A Naruto Fan Fiction
Created by: HaganeSpirits
The first Fan Fiction that I published. Characters from this Fan Fiction are copyrighted with full respectful to Masashi Kishimoto-san. Thank you Kishimoto-san for all characters that you have in Naruto. I do not own all characters from Naruto, but the characters that I made are totally mine. Thank you!
Hidden Scroll I: A new teacher for Naruto?
Twelve years past in Konohagakure. Naruto stuck in the branch with sour face. Sakura sat near Naruto and Sasuke lied down on the grass, waited for Kakashi. Same as usual, he always being late.
"Oh my GOD! Geez, where's that sensei?" Naruto yelled and grumbled in the tree, it almost made him fell down. Sasuke woke up and looked around. Well, there's no sight about him. Sakura glanced to Naruto, then to Sasuke. She was so bored to wait again.
Not long, they heard a loud shout from their left. Naruto and Sasuke got up quickly and looked to the direction. Some kind of women voice, they thought. There's a girl with some men. It looks like she got some trouble with it. Naruto ran approached her.
"Hey, get out from this girl! You have some business with her!" Poof! Sasuke and Sakura appeared near Naruto and that girl. Some of those people tried to attack Naruto, but Naruto just avoided them and kicked their head on by one. Well, the other ran way. That girl smiled to Naruto.
"Thank you for your helping. What is your name?" She tied again her hair with a blue ribbon and looked to Naruto.
"Naruto! Your name?"
"Oh, my name is Kamaitachi Rei. All right, would you mind if I give something for the payment of your help? " Naruto's face became so happier. He jumped with joy and asked to Rei.
"Nee-chan! Would you mind to treat us some ramen in Ichiraku! Please!" Rei only nodded. Naruto yelled and jumped with joy in front of Rei, made Rei got some sweat-dropped. Sasuke and Sakura lifted their shoulder.
The Ichiraku was so full. It made Naruto so disappointed.
"Maybe next time, Naruto-kun? I'm so sorry." Rei looked to Naruto who mumbled something like: "my ramen… my ramen…I can't eat my ramen…" and sweat-dropped again. Sasuke started to feel that girl have some jounin attributes.
Rei's front hair grew a little bit longer than the back hair, because her back hair was cut down and it colors was black. She wore a konoha forehead protector in her left arm and it seems that she was a left-handed, because her shuriken holster is in her left leg. She tied a black scarf in her right arm. Her clothes was a blue long-coat with Konoha symbol in the right side of the coat and some scroll pouches at the coat that looks like same as the scroll pouches in jounin jacket. There's also a fishnet clothes for the undershirt. She wore a half trouser with fishnet trouser and boots shoes too. Her eyes were black, same as Sasuke.
"Oh, I forgot to ask something. Err… where is the Hokage's building?" Sasuke pointed to the big building in their north.
"… Had I been… lost?" Naruto lifted his shoulder to Rei. She became so embarrassed and laughed by herself.
"Oh my God, I think I've become so strange this day… Err… Would you mind to bring me to there? I afraid I will lost again…" Sakura, Naruto, and Sasuke nodded and accompanied her to the Hokage's building.
"Hey, Rei nee-chan. Are you a new shinobi? What kind of business do you have in the Hokage's building?" asked Naruto to Rei.
"Well, actually no. I have some affairs with 5th Hokage." Sasuke and Sakura whispered to each other. It seems that they have same perspective about Rei.
"With Tsunade obaa-chan? What's the affair?" Rei startled at once. She only smiled to Naruto and shook her head. Sakura looked to Rei and asked one thing.
"Rei-san, are you a jounin?" Rei saw Sakura with amazed face.
"… How did you know that?"
"Well, your attributes. Your clothes have the same design as jounin jacket; especially that scroll pouches." Sakura pointed to the scroll pouches in Rei's coat. "And there are only some exceptions in jounin that you can use another coat." Rei and Naruto made such a clicked noise of amazed. Rei caressed Sakura's head.
"Great! Your name? And you, yes you who beside that girl. Tell me your name too." Rei pointed to Sasuke who now looked closely to Rei.
"Haruno Sakura."
"Uchiha Sasuke. Hey, if you're a jounin, why didn't you finish those men by yourself?"
"Actually, I didn't really want to hurt anyone. Hehehe…" Sasuke looked to Rei and then he turned back his body.
"You're too kind. Rei-san, we have arrived in Hokage's building."
The Hokage's building was so huge if you saw from their eyes. Rei said 'thanks' to them and left them. Naruto more than sure that there's something secretly between Tsunade and Rei, so he asked the others to spied her.
