I don't like sounding like an idiot, but…
OH MY GOSHNESS!
Thirty-seven reviews! One hundred seven hits! Three favorites and one alert! I was expecting reviews like this: "OMG! I hate U! Y did u make Hinamori so crazy! WTF?"
But I got really great reviews! So great, in fact, that I'm going to go against my moral code and A) start writing early and B) reply to the reviews. It usually takes me a week to make new chapters on my stuff, and I really should be working on my FMA fic… but this one is more fun!
Senx2: I shall, I shall...
Nelia-chan: Get your lil' bro to go to They have an online manga viewer so he can read the next chapters soon. CLEAR HITSUGAYA-KUN'S NAME!
Daisuke-fan-gurl: A daisuke fan? Thank goodness my old Digimon fics got deleted. Or maybe you speak of DNAngel... Whatever THANK YOU FOR ADDING IT TO YOUR FAVORIT LIST! MARRY ME! Just kidding...
Hyourinmaru: Isn't that the name ofHitsugaya-kun's Soul cutter? Hm… thank you for the complement! (Cries with happiness)
Reviewer #31: I feel so loved right now…
BloodPuddles: Bloodpuddles… what a happy name... Anyway, thank you for signing the review! Now I can read your Naruto fiction! Yay, Naruto! Gaara! Yar!
TimCHell: Yes, Hanatarou does equal love. I try to squeeze him into all of my bleach fiction when I can. On a different note, are you aware you reviewed (Counts) nine thousand times? You must like my stories! (Self esteem meter goes up a notch)
Okay for a fan Japanese guide, I'm not gonna type the same thing over again, so check the last chapter! Please!
Also, this was planned to be the last chapter. I don't know, though, I really don't know where my fics are gonna take me. I only follow. I sound a philosophy-ish!
Also, I don't like Matsumoto/Hitsugaya and that's not what I'm saying. It's just a joke. I promise! I also think Hanatarou is a little bit outta character, but no one else I know reads bleach, so I can't ask them. (cries) I want a beta!
Hitsugaya was staring out a window and Matsumoto was staring into space. Hitsugaya guessed staring out a window was better. At least you where staring at something. And now Matsumoto was staring at her foot.
Her sexy foot.
Hitsugaya shook his head. Her very sexy foot.
Hitsugaya punched himself in the head.
"He... stabbed me?"
"Yes, that's why you have a breathing problem, right?" Hanatarou was getting scarred now; this girl was starting to sound a little weird. Well, weirder than she had ten seconds ago, he meant.
"No, Captain Aizen wouldn't ever do something like that." Hinamori laughed it off. This boy must be mistaken.
"He did! I'm from the fourth squad, Captain Uohana's rescue squad, and I was one of the ones who helped heal you. The knife still had traces of Aizen's aura on it." Hanatarou hadn't actually done the healing, but if one of the healers couldn't do it, he was the first back up.
"No! H-he wouldn't, I... I..." Hinamori but her hand just below her left shoulder, "Is that what this scar is from, Yamada-kun?" Her voice was back to its previous whisper.
"I-I guess...Usually Captain Uohana doesn't leave scars." Hanatarou said, "It must have been a really deep cut."
"Really?"
"Yes, I think so." Hanatarou smiled as to comfort her, but then remembered that she couldn't see him, so it didn't matter.
"That would mean..." Her voice was so quiet now; it was hard for Hanatarou to hear it through a wall, "That Hitsugaya-kun... Wasn't lying?"
"I-I assume so." Hanatarou almost nodded.
"Hitsugaya-kun isn't a liar and Captain Aizen stabbed me." Hinamori whispered.
"H-he isn't a captain anymore." Hanatarou pointed out.
"Aizen stabbed me. Aizen stabbed me." She echoed.
Hanatarou was really creeped out.
Knock knock.
"Anou... Captain Hitsugaya...?" said a voice Hitsugaya couldn't identify.
"Yes? You can come in." Hitsugaya, who had recently watched Matsumoto and her sexy feet leave, said.
A small, frail-looking boy not much taller than Hinamori stepped in, "Anou, I'm Yamada Hanatarou of the fourth squad, and I'm the one currently watching Hinamori-san." The boy sat down, "Because Hinamori-san doesn't have any commanding officers anymore I was told to report to you, sir, and well…"
"Please cut to the chase, Yamada-san." The captain of the tenth division was getting a little annoyed.
"Uh, yes, sir, well, Hinamori-san has been talking to herself, now." Hanatarou nodded.
"Should I check it out?"
"Uh, yes, I think you should." Hanatarou was a little bit intimidated by a captain who was younger than himself. He couldn't stop stuttering. This guy must be really smart.
"All right, then." Hitsugaya mentally started preparing himself. Whatever he was going to see, he wasn't going to like it. He grabbed his soul cutter and followed Hanatarou to Hinamori's room.
"Aizen stabbed me. Aizen stabbed me. Aizen stabbed me!" Hinamori whispered from the confines of her room.
"Hinamori-Chan." Hitsugaya lightly tapped on Hinamori's door, "Can I talk to you?"
"Hitsugaya-kun?"
"Yes, that's me."
"I'm sorry."
"Wh-what? Why?" This was all starting to bother Hitsugaya much more than it should. He didn't want to cry again. No, not again.
"I called you a liar." Hinamori was starting to sound like normal again, "Yamada-kun told me you're not a liar. I'm sorry I didn't believe you."
"I-it's okay, Hinamori-chan." Hitsugaya pressed his hand against the door. The wood was warm. Hinamori's room had always been very warm and stuffy. Keeping the door closed for three days in a row, it must be like a sauna in there!
"Do you forgive me, Hitsugaya-kun?" Hinamori asked.
"I... I forgive you. You'll have to talk to Matsumoto-san, though." Hitsugaya started to open the door, "You where pretty mean to her, too."
Hinamori stepped out of her room, "I was, wasn't I? I'm sorry. Gosh, it's hot in there." She looked back into her room, thinking of a day ago when it had seemed so cold, "I want a new room."
Hitsugaya chuckled, "I'll look into that."
Hanatarou sighed. He was glad Hinamori was okay. She had healed well, physically, but her mind needed a little bit more time.
It had been more of a mental thing.
I like how that ended. I think I did well! W/ 36 reviews (Mr. TimCHell!) I think I did very well!
I might be able to write another chapter. It would be unplanned, though, and it would probably have nothing to do with the plot. It would be ether a reflection or a character sketch. If you want me to write it, please tell me.
So...
HINAMORI-CHAN WANTS YOU! …TO REVIEW!