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"Hey James you stop do'in that cross dressing thing?" James pointed a finger in shock "YOU!." Jessie looked at James "You know him? D.C spoke up. "After that little incident I'd think you'd stop cross dressing." "Shut up, what about the time you got caught running that gambling ring." "Don't even try it; I got the pictures of when I caught you being the main entertainment at a ladies club. Riptide and Ash turn to look at James. "You did that for money? How much can I pay you to go down to the strip j…" "Shut up. How did you know about that" James shook a fist indigently. Riptide smiled " I don't know any thing about it so tell me." He looked back a Jessie who was giving a him an awkward look
"Uh um I don't know what you're talking about. "Eeww I don't need to know, anyway ash if you think your so big and bad then fight me."
"What kind of fight, you verse me? "No I'll put you in traction. A pokemon battle, six on six and no retreating. Jessie walked over "like you could put somebody in traction." "You ever heard of the digidestines. Yes. Replied everyone "One day I found Ken's dirty little secret and when he found out he tried to kill me. But I put him in traction. When ken gets out, he will be looking for me. "So what is da big secret?" asked meowth "um the only thing I can say is Ash is a little to young to hear this if you know what I mean.
"Misty, do you want to bet on the fight." Misty walked away from Brock "Good idea, want to bet, Riptide. "Ooh, ooh if he wins we get pikachu." Asked James." "No, I not making that kind of bet and I still don't see why you want that pikachu." Ash thought for a minuet "if I win I get your hat…" D.C "yelled go for some thing big." "Okay then I get Misty, she gets to fallow me around." Riptide winked at her. "Hell no, Ash?" "No" riptide glanced at the guy staring at him and winked at ash " I though you said she was not your girl, come on" "All right but now I get your hat, gold and platinum chain, and you give your pikachu to team rocket." "deal." D.C yelled in protest but it was to late.
Everyone walked over to Celadon's gym. Erica let them use the gym, showing kindness to Ash for his help.Ash pulled out a coin and flipped it. Ash called heads but the coin lands tails. Riptide reaches for Falcon. Ash throws out the poke ball containing pidgeot. Riptide used a hand signal to tell Pidgeot to use fly. Falcon flies up high. "Use quick attack." Yelled ash falcon fakes to the right and hits pidgeot dead on. "You can do it use wing attack. "Stand your ground he signaled for her to use mirror move. falcon took a heavy hit then used the move. Pidgeot was ko'ed.
Ash reaches for Bulbasaur, Riptide for symbiot. "Vine whip now!. Symbiot gets knocked din to a wall loosing half its HP. Riptide yelled "twinneedle!" Symbiot rushed bulbasaur knocking its HP down some plus poisoned it but still in better shape than symbiot. Ash turned his hat around backwards "Razor leaf!" Symbiot is ko'ed easily "It looks like ash finally got some good competition." Added Meowth. Jessie was standing by him. "What do you mean by that! She yelled wile trashing Meowth.
Riptide reaches for Chaos, ash for Wartortle. "AAHHH! gyarados." James clings to Jessie. "Get of me. She shoves him and Chaos lunges at him. James runs away "AHHHHH!"
"Stop…ha hahah…that's not...ha ha ha... funny. Don't scare him like that heeee." Misty gave him a disgusted look. "How could you let your pokemon do that?" I did not tell him to do that, he's got a bad sense of humor." Riptide put the poke ball up "on with the fight." Riptide held two fingers up and gyarados used dragon rage. Wartortle managed to evade it. "Use hydro pump!"
Chaos the hit sent him flying through some plants. He did not like being hit. Riptide held a fist up but chaos ignored it and suddenly used ice beam. wartortle was frozen solid and chaos was about to use bite. "Stop the fights over. There's no sense in being like that." he throws a poke ball retrieving chaos ash turned to Riptide "that's not allowed chaos would not listen to you. Misty butted it "Riptide is disqualified. "No I'm not, that is not in the rules. "Cheater yelled Misty. "shut up brat." She turned around to Jessie.
Wile misty and Jessie yelled at each other, Ash releases muk, Riptide king. "Use sludge. Machoke was hit and poisoned. "Get up and use this move." Riptide punched the air. King used earthquake. Muk was nearly ko'ed. "whoa, is the twerp going to loose? James started cheering "go riptide go riptide..." "its going to be pikachu verses pikachu." Pointed out Meowth. Misty mumbled in a low voice. "Don't loose don't loose..." "Muk use toxic." King is barely standing now.
"Come on don't faint" Riptide made a shooting motion with his fingers King gathered all his strength and used mega punch. it all most missed muk but it was enough to KO him. J, J&M screamed "Yeaaaahhh!" Misty yelled "Nnooooo,ash don't loose." And fell to the ground. Ash through out charizard, Riptide inferno.
Charizard was willing to listen to Ash this time. He used slash. Inferno evaded the attack. Then he landed on top of a ledge "meleon char char ch eon!" Charizard got rather mad and blew a fire ball at him. Inferno just jumped. " ch ch zaaarrrd!" James turned to "Meowth, what did they say" "You really don't want to know." Riptide put his fist together and punched to the right.
Inferno jumped up then did a back flip over charizards head and used flamethrower. Ash screamed "firespin now" he managed to trap inferno in fire. The man in the trench coat walked through the door leaned against the thaw and watched them. Riptide held his hands up then held them straight out to his sides. Inferno used counter charizard was hurt badly but returned with seismic toss. Inferno was ko'ed. Ash gives Riptide a dirty grin. Riptide returned it "well we only got one match left, come on D.C." pikachu on stage. And D.C ran and did a front flip "let's get it ooon!"