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The grounds looked even more enchanting at night, with live fairies inhabiting the trees and bushes. Lily smiled as she remembered how terrified she had been in her fourth year, when she saw one of the fairy lights move. "You're so beautiful when you smile" said the stranger, which made Lily smile even more. She was outside on a wonderful moonlit night, hand in hand with a stranger who just happened to be a boy. It's almost like a dream, she thought to herself. Anything could happen right now. And it did. She looked into those eyes once again, but before her heart had time to react, he turned his head. Lily felt a bit confused for a moment, until he pulled her close to him and kissed her.
It was the most wonderful thing Lily had ever experienced, magical or non-magical. She loved everything about that kiss, the way his lips felt, the little thrill of excitement as soon as he put his arms around her. The feeling she got when he kissed her was not merely the satisfaction of a job well done. Lily didn't even remember her wish until she was back in her dormitory with Morgana.
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"Would you like to dance?" those five little words Lily had waited seven years to hear from someone other than James Potter. If only she could see whom that someone was! His voice did sound vaguely familiar." OK" she said, as he took her hand. She looked up at him, and saw.... a blur of dark hair, sleepy-looking hazel eyes and dark blue dress robes. He was very tall, and looked as though he might be a Quidditch player. Lily looked into his eyes and immediately regretted it, because although she couldn't see them properly, her heart still skipped a beat. She noticed his hair was extremely messy, but she could probably fix that. Honestly she thought to herself I've only known him a few minutes and I'm already turning into a vegetable. She tried to put all these thoughts out of her head as he put his hands around her slim waist, and she put hers around his neck. The next few minutes were truly wonderful. They danced together in silence, because neither one of them felt the need to say anything. It was as if they had known each other for years. Finally, just as the dance ended, he whispered, "Let's go outside" in her ear. She hesitated slightly, and looked at Morgana. She and the Ravenclaw boy looked very busy to Lily, so she looked at her mystery man and nodded.The grounds looked even more enchanting at night, with live fairies inhabiting the trees and bushes. Lily smiled as she remembered how terrified she had been in her fourth year, when she saw one of the fairy lights move. "You're so beautiful when you smile" said the stranger, which made Lily smile even more. She was outside on a wonderful moonlit night, hand in hand with a stranger who just happened to be a boy. It's almost like a dream, she thought to herself. Anything could happen right now. And it did. She looked into those eyes once again, but before her heart had time to react, he turned his head. Lily felt a bit confused for a moment, until he pulled her close to him and kissed her.
It was the most wonderful thing Lily had ever experienced, magical or non-magical. She loved everything about that kiss, the way his lips felt, the little thrill of excitement as soon as he put his arms around her. The feeling she got when he kissed her was not merely the satisfaction of a job well done. Lily didn't even remember her wish until she was back in her dormitory with Morgana.
