chapter 8- NARAKU'S return and a threat?

kag pov:

kag: hmm i wonder who would be here at this time in the morning?

kag: OMG...AHHHH INU HELP...PLEASE!

all pov:

inu: WTF WHO ARE YOU?

naraku: tha names naraku...im her boyfriend

naraku slaps kagome

naraku: how dare you leave me in that city alone with those fools...you bych!

inu: DONT YOU DARE TOUCH MY GIRLFRIEND...SHE DOESNT BELONG TO YOU ANYMORE!

naraku: oh really

inu: yeah realy...

naraku: let her decide

kag: well thats no problem...i choose inu! why the hell would i want to go to you?

naraku: well i woulda thought you'd remember...i have your little brother!

kag: your...shippo...YOU A$$ ...GIVE ME MY BROTHER BACK...I HATE YOU...!

naraku: oh well i wont give your brother back if thats how you repay me for bringing him back!

inu: stop this...just give him back to her

naraku: who sayz i have to listen to you?

MEANWHILE...

san: miroku be careful...you dont want this guy to think your getting the kid...

mir: yah i know i know...

shippo:mmmhmmmjmkjmsmmk

san: shhh...we're here to save you

ship: omosfomommmmojom

(miroku savez shippo and sneaks him into kagomes bedroom...)

shippo whispers: thank you...i thought i was a gonner...

mir: yeah yeah...dont meantion it...

san: shippo be silent...miroku lets get down there before they suspect something...

mir: got it...

BACK DOWNSTAIRS

naraku: so it looks like the two lovers joined us...

san:...oh your gonna get it

naraku: tis now that i announce my leave...dont worrie my dear...i'll be back with your little brother...

(naraku leaves)

kag:nooooooooooooo...GIVE HIM BACK...

AFTER NARAKU LEAVES

kag: i ...i...i cant believ this!

san: kag , me and miroku have a surprise for you...

kag: "sniffle" huh?

mir: go look in your room

inu: i dont think she wants too

san: ohh...but she does...go look

IN KAGZ ROOM:

ship: omg...kag...

kag: is...is...is this a joke

san: no we saved him...

kag: ...omg...OMG

(kag n shippo hug)

inu: but wat about naraku wont he come back...

kag: ...o...m...g!

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AN hey another cliffy...well i need ideaz on my story so..review and share ur ideAZ...

-akarikagz