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PurpleCobra247: Yep, Lola is desperate, mind you who wouldn't be? I'd feel anxious if my child disappeared. Glad it's getting to your interest. I'm making it tense as possible, glad you like it.

Rock Raider: I'm getting Timesplitters Future Perfect soon so I'll have a look to see what you mean. I'll be keeping you in suspense about the safety about everyone. It will be like the first Canary mansion as I re-read it for ideas.

Nightw2: Glad you like it. I'll be updating all my stories faster nowas I'm finished at college now.

acosta pérez josé ramiro: A simple mistype. I meant to say strange creatures took Sylvester and Penelope'. Remember Sly Jr. was unconscious when Sly and Penelope were taken so he didn't see and Jessica had to break the news to him. Thanks for pointing that out. It should be corrected now. I'll try and use some of the toon's abilities but that will probably be later. And what you said about the kids and the smallest toons, they the only hope now.

An old enemy

Bugs and Lola were walking slowly down the passageway that they'd found. The passage was alligned with candles along the wall to light the way. The passage didn't have an end in sight and all the while, Lola was gettting more and more anxious.

"I hope Jessica is alright." Lola said.

"Lo, she'll be ok, I just know it." Bugs replied.

"How sure are you?" Lola asked.

"Very sure" Bugs replied. Lola sighed.

"I can't get rid of a bad feeling though." Lola said.

"I know, we'll find her." Bugs replied. He then saw a small figure in the distance. It was that of a rabbit but they couldn't see the colouring. Lola's eyes filled with tears when she saw the rabbit.

"JESSICA!" Lola shouted. She ran up to the rabbit, picked it up and pulled it into a hug. To her surprise, the rabbit began struggling.

"I'm not Jessica, put me down!" The rabbit said sternly. Lola looked at who she'd picked up, it was Babs.

"Oops, sorry Babs." Lola said bashfully. She put Babs on he floor abd Babs dusted herself off.

"What's with you?" Babs asked.

"I'm worried about my daughter." Lola replied, starting to cry.

"What are you doing here anyway?" Bugs asked.

"Getting away from a monster." Babs replied.

"A monster?" Bugs asked.

"A zombie to be more precise." Babs replied. Bugs gasped. Lola stopped sobbing and looked at Babs.

"There are zombies here?" Lola asked.

"Yep, and they have a cult leader." Babs replied. Bugs and Lola sat down.

"What exactly happened?" Bugs asiked. Babs sighed and sat down as well.

"Here's what happened…" Babs began.


Flashback

The zombie held Buster, Babs and Plucky tightly and carried them down a long passageway alligned with candles. At the end of the passage was a secret door that lead to a hidden chamber. There was al altar in the centre. A rat was standing on the altar. It turned towards the zombie carrying Buster, Babs and Plucky.and smiled.

"More prisioners, drop them." The rat said. The zombie dropped the three on the floor. They all had another look around and saw everyone that had been captured tied to crucifixes. There were 10 empty ones.

"I guess three of those are for us." Plucky said nervously. He then saw Shirley tied to a crucifix that was different to the others. The one Shirley was tied to was coloured gold and had charms engraved nito the design.

"SHIRLEY!" Plucky shouted. E jumped to his feet and ran towards her. Shirley's expression changed.

"Plucky, keep back!" Shirley shouted, but too late. Plucky ran ino a force field and was electrocuted. Thew force threw him back into a wall, making Shirley scream. Buster and Babs ran up to Plucky, he was still alive and was just conscious.

"What happened?" Plucky asked.

"Listen, there's a force field in front of us, you can't reach us." Shirley said. Zombies then surrounded Buster, Babs and Plucky.

"Now for the next step in my plan." The rat shouted. It raised its hand and a mist surrounded Shirley. She then screamed in agony as she felt some of her psychic energy being drained.

"SHIRLEY!" Plucky shouted. Shirley fell unconscious as the mist left her with half of her psychic energy. The mist then went over to the skeleton that was next to the rat, reconstructing the body. The rat then fell unconscious as mist flowed from the rat to the newly recreated body. The canary then woke up, noe alive.

"It's great to be back in my own body." The canary said evilly. Sylvester and Penelope recognised the canary.

