A/n I was thinkin about writing sort of like a sequel to this story, I think itll be fun and I have an awesome idea for a plot, Itll be the same Ayame and Koga, ( She'll have all her powers etc etc) If im not careful ill start writing it now! But I gotta finish this one first. I still curse those who start stories without finishing the one I was readin!
Koga stared at the spot next to him where Ayame had stood. She was there, and now she wasn't. Suddenly the tears came to him. His heart was just wrenched out of his body. It was thrown on the ground and stepped on. He stared at the coming rain that fell on him. He didn't know when it had started raining but know it suited him.
Kagome looked at Koga. His face was in pain, while every one else's held disbelief. Kagome was sad. She had betrayed her closest friends trust then let her get taken before she had a real chance to apologize. " What the hell just happened?" Inuyasha asked. " Isn't it obvious mutt! Ayame let that monster take her to save us. All she ever wanted to do was save everyone. She wanted to save her mom her sister, me and now you. And we let her! But I don't care about you! I don't care if it kills me I'm going to save her!" Koga said. He started to run in the direction that the demon had. "Koga Wait!" Kagome called out. He stopped and turned. " We are coming with you! We want to save Ayame too!" " That's right!' Shippo exclaimed. " Your not the only one who cares about her. " Inuyasha added. " We are gonna save her together!" Sango said. Koga nodded and they set off. Miroku, Sango and Shippo rode on Kirara, Kagome was on Inuyasha's back and Koga was in a whirlwind.
Ayame was trying to stay conscience. She noted every little thing she saw in the monster's hand as it jumped farther and farther away from the others. Finally it stopped in front of a castle. It seemed barren from the outside but once they walked in, a woman was in front of the building holding a fan in her face. " I brought the girl like you asked." The demon told her. " Now give me the other jewel shards!" It called out. " The woman just kept fanning herself. Ayame wished they'd hurry this up she was soaked through. She didn't want to use her powers in case it got mad at her. Finally the women lowered her fan and looked at Ayame then the demon. Then she flicked her fan at the demon and razor sharp things flew out in bright white flashes and sliced the demon up. The jewel shard in his chest flew outat the same timethe demon shrunk down, and collapsed dead. The women walked up to Ayame " We've been expecting you. Come inside where you can meet your master." The women turned on Ayame and walked into the castle. Ayame quickly followed, she didn't know what to think anymore, she just hoped Koga and the others were ok.
Inside the women lead her down a flight of stairs into the basement. Inside was a man sitting with his back to the wall. He looked at Ayame as she walked down and stood awkwardly behind the women. " Kagura you finally did something right" He said. " You may go now" The women Harrumphed but left the room quickly. The man still sat on the floor one arm resting on his knee. " Do you know who I am?" He asked. Ayame slowly nodded. It had to be him there was no mistaking the evil that emanated from him. "Naraku!" She muttered scathingly. " Very good." Naraku said. " Im also sure you are wondering why it is I brought you here. Ayame nodded. " I intend to train you. You will become sort of like my apprentice, but when it comes down to it in the end you will get killed for me." Ayame did not move. " Now don't be that way Ayame. Im sure after awhile ill grow on you" He laughed and stood. Slowly he approached. He nicked her chin and laughed again. Don't worry I'll take care of those wounds. His hand dropped and glowed a red color. Suddenly her wounds were gone as if they were never there. "KANNA!" Naraku called out then. A little girl dressed all in white came down the stairs. She held some sort of mirror in front of her. " Kanna show our guest here will she will be staying. The girl looked at Ayame and turned back up the stairs. Ayame followed slowly. Wishing more then anything she could stay and strangle that smirk off of Naraku's face. She had played right into his hands and SHE HATED IT! The girl led her to a room on the other side of the building, where she locked the door and left Ayame to her steaming hatred. Ayame pressed her ear to the door and waited quietly for the girl's soft footsteps to disappear. Finally the girl was gone and Ayame didn't smell anyone or anything nearby. She pulled herself to the farthest, darkest corner and took out her crystal.
