THIS STORY IS MY FIRST STORY SO IT WILL BE BAD AND I DON'T OWN DBZ AND I AM BAD AT THIS KIND OF THINGS NOW TO THE STORY
p.s: In this the sayains believe bardock so it is different
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SAIYANS LIVE
CHAPTER 1: Bardock's save
Bardock runs to the saiyan bar to save the saiyans limping as fast as he can until he finally finds the bar "You guys have to run Frieza will kill us all he fears the saiyans are getting to strong" says Bardock. "Ha we work for him he is not going to kill us" says one of the saiyans. Then another saiyan says "but this is Bardock we can trust him". "Well I will not move until I get some proof". Then a Frieza's ship comes with a huge energy blast on top. "That's good proof to me every one run!" says the saiyan. Every one runs one saiyan takes bardock to a heal chamber and the others go to fight Freeza there is not hope for them as many die fighting. At king Vegeta's throne king vegeta is talking about the birth of Brolly but then his father comes and they let Brolly live and then one of the saiyans come tell the king about Freeza's attack and he has his army try to kill him but still Freeza and his army are still stronger so king Vegeta gets a great plan. "Ha ha ha ha ha" you think you can beat me says Freeza. Freeza finally throw his death ball which goes gets closer to planet saiyan every second but then it stops all of a sudden and the ball turns blows up in front of Freeza's ship killing him and when the smoke cleared the saiyans got shocked to see how it stopped and it was one person who stopped the attack no one guessed that it would be……………..
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Author: Hate to do this folks but you have to find out on the next chapter and I know this chapter is short and dumb but remember this my first chapter and fic send in reviews and I will make the next chapter.