A/nFixed chapter 9 i had the smae thing posted on chapter 8! so its all good!
"We're almost there guys" Kagome called out. It took them a couple of days because no one could read Kagome's writing and that kept getting them lost. Koga remembered his confession to Kagome. How long ago that seemed! Now she was just a friend, and Koga thinks she realized this. Hakaku and Ginta had finally caught up with them out of pure luck and now everyone was ready to face Naraku. A mile later there was the palace just as Ayame had described it. Koga only hoped they weren't too late.
Inuyasha and Koga charged through the doorway together and slid to a stop when they saw him. " Naraku!" Kagome called out. So did Miroku and Sango when they saw him. "Inuyasha, Koga so glad that you can join our party! I believe you've meet my apprentice!" Naraku gestured to the door. Someone walked out wearing a black kimono. The sleeves trailed down thier arm and opened up at the end. A hood covered her face but Koga knew who it was. "AYAME" Koga called out. He ran to her.
Ayame stared at him as he ran forward. "STAY AWAY KOGA RUN!" She tryed called out, but nothing happened, the spirit still controlled her body. It drew her swords from her back. Lightning and fire erupted. Koga stopped. "Her eyes!" HE said. " Theres no life in them, no love or anything" Kagome called out. Ayame ran forward, sword slashing out at Koga. Koga dodged and dodged never once attacking. "Ayame wake up It's me! It's Koga!" He called out barely dodging her blade. She froze sword point in the ground. " There's a jewel shard in her bracelet!" Kagome yelled out. " But it dosent look right, like its been tainted." " Naraku's controlling her just like my brother!" Sango said. Ayame laughed. Sword slashing she went after Inuyasha. He tried his best to block Ayame's swords but his hands slipped and her lightning sword stabbed him. Ayame screamed inside. "NO STOP IT! INUYASHA RUN GET AWAY FROM ME!" Miroku ran forward to stop her from stabbing him again. " Ayame this may sting!" Miroku threw a sutra out at her. Ayame screamed her body twisting around. Then it fell off. She laughed. A hollow death voice spoke through her. " You think that can stop me with the power of a jewel shard?" It laughed again and started attacking Miroku now. Koga still stood where Ayame had attacked him. He stared at her, he could feel his heart beating in his chest as he stared at her. He heard the others yelling at her to stop as she attacked them, but he didn't listen. Ayame kept fighting, her face sullen and pale. Koga felt sick, He couldn't breathe. HE FAILED HER!
Koga ran forward and grabbed Ayame's swords. Ignoring the blood trickling down his arm he called out desperately. " AYAME, Please Ayame wake up this isn't you. Stop fighting, Ayame!" Ayame stared at him. Life came to her eyes as she looked in his. Then it was gone just as fast as it came. The spirit kicked him in the stomach. Koga flew backwards and landed with a loud hard thud! Kagome started screaming at her again. Ayame walked forward and pointed her sword at Koga's chest, right over his heart. Koga layed there panting, staring up at her, Ayame. His heart ached her wanted to hold her. Tell her everything would be ok. He closed his eyes. He wanted to die. Without her, there was no reason to go on. Ayame raised her sword still pointing at him. "Ayame," Koga said smiling up at her. Before you kill me I want to tell you… I love you" He whispered. Time stood still. Ayame's eye's stared at him unseeing. "KOGA!" Ayame screamed inside. " KOGA I LOVE YOU! I ALWAYS HAVE! I ALWAYS WILL!" She fought, she fought the spirit. She needed control just for a few seconds, she needed her body. Ayame's eyes showed life. Hope came as her Arm reached up. She grabbed wildly at her fire bracelet holding the sword over Koga. She gasped from the pain. She caught her bracelet and pulled it off, breaking it. Fire erupted from her body. She had won. "I LOVE YOU KOGA!" She called out as the fire consumed her. It spread across the grounds. Her scream echoed out into the far distance, birds flew away to escape the fire as Koga and the others were enveloped in it. Ayame fought to save them to keep the fire from burning them. The fire reached the castle, Naraku, Kanna, and Kagura flew off into the sky. The castle erupted into flame. The fire reached out into the sky and spread. Then it retracted back to Ayame. Koga stared up at her as she smiled at him, she gave him the thumbs up, then fell to her knees. She couldn't stay awake. She fell backwards and drifted to the edge of death.
Koga stood up, staring at his love. She said that she loved him. He started crying as he ran to her body. He placed his head on her chest. She needed to be alive. He couldn't live without her. Her heart was beating faintly, slowly and unsurely. Koga still cried. He hugged her limp body to his chest. And started stroking her hair, telling her it'll be ok. Kagome and the others walked up behind him. " We have to get her to Kaede Koga. She'll be able to save Ayame. And the quicker the better." Kagomesaid to Koga. Koga still sat there holdingAyame close. Sango bent down and helped him up. "It'll be ok, we'll save her Koga." Miroku walked over to Ayame's shattered bracelet and picked up all the pieces. A sparkle caught his eye, and he picked up the cursed jewel shard, that had caused all of this. He gave it to Kagome and it turned pure in her hands. "Let me carry her." Koga spoke up. His tears had stopped but his face still glowed from them. " You show me the way and I'll carry her to this Kaede's place. Kagome nodded and Koga picked her up easily. Her body was limp and warm but for how long? Sango and Miroku got on Kirara again, they started running as fast as possible to Kaede. Koga held Ayame close as he set off in a whirlwind. Her hair twirled everywhere as she held on to what little will she had left.
A/n there that's anther chapter. In case I never told you guys she dosent have her hair in Pigtails. I HATE THE PIGTAILS! It makes her look to young. She only wears it like that when she's fighting at points sort of like what Sango does I guess. So now pls review and let em kno what ya think!