Sorry for the short chapter. really busy. will up date as soon as i can.

I do not own beyblade, i do how ever own my oc's and the plot line and my poem good bye.

Chapter 16 : fading light and growing shadows.

With Neil

Neils POV

Me and a trope of men and women including the various beyblading teams broke into Voltaire's mansion. it was easy, hide out then snatch Kiya, Kai and their bit beasts then run for it. I was getting regular updates from chief from what I could tell things were not good, while we tried to find our way to the computer room to rescue our friends the chance of them surviving were growing slim.

I could hear chiefs panicked breathing, the cries of the people in the game. I knew we had no time to loose.

Tala's POV in the game

FUCK what are these things every time we kill one two replace it, were fighting a loosing battle. Bullets, talons, knives, electricity. We were out numbered by many, we were all tiring. Kiya was bleeding and Kai too, they looked exhausted. I wish the fire bit bears would calm down on the heat, their roasting me! Right we're just tying them up now. In shadow and flame a double team from Netty and Wraith… good idea……

Boom….a gun shot, I turn I see the bullet heading for Kai as If in slow motion, though there was nothing slow about it. That bullet was going to kill Kai. Kiya was running towards Kai.

She's not going to reach him in time were my only thoughts.

Kiya and Kai collide slamming to the ground. Soo much blood…. But whose? There were gasps of horror and screams. I went charging towards the attacker planting my knife square in its brain. Then ran back to my injured friend…it didn't look good.

With Voltaire

Normal POV

"We have a fatal injury sir" the creepy computer guy announced

"I can see that….. Interesting….. Lets see what happens. Start the counter let them have a minute to say good bye….." a sadistic smile spread across his lips "who ever would have thought it…."

Back in the game normal POV

good bye

I watch as you blood runs free

I see the light behind your eyes fade

And know your about to leave

I wish I knew how to say good bye

I wish I could do some thing

Not sit and watch you die

As I watch your blood flow away

I feel my soul die with you

I will make the person whose responsible for this pay.

Kiya and Kai stared into each others eyes both wide with fear and pain, one physical one the pain of heart ache. They held each other knowing these few precious moments were the last. Kiya whispered into her lovers ear comforting him. As life slipped away with blood, last few words were shared…. Instructions then those eyes closed forever.

please review and tell me who you think is dead.