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Oldale Town
May started towards the town up ahead.
When May was heading up their she encountered a Zonklab. It was blue and pink and it wore a cap on its head. The cap was glued right onto its head.
May grabbed her poke ball and threw it. Out came Kosapichi.
"Tackle!"
"Dodge!"
"Water Gun!" After a Tackle and a water gun the Zonklab died.
She continued up the road. She reached Oldale after about 5 minutes.
"WOW!" she exclaimed. May first went to the Pokemart she walked up to the shopkeeper.
"Have you got any poke balls for sale?"
"Yes."
"How much are they?"
"150."
"O.K can I have 5 please?"
"Yes here you go."
"Thanks."
May exited the Pokemart and went to the Pokemon Centre.
"Hi. Can you heal my Pokemon please."
"Yes. Can I have them please?"
"Yeah. Sure. Here you go."
"I haven't seen you around here before. Are you new around here?"
"Yes I just moved here. Professor Objourley gave me that Pokemon. It is my first one."
"O.K here is your Pokemon back."
"Thanks. Bye." May exited the Pokemon Centre.