"Wait a minute, Naruto. Are you always doing this bad habit all time?" Sakura shrank her forehead and began to complain Naruto. Sasuke sighed.
"Well, not all time as you say. I just want to know what's going with Rei nee-chan with Tsunade obaa-chan! Only that's all!" Naruto slithered into the Hokage's building, followed by Sasuke and Sakura. Ebisu, the special jounin and the teacher of Konohamaru, saw them slithered to the Hokage's building.
"Naruto! What are you doing right here? Get out now!" Ebisu tried to threw him up, but before it…
"Tsk! Kage-Bushin no Jutsu! Harem no Jutsu!" Some naked women appeared around Ebisu and made him got more nosebleeds. He fainted at last.
"Hey, hey Naruto. What is that 'thing'?" Sakura pointed to those clones.
"Hehehe…that's my precious Jutsu. I have finished the 3rd Hokage with this Jutsu too!" Sakura shrank her forehead and shook her head. Sasuke sighed a lot around this day. With a 'Poof!' noise, all clones disappeared into smokes. Naruto successfully slithered into the front of Tsunade's office. In the office, they heard the conversation between Rei and Tsunade…
"Well, Rei. Do you really accept the title of 'special jounin'? It will become more difficult if you depend only at this title. I didn't persistent you with it, but… it's your choice." Tsunade got up from her chair and looked closely to Rei.
"… I'll take this title. This is my really choice."
"All right. Kakashi?" Suddenly, Kakashi appeared beside Rei. Naruto almost yelled to Kakashi if Sakura and Sasuke not tried to shut up his mouth with forced.
"Yes, Hokage?"
"Do you mind if your subordinates would be taken over by her? I want to give you some missions to Otogakure and your companies are Gai, Kurenai, and Anko. Can you?" Kakashi looked carefully to Rei. Suddenly the door opened. Naruto, with Sasuke and Sakura, fell into the Tsunade's office. Tsunade screamed so loud to Naruto, while Sakura and Sasuke ran away to hide behind Kakashi.
"WHAT IS IT! NARUTO, WHERE IS YOU RESPECTFUL TO THE OLDER! I HAVE SOME IMPORTANT CONVERSATION WITH THIS TWO AND YOU INTERUPPTED ME!" Tsunade grap Naruto's clothes and threw Naruto to the wall. Kakashi lifted his shoulder and sighed. Rei startled when she looked to Naruto.
"Naruto-kun? What are you doing here?" Tsunade turned back to Rei and surprised. Same as Kakashi. He surprised that Rei had known his subordinates.
"How did you know him?" Tsunade pointed to Naruto and looked to Rei.
"Well, he helped me last time. Thanks to he, and them, I can reach this place safely." Tsunade looked to Rei with a 'amazed and can't believe' face and glanced to Naruto, who still mumbled something that's not too clearly.
"Oh well. Just forget it. Kakashi, here's the scroll. And Rei, bring them get out from this building. Introduce yourself to them. Oh yeah, Naruto, I give permission for Rei to live at your home. And there's no complain." Tsunade picked her scroll and gave it to Kakashi.
"WHAT KIND OF HOKAGE ARE YOU! Just left her alone in my house, my house is not a STORAGE!"
"JUST SHUT UP YOUR MOUTH! REI, BRING THEM OUT, NOW!" Tsunade had thrown up Naruto from her office. Rei, Sasuke, and Sakura got out from that room quietly. Naruto only can grumbled in front of the office with sour face. Rei brought them to a yard near the faces of the Hokage.
"Naruto-kun, is that too hurt?" Naruto shook his head and curled his tongue. Rei spread Naruto's wound with a special ointment. The wound seems got better.
"Got better, thanks." Rei smiled to Naruto. She left Naruto with Sasuke and Naruto, climbed a big tree and sat in the branch.
"Well, I will become your teacher since this day. I like to hear about all of you. Ok, started from Naruto-kun!" Rei pointed to Naruto. Naruto fixed his forehead protector's position and grinned.
"My name is Uzumaki Naruto. Age 12 years old. A genin. Like to eat ramen. The most thing I like is someone who treat me ramen. I don't like to wait ramen too long. My hobby is doing some ignorant. My ideal are become Hokage and make all people appreciate me!" Rei laughed a lot and looked to Naruto with smiled.
"That's cool! All right, all right. Next, Sasuke-kun!"
"My name is Uchiha Sasuke. Age 12 years old. A genin too. There's nothing specially I really like. I have many things that I don't like. My ambitions are to revive my clan and… kill a man. My hobby is training." Rei breathed and went to in front of them.