"Count Sleety?" Penelope asked in terror. Sweat was runnig down her body.

"I see you remember me." Sleety replied evilly. He flew up ot Sylvester and Penelope.

"What do you want?" Sylvester asked.

"Why, revenge of course." Sleety replied. Buster and Babs looked at the newly reincarnated vampire in horror.

"Who is that?" Buster asked. Sylvester and Penelope heard them from a distance.

"A vampire!" Sylvester shouted at them. Everyone gulped.

"One of you, find Tweety!" Penelope shouted.

"Not yet, grab them!" Sleety ordered his zombies. The zombies surrounded Buster, Babs and Plucky. Shirley regained conscious and saw what was happening.

"PLUCKY NO!" Shirley shouted.

"Babsy, go and find Tweety!" Buster said sternly.

"What will you do?" Babs asked. Buster did a spin change into a swordsman outfit.

"I'll distract them." Buster replied.

"What if you don't live?" Babs asked.

"GO!" Buster shouted. The zombies closed in on them. Reluctantly, Babs squeeazed through a gap in the zombies and ran upo to an open passage, which had been opened by Sleety's ressurection. A zombie began to follow but Sleety stopped it. Babs could hhear Sleety talking to it from the passage.

"Let her go, someone needs to bring Tweety to me." Sleety instructed. After hearing this, Babs resumed running.

End Flashback
"…And that's when you guys found me." Babs finished. Bugs and Lola exchanged shocked expressions at what Babs had just told them.

"And there was no sign of Jessica?" Lola asked.

"Nope." Babs replied, shaking her head.

"Which means she's somewhere in this mansion still." Bugs reasoned.

"But where?" Lola asked.

"Maybe Tweety and Aaooga have found her." Bugs suggested.

"If you're going to find them, find Tweety and tell them what has happened." Babs said.

"But what will you do?" Lola asked. Babs did a spin change into Van Helmsing attire.

"I shall delay the vampire until Tweety arrives." Babs replied.

"That's reckless!" Bugs said.

"The one I love is there, I won't let him die." Babs replied.

"Ok, just be careful." Lola said. Babs ran back down the passage.

"Well, we might as well head to the main entrance." Bugs suggested.

"Why there?" Lola asked.

"Because that's where we're most likely to find Tweety." Bugs replied.

"Ok." Lola said. They retracedtheir steps out of the passage and started heading back to the main entrance.


Back at the main entrance, everyone was looking at the mirror in the hall in horror. Sylvester Jr. had lost his shadow, which meant only one thing. Aaooga bravely approached him.

"Slyvester Jr. can you open your mouth for a second? "" Aaooga asked.

"Why?" Sylvester Jr. asked.

"I need to check something." Aaooga replied.

"What do you need to check?" Sylvester Jr. asked. Jessica slapped him.

"Stop being awkward and do as she says." Jessica snapped.

"Ok, fine!" Syolvester Jr. replied. He opened his mouth and Aaooga was horrified at what she saw. She retreated and went back to Tweety.

"What, is my breath thart bad?" Sylvester Jr. asked. Aaooga shook her head.

"It's not your breath." Aaooga said.

"Then what is it?" Sylvester Jr. asked. Jessica went up to him, forced his mouth open and had a look for herself. She saw two long fangs in his mouth. She shut his mouth and retreated.

"What's wrong Jessica, you look nervous." Sylvester Jr. asked.

"Have you ever heard of vampires?" Jessica asked nervously.

"Yeah, my father said he saw one once." Sylvester Jr. replied.

"Well, you're a vampire." Jessica said nervously. Sylvester Jr. looked offended.

"Are you playing jokes on me?" Sylvester Jr. asked.

"If you don't believe me, feel inside your mouth." Jessidca snapped.

"Fine, I will!" Sylvester Jr. snapped back. He put his hand in his mouth and felt the fangs for himself. He began to sweat.

"Any idea how this could happen?" Tweety asked. Jessica then came to a realisation.

"That rat that attacked you…it must have been a vampire." Jessica said.

"Rat? That was a mouse!" Sylvester Jr. portested.

"Rat!" Jessica replied

"Mouse!" Sylvester Jr. snapped.

"Rat!" Jessica replied.

