There's chapter 2! I worked on it, edited (even more) so I hope it's better!

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Chapter2:Incident...

"Hi sweetie," the male said with a melting deep changed voice, "I'm Shu and I will be your Master from now on understand?" he introduced himself. Hisa nodded quickly, "Good... now what's your name?" he asked. "H-Hisa..." she whispered.

Shu smiled sweetly "You must have had bad experiences with humans before... but don't worry, as long as I'm alive no one will raise a hand upon you. Now come..." Shu said once he had removed Hisa's feet chains so she could walk. Shu grabbed the chain hanging in between Hisa's wrists and pulled a little on them as to say Get-up-and-follow-me. Hisa obeyed, she was much too frightened to do something wrong and get punished as usual... Even know she couldn't walk on her left leg, she followed silently.

-With the gang-
"Uh... any idea where we are now?" asked Kuwabara at a fuming Yusuke, "Arg! That's it! Shut your mouth before I get to slice it out of your face got it genius? It's been hours you've been asking the same question! So you'll get the same answer! I DON'T KNOW WHERE THE HELL WE ARE!" yelled Yusuke as Kuwabara ran behind Kurama. "Hn, yelling won't help detective." said Hiei glaring, "Do you have the communication mirror with you Yusuke?" asked Kurama sounding hopeful.

Yusuke sweat dropped, "Well uh... now that you mention it... I-- uuuh... yeah I do..." he smiled in his funny looking way with a hand scratching his neck. Yusuke took the communication mirror out of his pocket and opened it, "Koenma can you hear me? Where the hell are we?" Yusuke started to get angry at the toddler, "Well I told you the landing wouldn't be exact so don't you dare yell at me Yusuke!" shouted a fuming toddler, "Anyway to answer your question... you are at least two weeks away from the place we last saw Hisa..." he said swallowing.

"Say whaaaaaaaaat? You mean we have to walk two weeks before saving her? Hell no! Just open another portal and I'm outta here!" yelled Yusuke. Koenma sighed, "I wish it was that easy Yusuke, but I can't... so start walking northeast and then you'll recognize the place." and with that said, Koenma hung up. Yusuke snapped the communication mirror and shoved it back in his pocket, "Next time I see him, somebody remind me to eat him with barbecue sauce..." he mumbled and started walking.

-With Hisa-
After twenty minutes of painful and difficult walking, Shu, Hisa and some other body guard demons arrived at a big mansion, small castle. Shu looked above his shoulder and saw Hisa walking best as she could, her head low. "We're almost there, then we'll be able to clean those wounds of yours..." said Shu nicely. Hisa only nodded and kept walking until she felt someone touching her wrists, she jumped back and looked up alarmed and fearful. "Hey don't worry, I'm not going to hurt you, I'm just taking your chains off..." reassured Shu, Hisa lowered her head once more and waited for him to finish.

"Follow me." ordered Shu on a voice that had lost all sympathy. He led Hisa up, sideways, and down long corridors that looked exactly the same. "I bet it will only take you one week to know this place like the back of your hand..." joked a now friendly Shu. Finally after many turns and stairs, he led Hisa in a really bright room; it was a sort of bathroom and had many lights.

"Here in Makai, there is no such thing as sun, there's an equivalent but it's evil... like this whole place. So instead we just use many lamps to see where we're going, or else we'd all get lost in the dark." explained Shu at the inquisitive look on Hisa's face.

Shu disinfected the wounds and bandaged them, "Does it feel better?" he asked, Hisa simply nodded even if the wounds were burning. Shu sighed, "Come, I'll lead you to your room..." he said exiting the bright bathroom, Hisa followed her head still lowered. Shu arrived in front of a rustique door which he opened slowly, revealing a tiny room with a bed, lights and a chair. "It's not much, but it's the best a slave can get. You must understand that here in Makai, humans are rare and disliked... It's a miracle we survive..." Shu finished lowering his eyes.

Hisa entered the small room and sat on the bed, it was a better room than she always had at the orphanage. A question was burning her tongue to ask, and when she raised her head to look at Shu, he read it in her eyes. "You're probably wondering what am I doing here then?" he asked smiling, Hisa nodded faintly. "Well I'm not going to tell you how I landed here... but I was foolish and found some low class demons and little by little, built this mansion and soon demons came and joined me to gain power. But some demons think I'm not worth it... so they want to kill me... but I'm still here so don't worry..." he smiled more.