"Are you… from Uchiha clan?" Sasuke nodded quietly.
"Is that so… Ok, thank you, Sasuke-kun. Next, the last one!" Rei pointed to Sakura. Sakura looked to other direction for a while and then she moved her face to watched Rei.
"Ok. My name is Haruno Sakura. Age 12 years old. I'm a genin. I like… kya! I can't say it, sorry. I don't like to waste time. My hobby is looking at…kya! Ops! Sorry sensei! My ideal is being a great kunoichi like Tsunade-sama. Rei-sensei, why didn't you introduce yourself to us?" Rei raised her eyebrows and the she moved to back.
"Well, thank you for remembering me, Sakura-chan. My name is Kamaitachi Rei. I am a special jounin in assassination squads and will become your teacher for a while. I am 16 years old…" Suddenly Naruto stood up and yelled so loud.
"WHAT! YOU STILL 16 YEARS OLD! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!" Sakura and Sasuke looked to Naruto with sadden faces. Well, it's kind of amazing to hear such a young girl could be a special jounin. Not surprised if Naruto was shocked. But has Naruto must acted something like that?
"Is that too strange? If that so, just forget it. I became genin at age 15 years old and jounin in last week. I like everything that taste sweet. I don't like something that smells reeks. My hobbies are cooking, cleaning, and training. My ideal is being a genius kunoichi. That's all. … Hey, I got a good idea! Naruto-kun, would you mind if I asked them to stay for three of four days in your house? It seems good to me!"
Well, it's good for Rei, if she didn't know what kind of Naruto's house. Naruto never cleaned his house and it looks so dirty and there are many spider webs all over the house. Also, Naruto didn't want to many guesses in his house, especially Sasuke. With miserable face, Naruto tried to beg Rei for not asked the other came to his house.
"Rei nee-chan… I beg you. Don't asked Sasuke and Sakura came to my house. It's… so dirty." Said Naruto lowered. Rei smiled warmly to Naruto and slapped Naruto's back.
"Don't worry about it! We will clean it together. Ok, let's go!" Sasuke and Sakura started to think what kind of Naruto's house. They have some bad perception about Naruto's house.
Rei walked in front of them with Naruto, followed by Sasuke and Naruto. Naruto felt not too well with it and he wanted to say his disagreement, but when he looked to Rei's face, Naruto could not erase the smiled in Rei's face without felt something's wrong with it. At last, they arrived in Naruto's house.
"Seems so dirty… Are you NEVER clean up your house?" Sakura looked to Naruto's house with disgusted sensation. Sasuke seems didn't want look any part of that house, so he looked to other direction to avoid saw Naruto's house. Rei's conception was only felt strange. Naruto closed his face with his hand. He didn't want to saw the other conception about his 'disgusted' house.
"Not… to bad. Naruto-kun, could you open the door, please?" With heavy sentiments, Naruto walked slowly to the door. He picked up a copper key and putted it into the keyhole. Sound of 'click' approached twice. Naruto pushed the door.
The house was very dirty. There're so many milk bottle that scattered on the floor. Some newspapers were left in the corner of the house. The spring bed's smell was really reeks. There're some spider webs in the corner of the ceiling and some trash with flies around it not far from the dining room.
"I feel queasy…" Sakura ran out from that house and almost vomited. Sasuke looked around Naruto's house and closed his nose with his handkerchief. Naruto stood up with a tone of 'I thought this is would be happened to me someday…' in his sour face. Rei was sweat-dropped when she looked at this.
"All right! Naruto-kun, pick up all aprons, mops, brooms, all things for cleaning that you have." Naruto turn back to faced Rei.
"I don't have any, nee-chan." Naruto lowered his voice at the last part. Some sweat-dropped appeared in Rei's face again. Same as Sasuke and Sakura.
"What?" questioned Rei loud out.
"I don't have anything for cleaning this house."
"So… How do you clean up your house?" asked Rei.
"I never clean it up." Suddenly Rei threw something to Naruto's hand. At once, Naruto's hand had been tied with a transparent string. Rei walked to Naruto with mad face and seems she like mumbled something to Naruto with a scary tone.
"Listen to me. I really hate someone who can't take care of his/her/it neatness. So I…." Suddenly Rei's face looks like empty, and then she looked at Naruto and her string. Sasuke and Sakura looked to her face. It's seems like she has another alter in her body.
"Hey? What I have done? Kya! Naruto-kun, are you all right!" Rei released the string as soon as she can. Naruto looks so scared with Rei. Rei said 'sorry' to Naruto all time and made Naruto felt relieved.
