Yutaan: Hi! This is my first update, so please leave reviews and tips for improvement. No spam, flames, or random letters typed over and over, thanks.
Ashley: holds up sign She doesn't own YuYu Hakusho.
Yutaan: …Ashley-chan, the sign is upside down.
Ashley: I know. Oh yeah, and please note that this is a HUMOR fic. Meaning, the beginnings of chapters are overly dramatic and seem like some weird thing is happening. Okay? Okay. Just checking, 'cause everyone gets scared by this first chapter. Goodbye. drops sign and runs
Yutaan: waving enthusiastically Ashley-chan is my best friend, OC, and muse. She's kinda scary, but you learn to love her.
…Oh, yeah, and this is the second time I've submitted this fic; hopefully this time it has indentations…. Heh. Those didn't upload last time.
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NOT WHAT IT SEEMS
-a YYH fic-
Chapter One: Bloody Battle?
Tortured screams rent the air, seeming to slice through thick walls and icy silence like knives. They swirled akin to the tormented souls of the damned, ringing harshly in Keiko's ears.
She bent her head forward, concentrating hard on her hands folded tightly in her lap. Her knuckles turned white as Yusuke shrieked again, stretching her frail will with its wordless notes of agony.
"Keiko help me!"
She gritted her teeth and pushed her hair over her ears, a futile attempt to block out the ghastly sounds.
"He's killing m-" Yusuke's fresh cry was suddenly choked off, an alien whine boring deep into Keiko's chest. She heard thrashing and harsh, guttural noises. Her pulse pounded; her fingernails left half-moon dents in her skin. She couldn't take much more of this….
Another wordless scream tore through the room, and Keiko's last ounce of strength shattered like a dropped mirror. She leapt to her feet, flaming heat rushing to her head and magnifying her speeding heartbeat. She flew through the dim hallways, searching for Yusuke, her labored breathing echoing off the frigid walls.
A final cry led her to a small doorway, tinged green in the glaring light. Keiko shoved it open and came upon a horrible scene: a masked man leaning over a writhing Yusuke, a sharp, gleaming instrument in one hand, a hissing tube in the other.
Yusuke spotted her and clawed dramatically in her direction. "Oh my god, Keiko! Get me outta here!"
The man straightened up, pulled down his green mask, and sighed wearily. "Now, Mr. Urameshi, only one more cavity to fill and then we're done." Yusuke made some horrible groaning sounds in reply, rolling his eyes back.
Keiko stomped her foot. "Jeez Yusuke, can't you even behave at the dentist?!"
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Yutaan: Okay, well… thanks for reading. Yeah, the point of the fic is for you to think one thing is going on, usually something overly dramatic and dangerous, when something else is really going on… also probably overly dramatic and dangerous. Soooo… um. Yeah. Please review and check for Chapter Two next week, because CH.2 is my favorite one. Heh… I shoulda started with that one….
Ashley: FLAMETHROWERS! MWAHAHA!
Ashley: holds up sign She doesn't own YuYu Hakusho.
Yutaan: …Ashley-chan, the sign is upside down.
Ashley: I know. Oh yeah, and please note that this is a HUMOR fic. Meaning, the beginnings of chapters are overly dramatic and seem like some weird thing is happening. Okay? Okay. Just checking, 'cause everyone gets scared by this first chapter. Goodbye. drops sign and runs
Yutaan: waving enthusiastically Ashley-chan is my best friend, OC, and muse. She's kinda scary, but you learn to love her.
…Oh, yeah, and this is the second time I've submitted this fic; hopefully this time it has indentations…. Heh. Those didn't upload last time.
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NOT WHAT IT SEEMS
-a YYH fic-
Chapter One: Bloody Battle?
Tortured screams rent the air, seeming to slice through thick walls and icy silence like knives. They swirled akin to the tormented souls of the damned, ringing harshly in Keiko's ears.
She bent her head forward, concentrating hard on her hands folded tightly in her lap. Her knuckles turned white as Yusuke shrieked again, stretching her frail will with its wordless notes of agony.
"Keiko help me!"
She gritted her teeth and pushed her hair over her ears, a futile attempt to block out the ghastly sounds.
"He's killing m-" Yusuke's fresh cry was suddenly choked off, an alien whine boring deep into Keiko's chest. She heard thrashing and harsh, guttural noises. Her pulse pounded; her fingernails left half-moon dents in her skin. She couldn't take much more of this….
Another wordless scream tore through the room, and Keiko's last ounce of strength shattered like a dropped mirror. She leapt to her feet, flaming heat rushing to her head and magnifying her speeding heartbeat. She flew through the dim hallways, searching for Yusuke, her labored breathing echoing off the frigid walls.
A final cry led her to a small doorway, tinged green in the glaring light. Keiko shoved it open and came upon a horrible scene: a masked man leaning over a writhing Yusuke, a sharp, gleaming instrument in one hand, a hissing tube in the other.
Yusuke spotted her and clawed dramatically in her direction. "Oh my god, Keiko! Get me outta here!"
The man straightened up, pulled down his green mask, and sighed wearily. "Now, Mr. Urameshi, only one more cavity to fill and then we're done." Yusuke made some horrible groaning sounds in reply, rolling his eyes back.
Keiko stomped her foot. "Jeez Yusuke, can't you even behave at the dentist?!"
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Yutaan: Okay, well… thanks for reading. Yeah, the point of the fic is for you to think one thing is going on, usually something overly dramatic and dangerous, when something else is really going on… also probably overly dramatic and dangerous. Soooo… um. Yeah. Please review and check for Chapter Two next week, because CH.2 is my favorite one. Heh… I shoulda started with that one….
Ashley: FLAMETHROWERS! MWAHAHA!