Hey all...sorry I haven't written in a while...I've had MAJOR (and I mean the kind that makes you depressed) writer's block for deleted two weeks! Grr! So yeah...reviewers, you guys are great, and I want to thank each of you personally, so here goes:

Dark-Swan:Thanks! I do intend to do some of this in first person, it really depends on the scene, but fear not I shan't (lol) do any more scenes (except maybe one near the end) from 2 POV's. I never intended on writing the movie word for word, I just had to "borrow" that scene where she meets him because it's so good! Actually, if you go back and read the very first part of the first chapter (the AN, which I added after you reviewed), I did mention that it's going to be a LOT different, a lot more psychological and it gets into the actual depth of the story (where Neverland comes from, why Peter won't grow up, etc.).

WildPixieChild and Karaniya-broken: Here you are! Sorry it's so short, it's meant to be this way, the next chapter (which I HAVE written) will be a lot longer I promise.

LunaSoleil07: Thank you! Yes, I decided while watching the movie that it would be really neat to see an age where they would still be (barely) considered children but could actually fall in love; also, the Neverland events (see the newly-added AN at the top of the first chapter) will not be the same as in the movie (which I really need to re-watch), but they'll be similar enough to keep to the story. I have to change a few things to keep to my version, which isn't really AU, it's more reality-based I guess, such as (see top review response) where Neverland actually came from, who the pirates really are, etc. I hope you continue to review!

ScrewtheJediCode786: I have not heard of these "Wiggles"...:backs away in fear and loathing:...but here is the next chappie!

Harley: Like you said, it won't copy the film/book (which I've only read a shortened version of so all original-book-lovers please don't flame TOO much!) exactly...and thank you for the criticism (which I probably need and VERY much appreciate), I won't be doing any more chapters-from-2-POV's except possibly one near the end. I only did the first one like this because I needed both their initial reactions at meeting one another. I hope you keep reading and reviewing!

Kaiu: I, too, am confused...I have no idea what the heck Me'shell (who has since taken his/her account off the site) was talking about. I'm glad you reviewed anyway!

Wendy

The land was very dark, as if all the lights in London had been covered with a fog. We flew—flew!—over the streets and alleys, snow-covered in the dimness far below. I gasped in wonder as we passed over the Thames, all the lights on the water shimmering in myriad colors like so many gems flashing in the display case at the jeweler's. Peter had a firm grip on my hand, and he smiled at my awed expression. How was this possible? I was sure I was still dreaming.

I shouted something of this nature to him, and he grinned. "Much of life is a dream," he shouted back, wind catching his hair and tossing it into his face. He faced forward again, and I saw that the horizon seemed to be shifting slowly, blending with the foggy light below to create a swirling mist of deep blue and starlight.

"What is that?" I was vaguely aware that John and Michael were nowhere to be seen.

He didn't hear me. I tugged on his hand insistently. He looked back, and I saw that he looked like he was concentrating on something, but then his face cleared, and he yelled, "What?"

"What is that?" I pointed with my left hand to the horizon. He smiled, eyes lighting up as they rested on the glow that was beginning to form on the very edge of the mist.

"Neverland."

And then I felt my arm pull as if it was being ripped from its socket, and we were sucked into the edge of the world.

Yes, I know this is short...I PROMISE THE NEXT ONE WILL BE LONGER! This is short because...well, because there is only one line in here that is really crucial to the rest of the story :grins evilly: Please, please review...I won't post until I get at least 5 reviews! Muhahahaha! lol anyway, I really do appreciate any feedback you have, and I love writing this, so please do review soon!

Sirius' Polaris