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BLUEslushPUPPIES: the news isn't good, but no one dies, they were originally going to, but I thought that Keely wouldn't take that very well, so that's not what happens… Hope you like it!
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Dana's eyes darted from Phil and Keely to the doctor standing there.
"Yes doctor," Phil said standing up
"Well, this has nothing to do with Seth, but it might very soon, you see, Tia was brought here to be checked into the insane asylum, and she escaped the police, she is loose somewhere in the hospital, and we're afraid she'll find Seth,"
"Oh no." Keely said
"Do you have any idea where she could be?" Phil asked the police
"No, but we think she's-"
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Tia yelled, as she leaped from where she was standing, to Keely's chair, and knocked her over.
"What are you doing?" Keely yelled
"Killing you, you took Seth away from me, so now I have to kill you," Tia said, starting to strangle Keely
Phil looked at Dana, then at the doctors, who weren't doing anything, so Phil had to do something, he stood up from his chair, and grabbed Tia, and threw her away from Keely, then picked Keely up off the ground and stood in front of her, blocking her, so Tia couldn't get to her.
Tia jumped up from the ground, and tried to run over to Keely, but Dana stood in her way.
"What are you doing, kid? Get the hell out of my way, this isn't about you."
"No, you want to get to my mom, you have to get through me first." Dana said
"Fine," Tia backed up, and fell to the ground.
This was so weird, had she fainted? Had she died? No, they couldn't have been that lucky, Tia started to move across the floor, then she almost slipped past Dana, but Dana was too smart for that. Dana kicked her in the side, and then she picked her up off the ground, and shoved her on to one of the chairs, Tia was so shocked by this, that she jumped up from the chair, and hit Dana in the head, Dana knocked her down, and twisted her arm behind her back, so she couldn't move, then the police officers finally came, the chief took his gun out of the holster, and pointed it at Tia,
"You're defiantly going into the asylum now, Miss Wong," he said
"Thank-you Miss Teslow, we can take it from here," another officer said, taking Tia off the ground, and handcuffing her.
"Oh, you're welcome." Dana said, turning to her parents, who were so shocked they couldn't move.
"Dana, you, you just kicked Tia's ass, how….." Phil said, still standing in front of Keely.
"I don't know, I guess, I just, saw you and mom needed me, and I just, fought back. I guess like Selene said," Dana said
"Yeah," Keely said.
"So dad, you were about to do something important, care to finish what you were saying?" Dana said sitting down in the other chair next to him.
"Well, Dana, I think I should finish saying what I was going to say, somewhere other than here, it might have to wait."
"O.K." Dana said, disappointed.
"Where Phil?" Keely said
"Um…..I don't know yet, I'll have to consult Dana."
"O.K." Keely said laughing, "I'll go to the restroom while you consult the master," she said putting her hand on Dana's shoulder, then walking away.
When she had disappeared from sight, Phil said to Dana, "Where should I take her? I have absolutely no ideas,"
"Hmmm," Dana said, "Oh! Take a yacht out on the bay, on one of those dinner cruises, but it's a private dinner cruise, just you, mom, and me. And you have candles everywhere, and her favorite champagne, and then, when you're in the middle of the bay, when the moon shines perfectly on mom, then you propose."
"Wow, Dana, that's so perfect, I wasn't going to let you be there, but, I thought that that was such a stupid idea not to have you there, because this is so important to you, and that this entire master plan was your idea. You have to be there," Phil said
"Thanks, I would go whether or not you wanted me to or not," Dana said laughing.
"I know," Phil said.
Dana smiled at him, and went to reserve a yacht for that night. Phil watched Dana call, she reminded him so much of Keely, although Keely was the love of his life, he occasionally wished that Keely was more like Dana. Dana some how knew when something was going on, like if Keely was the daughter, and Dana was the one Phil was going to propose to, she would have figured it out, and not fallen all over Seth, but Phil could get passed the fact that Dana and Keely were different people, after all, Dana was part of Phil and Keely. And Keely was part of Charles and Mandy Teslow, very different people.
"Hey," Keely said, interrupting Phil's train of thought
"Hi," he said
"Who's Dana calling?"
"Oh, the time,"
"But she's wearing a watch."
"Oh, then she's calling 867-5309,"
"What? You mean 'Jenny, Jenny who can turn to?' Tommy Tutone? That 867-5309?"
"Yeah. I don't know who she's calling."
Dana hung up the phone, and walked over to Phil and Keely.
"Hey, who were you calling?" Keely said
"Oh, the time." Dana said
"But you're wearing a watch,"
"Yeah, but it stopped, and I changed the battery and the time was wrong,"
"Oh,"
"Hey, Keel, we have reservations at 8, to be at the bay, but we need to go home and change, it's a formal place,"
"O.K.," Keely said
Before leaving, they said good-bye to Seth, and told him about Tia's attack, and they went home.
Dana and Keely took quite a while to find what they were going to wear, Phil tried to hurry them along by saying, 'Whatever you wear you look beautiful anyway,' but it didn't help. About an hour after he said that, Dana and Keely were finally ready. Dana was wearing a black semi off the shoulder dress with a turquoise necklace, and black pumps, She had part of her hair back with a rose shaped diamond barrette. Keely had put on a light blue halter dress, a diamond necklace, and strappy light blue spike heeled sandals, She had left her hair down, with very small rose clips in it, for decoration. Phil, of course, was wearing a tux.
"Wow, you both look, amazing." Phil said
"Thanks" They said in unison.
"So, where exactly are we going?" Keely asked
"A dinner cruise," both Dana and Phil said
"O.K., let's go." Keely said.
Phil held out his right arm, and Keely took it. Then Dana cleared her throat, and he quickly held out his left, and Dana took it.
They were almost out the door, when the phone rang.