"I'm so sorry, Naruto-kun. Although I can't remember anything… Ok, I will teach you how to use your shinobi's tools for another function. Well, you can use shinobi's tools for fishing, farming, digging, also for cleaning. Naruto-kun, give me that useless fabric." Rei pointed to a worn-out fabric that Naruto held. Naruto gave it to Rei.
"Thank you. Mmm… Naruto-kun, Sasuke-kun, Sakura-chan, do you have your own string?" They shook they head to Rei. Rei silently for a while, and then she threw some strings to Sakura.
"Sakura-chan, divide it into three pieces. Give the other pieces to Naruto-kun and Sasuke-kun. All right, take your own kunai or shuriken. You don't need to use a big one, just take the normal. Take another fabrics too. First, tied the string to the hole in your kunai/shuriken and then tied the string to the fabrics too. Don't forget to make a hole in the fabrics first. Now, could you make your string upright like this?" Rei grap her string softly and the string was upright at once. Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke tried it too. Only Sakura who has understand the concept of that and can made her string upright to the ceiling.
"Awesome. You have a good control in chakra, Sakura-chan. Err, Naruto-kun, Sasuke-kun, you must do it by concentrated your chakra flows to that string and control the chakra to make your string upright. It's a good training for your chakra's control. If you can make the string upright, you can use it for battle too. Try it!"
Sakura and Rei already started cleaned the ceiling with that fabric, while Naruto and Sasuke still tried to made their string upright. Sasuke has improved well; his string can became upright but only for a while. Naruto was the worst one; his string only can bend over not explicit. Rei watched over Naruto while she cleaned up the spider webs.
"He has an awesome stamina. More awesome, more difficult to control it. Sasuke-kun has a great stamina too, but he can understand the concept quicker than Naruto. Is Naruto-kun was really didn't understand what I mean?" Rei sighed when she looked to Sasuke and Naruto.
"Maybe you think he was a 'not to clever' student, but he has improved much for his dream. He can make an original technique by himself. Maybe… someday he will defeat Sasuke with his hand. But it's still one hundred years to beat Sasuke." Rei smiled to Sakura and laughed together, made Sasuke and Naruto felt astonished with them.
At last Naruto successful made his string upright all time, but the other have finished with the cleaned. He can't believe it by himself, how could his 'stinky' house can be so neat and comfort, clean too! Rei and Sakura rightfully proud themselves. Sasuke only mumbled something like: 'waste times only for clean this house? Geez…' to Naruto.
"I see there's so much free space for me, Sakura-chan, and Sasuke-kun to sleep. So why didn't we stay in here together for a while? I will make a delicious dinner for you!" Sakura and Naruto jumped with joy around the kitchen, while Sasuke slumped to a comfortable chair.
"Can you stop jumping around this kitchen? I feel dizzy now. I bet Kakashi and his company were had some good facilities from Hokage." guessed Sasuke.
In Kakashi place, a sound of 'HATCHII!' appeared between them.
"Hey, hey Kakashi. How could you let your body got some cold in this day?" Anko and Kurenai gave Kakashi a medicine. Kakashi refused it and sniffed a lot.
"No, it's nothing. I guess there's someone who speaking about me out there…"
In Naruto's house, Sasuke prepared his pillow and lied down on his bed. He panted harshly. It's so comfortable, he thought. Not bad to stay for a while in Naruto's house. Hope there's no disturb from anyone…
BRAKK! Hey, I have just said that I didn't want any disturb!
"Hey Sasuke! The dinner almost ready! Come down now!" Naruto penetrated Sasuke's room and yelled to him so loud, and the he ran away. Sasuke scratched his back with fed up face an then he went down stairs to the dinning room. Something smells so good from the dinning room. It's most likely the smell of… ramen?
"Oh, have Naruto-kun made you woke up? Your dinner will be ready in a second, just wait at the table." Rei stirred the ramen in the pan and tasted it twice. It seems it was so delicious. The smell of ramen spread around the kitchen and the dinning room. It made Sasuke's mouth was watery. He cleaned up the water in his mouth and looked around.
"Rei-sensei, where's the other?"
"Oh, Naruto-kun went to the shop for a while. Sakura-chan was taking a bath. Oh yes, please don't too formally with me. I'm just a shift teacher; you could call me only with the front name or just call me 'nee-chan'. Here, your dinner." Rei placed the bowl of ramen and a glass of water in the table. Sasuke grap the plate and smelled it. It's seems it was really delicious.
"Thanks, Rei… nee-chan."
