I don't think you want to go in there…"
Negi blinked innocently. "Um, why?"
Suddenly, Rikina's screams could be heard from the bathroom. "Oh god, yes!!! Yes, yes! Harder! That's the spot! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!"
Everyone sweat dropped. Meiruuna began screaming too. "Ungh!! Yeah!! Take it!! Take it all in!! Yes!! So good! God!"
Everyone sweat dropped again, the three older men crossing their legs awkwardly and going about their business.
Back down at the Café, business was once again booming. Sarah and Nina laughed as they raked in tons of cash. "Nina, I don't know what the hell you're doing to cause all this, but keep it up!"
Nina giggled. "It must be my new super sexy charm…" Nina winked and pouted her lips, pink with lipstick, driving the guys wild. They tossed $50 dollar bills at her with screams of 'Keep the change!' Nina grinned, blushing. "I feel so loved…"
Back at the Suichi Mansion, the older women were all starving, ready to strangle Naoko. "Sis, please be reasonable…"
Naoko shook her head. "No way! We're not eating until Shin-sama, Ami-san, and Negi-kun get back!"
"But they've been gone for 2 days…" Megumi groaned, her stomach beginning to eat itself. "If you keep this crap up…"
"… We'll die…" Sakura finished. "And then who will cook for Shinichi-sama, Ami-san, and Negi-bozu then?"
Naoko gasped, then began to stammer. "Uh, uh, um…"
"That's right, NO ONE." Junko yelled. "And then they'll die too!" Junko picked up her younger sister by the collar in temporary insanity. "FEEED UUUUSSS!!!"
Naoko began to whimper. "Ju-Junko-neesan…"
Junko sighed, putting her little sister down. "I'm sorry…"
"What will we do now?" Megumi groaned. "We have no idea where they went, or when they will come back!"
"I know where they are!" a voice yelled. Everyone looked down to see Tenshi. "They are at… Hinata House!!"
The girls gasped. "Hinata House?!" They looked at each other and shrugged. "Okay, let's go…"
Meanwhile, a few miles from Tokyo, a rift was opening…
Ami smiled, hugging Tokimi. "Well, it's been fun, but we should really be getting back home, now… The girls are probably going crazy by now!"
"We sure are!!" Junko screamed, running in. "What the hell were you thinking, abandoning us like that?!"
Naoko pouted, her lip trembling. "Don't you like us anymore?"
Ami chuckled nervously. "N-no! It's nothing like that! I wanted to go see my old friends at Hinata House, but I didn't think that you would be interested!! Shinichi-kun and Negi-kun found me out, so I brought them along!!"
Naoko ran over to Negi and hugged him tightly. "Negi-kun! In missed you so much!!"
"Ack!" Negi managed to scream out. "Not another one!"
Rikina walked in, still high on 'lady-love'. She stared at the others. "Oh, hey there… Nice to see you again…" She looked at Sakura, checking out her outfit. "You have got style… I like that…" She walked over to Sakura and French kissed her, causing the older guys to nosebleed. Negi simply stared in shock. Rikina then broke the kiss and smiled.
Sakura blinked rapidly. "Wha-wha-wha?…"
Rikina chuckled. "Yeah, that's what I was like at first, too…" She blushed. "But then… Meiruuna, she taught me some… quite amazing things…"
Everyone else except Meiruuna sweat dropped. Shinichi chuckled nervously. "Yeah, nice to see you all! Bye Urashima-sensei! Bye, everyone! Come girls, Negi-kun--"
"Wait right there!!" a voice yelled. Everyone looked in the doorway to see a girl in a formal middle school uniform with red pigtails. Other things to note were the bells in her hair, and her interesting eyes… Two shades of blue. "A ha!!!! I knew we'd find you here!!" She walked over to Negi and grabbed him in a headlock. "The rest of the girls and I were worried sick!!"
Negi gasped. "Asuna-san!! How did you?--"
Asuna whispered into his ear. "Save it… Don't you remember? You tried to turn back time by 25 seconds in order to prevent the breaking of a priceless vase! Looks like you screwed up and sent yourself 25 years into the future!! Fortunately, another time rift appeared and we went through it!! Now come on before it closes again!!"
Ami frowned, crossing her arms. "Hey, leave Negi-kun alone!! Just who do you think you are?!"
Asuna glared at Ami. "Hmph! My name is Asuna Kagurazaka! Negi-sensei is our English teacher!"
Negi tilted his head. "We?… Our? Huh?"
"Negi-sensei!!" a girl with dark blue hair covering her eyes walked in, followed by a girl with black hair. They were both wearing the
Negi smiled. "Konoka-san! Nodoka-san!"
Nodoka frowned. "We looked all over for you, but we couldn't find you at all… Then we--"
Negi shook his head. "It's okay…" He sadly looked to the others. "Sorry, guys… Looks like I have to go…"
Naoko bit her lip, then ran up to Negi and Asuna. "Wait!… Um… Negi-kun…" She shyly gave him a quick kiss on the cheek. "We'll never forget you… Please don't forget us…"
Negi nodded. "I won't…"
Asuna sighed. "Look, I hate to break this thing up, but we really gotta go!" And so, the students and their underage teacher left. Never to be seen again? Who knows…
"Bye! Have a safe trip home!!" Am yelled.
"Seeya, Negi!!" Shinichi screamed.
"B-bye, Negi-kun!!" Naoko cried, tears rolling down her face.
"Oh, brother…" Junko muttered. "Can we go home now?…"
End of Day 10 and 11.
And so ends this little tale! Would have been longer, but I'm out of time! Seeya!
---K.T.