She called Koga and hoped he'd answer soon. 2 seconds later it was pressed to his face. " Ayame are you ok? Where are you?" Ayame heard shouts in the back. " Ayame where? I don't see Ayame! Koga what are you talking about?" " Shush!" Koga called out. " We are talking!" Suddenly Kagome, Inuyasha and all the others were crowded around Koga. " Guys do be quiet! I don't know if they can hear me" Ayame said. " They who?" Kagome asked. " That women um Kagura he said her name was and Kanna and Naraku." " Sister you have to get out of there!" Inuyasha said. " What was your first clue sherlock!" Ayame snapped back. " OH MY GOSH! Im sorry I didn't mean to say that Inuyasha it's just I'm kind of testy at the minute!" it's all right. Just tell us how to get there." " Ok" Ayame said. Then she told them all she could remember that she saw on the way." Kagome took notes and then they were ready to go. " I have to go, I don't know when they'll return." Ayame whispered. " Understandable Ayame we'll be there soon" Kagome said and She and the others Ran off leaving Koga alone to talk to Ayame. " Koga I'm sorry, I didn't want this to happen…!" Koga interrupted her. " Ayame I don't care. I just want to get you safe and back here next to me again. Ayame there's something I have to tell you…" Ayame heard voices in the background calling Koga to come. " You go on Koga tell me later. I have to go. You never know when that Kagura lady will come." "But...!" Koga sighed "Alright Ayame. Please be careful" Ayame turned the crystal off and shoved it back in her pocket. This time she took a look around the room. There was a window near the opposite corner, but no sunlight came in. It was dusty, She was sure there was bloodstains on the door but it was so dark that it could've just been something else. Footsteps echoed outside. Ayame held her breath and backed more into the corner. The door flew open and Kagura stood there, fan by her side. "Naraku's waiting for you. Follow me." Kagura turned then looked back at Ayame. " You would do best not trying anything around him. You seem like a nice girl it'd be a shame If I had to kill you, at least for you." Kagura turned her head back and started walking. Ayame quickly followed. This time he was waiting outside on the steps. Kagura bowed and walked off to the side leaving Ayame to face him. " You have a will don't you Ayame?" Naraku asked. "What do you mean Naraku?" " If I asked you to kill Koga, would you?" Naraku said staring her down. Ayame felt like she couldn't hide anything from him. His eyes seemed to read hers and know, know what was going on inside her head. " I would never kill my friends. I'd rather die!" Ayame said resisting the stare. Naraku laughed. "You can't say I didn't want this to happen Ayame. But the thing is I need an obedient apprentice. Not one that will resist my orders." He flicked something that sparkled at Kagura. " If you would do the honor's Kagura." Kagura caught whatever it was and began to walk toward Ayame. Ayame backed away trying to get away. But her body felt leaden. She wanted to open her mouth, to scream out for Koga. But it remained shut. Suddenly a wall came up behind her. There was nowhere she could run. Kagura took the thing. Ayame could see it now. It was a jewel shard. But it was dark, tainted. Kagura pulled Ayame's wrist toward her and jabbed the tainted jewel shard into her Fire bracelet. A shiver went up Ayame's spine. Something entered her body and began taking over. The spirit knocked Ayame's soul aside and Ayame lost all control of her actions. The spirit made her laugh and shook Ayame's head. " You may be wondering why it is you are still able to see Ayame" Naraku said with that smirk of his on his face again. " It's so you can witness every horrible action you do. For the rest of your life!" The spirit and Naraku laughed. Ayame cried in her hollow shell. All hope was lost.
A/n Well there we go badder and badder still! I do love this story I enjoy thinking about it and I can just imagine their faces! I dont know how well of a writer I am. Im tryin to keep the charcters like themselves. I was reading this one where fluffy fell in love and the author turned fluffy sweet! I was loke OMG THATS NOT FLUFFY!