May and Brendan meet for the first time
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Prologue"AAAAHHHH!" May was in the removal van. Furniture was going into her. She was being taken to her new house. Her dad had got a job in Petalburg so they had had to move there. May used to live in Pallet town.
When they got there May saw that someone else was moving in as well. They were going to be next-door neighbours. May walked slowly towards her new neighbour. He started to walk towards her they stopped in the middle of the houses and he said "Hi my name is Brendan what's yours?" "Mine is May I just moved here from Pallet town." "I moved from Viridian city. My dad has got a new job here. I didn't want to move but I had to."
"May come and help us unpack!" shoutedher mum. "Brendan come and help us unpack!" shoutedhis mum. "See ya!" they both shouted to each other. They both ran inside their house and helped their mum and dad unpack all the stuff from the van.