"Hehehe… Your welcome. Oh, have you washed your hand? If you haven't, wash your hand in the bathroom sink." Rei pointed to a toilet near the stair. Sasuke never thought there was a toilet in there, because it was too dark to seeing. Sasuke switched on the lamp and looked in the toilet. Hey, hey, isn't it to good for a normal toilet?
The toilet was great. The closet was really clean and some smell like Lavender flower approached around the toilet. The soap place seems made from copper with a clothes hanger beside it. The sink seems rubbed by Rei until being shined. Sasuke sweat-dropped. Who putted some scents of Lavender flower in this toilet!
Sasuke washed his hand and looked around the toilet. Make me feel strange, Sasuke thought. Suddenly the toilet door opened so hard and made Sasuke's head hit the edges of the sink. Naruto looked to inside to look what's going on. Some wrinkles appeared in Sasuke's head.
"WHAT NOW! Damn! Naruto, I told you now! If you disturb me next time, YOU WILL GET THE PUNISHMENT OF GOD…" Sasuke gave a heavy tone at the last word, made Naruto, felt scared for a while. The result of that hit was in Sasuke's head appeared a big lump with red colors. It seems it was so pain. Rei patched a bandage to Sasuke's lump, made him looks so funny.
"WAKAKAKAKAK! What kind of that!" Naruto roared and rolled around the dinning room and pointed to Sasuke's lump.
"Seal your mouth, stupid Naruto. It's you who made me got a big lump like this…" Sakura looked to Sasuke and only sighed a lot. Rei placed Naruto, Sakura, and her dinner at the table, and then join them sat. Naruto grap his bowl and started to eat it.
"UWAA! DELICIOUS! Nee-chan, how can you make a delicious ramen like this! It's delicious same as at the Ichiraku!" Rei smiled to Naruto and laughed.
"Well, just consider it as the replacement because I can't treat you at the Ichiraku, Naruto-kun. Ngg? Sakura-chan, Sasuke-kun, why didn't you eat your dinner? Just eat it." Sasuke and Sakura tried to eat to. When Sakura taste it, Sakura's face became so happier. Sasuke seems enjoy it too.
"Oh my God… Rei nee-chan, tell me how to make this delicious ramen! I like to learn it from you!" asked Sakura to Rei. Rei smiled and nodded to Sakura.
That night was a great night for Naruto. He will learn to live with Rei, Sasuke, and Sakura in a same roof for a while. It's not too bad for him. Naruto switched off his lamp and went to sleep.
Sound of rustled leaves audible out there. Suddenly, some shadows appeared at the branch of a tree near Naruto's house. Seems like a spy-shinobi. They gave some code to each other and send some of them to attacked Naruto's house. When they attacked it, all of sudden, those shinobi fell at once and their bodies were became various parts of a whole at once. Some bleed spread around that place.
The other shinobi retreated at once; left the other shinobi who have became corpses. Rei watched them from the window with cold eyes. She leaned on the wall and sighed. Suddenly, a pebble hit the window, made Rei startled and looked to the beneath. Tsunade stood up there.
"Tsunade-sama!" Rei jumped out from the window, hung on a string, and landed in front of Tsunade. She looked worried about it.
"Those shinobi came again? They aimed you, huh? Well… for a new special jounin, you have a great efficiently. Are you all right?" Tsunade groaned and looked to Rei.
"Yes, I'm fine. But, Tsunade-sama…"
"Don't worry, your string will protected you from those damned shinobi. Don't forget to disappear it every morning. Cleaned these corpses too. Hmp… Having two alters in a same body isn't too bad, huh? Oh yes, what about your wound?"
"Not too bad now. Thanks to you, Tsunade-sama." Rei opened her black scarf and her coat. A long scratch leaved a trace at Rei's right arm. It's still red enough to say it's made a big pain to her. Tsunade putted her hand to Rei's scratch and healed it. The scratch seems better now.
"Thank you, Tsunade-sama."
"Stop calling me with some details like –sama… I'm the one who must call you with –sama, isn't it? Rei-sama." Rei turned back her body and smiled.
"Nope, there's no need to call me with –sama anymore. I'm… just an ordinary jounin now. Yeah, an ordinary jounin…" Rei watched the white moon with her black eyes. And then she asked permission to leaved Tsunade and then she left her, went back to Naruto's house.
End Hidden Scroll I…
How is it? Kind of strange? Maybe, I'm just a newbie. Is this story seems familiar? I'm so sorry, because I don't know there's someone who made a same story like I made. Well, there are almost six thousand Naruto Fan Fiction in this website and of course I can't read it all! I'm sorry if there's some vocabulary/sentences/verb that wrong, I'm not a native speaker anyway. Please review me! I like to see it. Anyway, thanks!