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A Cinderella Story

Chapter 6

Mind Swept

The rest of her potions class did not go good for Hermione. Snape was being horrible to her. He took off points for breathing too loud and holding her quill wrong. Ron was in a foul mood. He just sat there, doing his potion in silence, not making eye contact with anyone.

"Ron? Are you okay?" Hermione questioned worriedly. Ron had never kept so silent in class. It was starting to freak Hermione out.

"I guess so," he mumbled back.

Hermione kept at it, "Its just you really quiet and your never quiet during potions. In fact, you usually talk juts to annoy Snape."

Ron sighed then turned to face her, "I'm just so sick of it."

"Sick of what?"

"Everyo-" Ron started but Snape cut in. "Class dismissed, Weasly, Granger, my office, now!"

Hermione and Ron sullenly dragged their feet over to Snapes office where he was waiting impatiently to hand out the punishment that he thought were due.

"For your inexplicit behavior, I shall have both these detention forms filled out for you two. You will have to complete the detention time between now and Potions Class tomorrow," Snape explained in a monotone voice.

"But Professor, I didn't throw tha-"

"No complaining, you've heard your punishment now go before you're late for your next class!" Snape boomed.

Ron and Hermione left his office and walked through the classroom in not very good moods. Swinging open the heavy doors and entering the hallways Ron started cursing and Hermione started complaining.

"How come Malfoy gets away with everything! It was sooooooooo obvious that he was calling me names! I wouldn't call anyone names!" Hermione complained stomping her foot on the floor.

"Fuck Snape! Lets blow off detention and have fun burning those detention slips to ashes!" Ron proposed.

Hermione looked at Ron shocked, "I can't Ron. We can't. That's against the rules and you know it! Besides, you should just get it over with so you don't have to worry about it any longer."

"What about you?" Ron asked.

"I have to work tonight so I'll have to do mine tomorrow early," Hermione explained.

"Oh yah. What do you have to do for your detention?" Ron asked looking at his slip of paper that Snape had given him, "I have to clean all the boys AND girls washrooms on the third floor! YUCK!"

Hermione glanced down at her paper, "I have to mop the great hall! What! That is so unfair! The great hall is HUGE!"

"Snape must REALLY hate us." Ron commented.

"That fact hasn't chosen to penetrate your brain until now?" Hermione asked incredulously.

Ron smiled at her. Hermione always had this way to make him smile.

Hermione sighed dramatically and leaned against the wall, "It's a Friday Ron, how about we do something tonight? Like going to Hogsmeade or something?"

"But you never go to Hogsmeade! You only go to buy school supplies! What's different about this time?" Ron asked.

"I just want to do something different. I'm tired of being ordered around and picked on! I want to do something that no one would expect…I want people to say 'Hey! Look at that girl!' I don't want to be just passed over. I want to be noticed and I want people to want to be with me."


This is chapter 6. It's really short, I know. But I have a major idea for the next chapter. See, Hermione's developing this whole attitude. She's been picked on for her whole life and she's getting tired of it. In the next few chapters she's going to get a bit out of control. She going to try to fit and she's going to change a lot. There are going to be consequences. Oh yes! So…how do you guys like my idea? Please tell me how you liked this chapter and what you think of my idea! Thanks so much!