-Two weeks later, with the gang-
"Ok, I officially give up! My feet are soooooo sore! If I'm putting my hands on this girl and Koenma I'm going to kill them!" yelled an angry and tired Yusuke. "Now now Yusuke... that wouldn't be wise." said a Kurama sounding Kenshin-ish. Just then the communication mirror beeped and this caused Yusuke and Kuwabara to jump, "Hello Yusuke!" came the voice of no other than Koenma himself, "Man don't do that again! I'll have to kill you twice!" raged Yusuke, "So where is she? She's supposed to be here? You said to walk to this place and now it's empty as a desert you moron!"

"Yusuke you just have to learn to control your temper! As for Hisa, this was the last place we saw her, now I'm not sure where they could have taken her... You'll have to find her using your senses! Good luck!" and before anyone else could say something he hung up.

"What did he mean by 'using your senses'! She's a ningen! We can't sense a ningen in Makai!" growled a rather pissed off Hiei, "Calm down Hiei, we will all calm down and sit in a circle and try to sense Hisa. I'll go by the smell, obviously you go with the Jagan eye, Kuwabara... spirit awareness I suppose and for Yusuke... Just sit and wait if you please." said Kurama, so everyone did as told and sat in a circle.

-With Hisa-
"Your wounds are starting to heal, I must say it's a miracle... With all the work you do almost non-stop, it must be really painful and yet I did not hear you once complain. You have a strong will... but sometimes you need more than will and faith to survive." said Shu yet impressed. Suddenly the mansion shook, "What was that?" frowned Shu as another slave burst in the bathroom yelling "Master! Master! They're attacking! You must hide, they came for you!" Shu's eyes widened, then he turned back to face Hisa; she was terrified.

Shu opened a secret box on the wall, pushed some buttons and a door appeared; he grabbed Hisa's arm and threw her in the mysterious door, "Run! This secret passage leads to a hidden back door, once you're outside, run straight!" he ordered, but when he saw Hisa not moving and looking at him with the What-about-you?-Don't-leave-me-alone! look.

Shu got angry "If they capture you, they'll torture you and kill you! It's me they're after... I don't want you to die! You're young and full of promise!" he finished his eyes sorrowful, Hisa made a move to come towards Shu but that caused him to react as follows. He pressed some more buttons on the secret switch and the door closed before Hisa could get out, she had no choice now she had to run... and fast!

-With the gang-
"I smell blood not too far, it's not recent... but I think it's human." said Kurama finally getting up from meditation. "Ok then let's go! I had enough of sitting around for today!" said Yusuke jumping off the ground, "Hn, so maybe you'll stop complaining when we start to walk again." said Hiei on the edge of killing someone.

Yusuke sweat dropped but said nothing and started walking in a direction, "Who said it was this way detective?" said Hiei staring at Yusuke, who stopped dead in his tracks and wheeled around, really slowly. When he finished turning around he noticed Kurama, Hiei and Kuwabara waiting for him to come back and finally head off in the right direction.

After two minutes of fast walking, Kurama stopped and sniffed the air "It's near, look on the ground for any clues..." he said while following the sent. He didn't need to go far to find what he was looking for, "Guys! I found it!" said Kurama while Hiei and Yusuke stopped looking and gathered around the kneeling Kurama. "Uh... where is it Kurama?" asked an uncertain Yusuke, "Hn, baka it's right under that body." said Hiei in a bored tone, Kurama rolled the body over and revealed a medium puddle of blood.

"Holy shit! Kurama are you sure it's her blood? 'cuz if it is... I wouldn't keep my hopes up..." said Yusuke talking more to himself than the others. "Hey guys! I think I found it!" yelled a far away Kuwabara, Yusuke raised his head "Found what?" he snapped, "Her blood! I'm sure that's it!" he yelled making silly gestures from far far away. "We shouldn't even listen to you Kuwabara when you say 'I think'! 'cuz it's been over 5 minutes Kurama said he found it you incredible moron!" yelled Yusuke loosing his temper again. "Hn, Koenma was right for once... you do need to control your temper!" was all Hiei said before gazing off again.

-Back with Hisa-
Running down the stairs Hisa cried, 'Why did he protect me? I am too worthless for him to die!' she thought angry at herself as more tears came rushing down her cheeks. Finally after a few minutes, which seemed to be hours, Hisa reached the back. Hesitantly, she opened the door slowly and silently, then when she thought the coast was clear, she walked out really slowly.

All of a sudden, hands rushed out of nowhere on her throat, squeezing the air out of her lungs, as other hands grabbed her arms and pinned her against the wall next to the door that just closed itself... She was trapped. "Hey wait a sec, that's not Shu!" whined a squeaky voice, "Don't kill her! We could use her to get Shu if he cares so much about her, he let her get out by the back door..." yelled a low freaky voice. Instantly hands let go of Hisa's throat, many reaffirming their grip on her arms to prevent her from escaping...

I hope the... grammar is better because now that I read it over, I can't believe how stupid I was when I started writing this.