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Okay the battle is almost over. At least the battle with the pokemon. Note "this" are used whe n people are thinking.
Ash sent his pikachu out first. "Pika pika pi." Riptide walked over to his pikachu. "Okay I really don't need to tell you anything but I have to signal you, so use quick attack." D.C sent pikachu flying in to a wall. But she got up easily "Use thunderbolt now!" D.C went flying through the air and landed with a loud thud. " pika pikaa" pikachu waved a finger in the air. "Your Pikachu's got a real attitude, I like that but I still have to win." Riptide turned to D.C "Use seismic toss."
D.C throws Pikachu across the hall doing the same amount of damage thunderbolt did. Ash looked at his pokemon making sure she was okay. "Use quick attack!" D.C dogged it effortlessly. "What, No way?" Riptide smiled. "My pikachu is much faster than yours, couldn't you tell? D.C use your special move." D.C rushed pikachu and did a thunderbolt dropkick. Ash looked at that in shock. "What, pikachu can't learn how to do a drop kick. I don't know how he did that but it's unfair."
"Whoa, he can do that." Came James. Meowth suddenly had a idea "The boss would be so proud of us if we…" Riptide looked at them then at the man watching them "You can not have my pikachu. And Ash I taught that move to pikachu because my parents are good at many forms of fighting and martial arts then they taught me so D.C wanted to learn. That makes it ok. Plus your pikachu is was not ko'ed." Ash pointed to his pikachu "She is staggering around because of that unfair hit!" riptide walked back to the edeg of the platform."Your acting like a cry baby, Ash." "I'll show you cry baby, pikachu thunder!" Team rocket ducked as the electricity went every where. Riptide stood with histhere wile the windows cracked. "I'm not scared of you."
When it was all over D.C was sill standing but trying not to fall over and faint. Misty walked towards D.C. "Thunder should have knocked it out. Is that thing normal?" Brock couldn't believe this. "D.C this will be all over. She doesn't have that much Hp so nothing fancy and get hit with a counter attack. Use thunderbolt." Yelled RiptideD.C tried but the electricity hit random places.This was the last battle and pickachu was dodging and coming at him fast. He cleared his head and struck pikachu.
Ash rushed over to pikachu and picked her up. Jessie ran around in bliss "Somebody actually beat the thing." James and Meowth were staring in shock. "Why, Ash why did you put me in the bet." Misty hit Ash over the head a couple of times. Riptide winked at Ash. "How bout you keep the hat, I don't really need another one. Come on Misty." "How long do I have to fallow you?" Riptide walked out and noticed the man was gone. "I'll think later." Ash and Brock went to the pokemon center. Riptide healed his pokemon with Max Revive.
"D.C, do you and the other pokemon want ice cream?" D.C waved his head Riptide turned to Misty. "Do you want ice cream?" "Yes I would love some ice cream." Riptide tilts his head telling team rocket to leave.
Later in the ice cream shop. Riptide looked out of the window "I knew I saw that guy again. What does he want? I wonder if he's looking for a fight."He turned to Misty "There's nothing really good in this town except for the rocket corner, want to go." Misty looked him up and down "Aren't you a little too young to go to that." Riptide walked up to the door. There was a fat man leaning against the out side wall by the door that he didnot see. "Then what do you think we should do?"
Misty walked out the door and grabbed Riptides hand. "Maybe we should go to the fair?" D.C fallowed them out. "Hum… that sounds good. I want to get on the big coaster." "You're to short, but let's go anyway."
They headed to the fair. When they were to far away the man in the trench walked up to the fat man. "Cook what did they say?" Cook was fiddling with a cell phone "How's this peace of crap suppose to work."
"Maybe it was not a good idea to resurrect you" "No I'm happy to be alive." Dog was getting impatient "Where are they going." There going to the big fair. Said they want to ride the coaster. So you think he's Logan's son." "Don't call him that." Dog loomed over him menacingly. "He is James's son. I saw his pokemon ID"
"So what you going to do." Dog growled. "Take away what he loves. His son is dead." Dog flashed a knife.Him and Cook followed them.
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