"Mouse" Sylvester Jr. snapped.

"Rat!" Jessica replied.

"Mouse" Sylvester Jr. snapped.

"Rat!" Jessica replied.

"Mouse" Sylvester Jr. snapped. Aaooga had heard enough and used her wolf howl to halt the argument. Jessicaa and Sylvester Jr. looked at her.

"We can argue about that later. Right now, we need to find a way of changing you back." Aaooga said sternly. Zach then heard footsteps.

"Guys, someone's coming." Zach said. Everyone looked at where he was pointing.

"Hope it isn't another zombie." Jessica added.

"If ti is, we'll fight it off together." Tweety said. They saw two figures approach.


Everyone waslooking at the two figures that were approaching them. Eventually, the light allowed everyone to see who the two figures were, bugs and Lola. When jessica saw them, her heart began racing. She immediately ran up to them.

"MUM, DAD!" Jessica shouted as she ran up to them.

"It's Jessica." Bugs said in shock. Lola began crying tears of joy.

"Jessica, you're ok!" Lola shouted. Jessica ran up to her and they hugged each other.

"We were worried about you, what happened?" Bugs asked. Jessica wasn't listening as she was too busy hugging her mother.

"What happened to you?" Lola asked. Jessica looked up at her.

"When the lights went out, I was grabbed by a zombie. It dropped me and I ran before it came back." Jessica replied. Tweety and Aaooga came over, followed by Zach and Sylvester Jr.

"Hey guys, glad you found us." Tweety greeted.

"But we have a bit of an issue over here." Aaooga added.

"How bad can it be?" Bugs asked.

"Very." Tweety replied.

"Well, we have some bad news as well." Lola said.

"What is it about?" Aaooga asked.

"It's about everyone else." Bugs replied.

"They're being held hostage." Lola added.

"By who?" Tweety asked. Bugs and Lola looked at each other. They didn't want to say who was behind all of this but they had to.

"By someone you know." Bugs replied.

"Count Sleety I think." Lola added. Tweety and Aaooga gasped.

"WHAT!" Tweety shouted.

"I thought he was dead." Aaooga added.

"Apparently, he resurrected himself." Bugs replied.

"How do you know this?" Tweety asked.

"Babs was able to escape from him and she told us what happened." Lola replied. They then tole Tweety and Aaooga the story Babs had told them.

"Babs is trying to save everyong by herself?" Tweety asked.

"Yep." Lola replied.

"How brave." Aaooga commented.

"Now what's the bad news you have for us?" Bugs asked.

"It's about Sylvester's son." Tweety replied.

"What's happened to Sly Jr?" Bugs asked. Tweety and Aaooga looked ate ach other, they didn't want to say either.

"He's a vampire." Aaooga finally said. Lola gasped while Bugs groaned.

"Great, we've got too many issues to worry about at once." Bugs said.

"What do we do?" Lola asked.

"I say we find this vampire and kill him, then we can figure out what to do with Sly Jr." Bugs suggested.

"But where do we go?" Tweety asked.

"There are some secret passages that will lead us to the vampire." Bugs replied.

"But what about the kids?" Lola asked.

"Well, Sly Jr. will have to come with us if we're gonna turn him back." Bugs said.

"And the others?" Lola asked.

"We may need their help, but it will be dangerous fo rthem." Tweety said.

"Why don't we ask them?" Aaooga suggested.

"Well, I'm coming as well. I want to help my friends." Jessica said.

"I want to help Daffy and Melissa, they've cared for me for so long, I won't let them die." Zach added.

"Wow, we've got a brave bunch of youngsters." Bugs remarked.

"But how are we going to get to the others?" Lola asked.

"Wha do you mean?" Tweety asked.

"Well, Babs said something about a force field." Lola replied.

"Leave that to me." Bugs said. He did a spin change and looked like a zombie. Lola smiled and did the same.

"I get it, we look liike we've been captured by zombies." Tweety said.

"Yep, and Sleety will let us to the captives." Bugs replied.

"Ok, Let's go." Jessica said. Bugs and Lola picked up everyone and they started walking towards where there was a secret passage.

(A/N: Well, I'm now finished at college (jumps for joy) so I shall be updating like wild fire. Read and review for now.)