My first fan fiction! Crosses Fingers Reviews?

(I only own Jade Black and maybe characters in the future?)

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Chapter 1 – First Year for Jade

Jade looked around to find platform 9 and 3/4, her father told her about it before. All you had to do was…her thoughts were interrupted at the sight of a large red-headed family.

"Might as well follow them…" she shrugged.

Jade followed the family close enough to notice that there was a red headed boy and a ruffled dark hair boy standing together.

"They look about my age," she thought to herself.

Jade dragged her luggage behind her and pulled them close to the two lanky boys. She stopped right in front of them, let go of her luggage, and smiled a small but sweet smile.

"I'm Jade Bl---", she stopped in her tracks not wanting to reveal her last name, "Uhh…Jade! I'm Jade!"

The dark haired boy smiled back, "I'm Harry Potter" He reached to shake her hand. The boy noticed his friend wasn't greeting Jade so he elbowed him in the ribs. The red head was busy shoving his rat into his shirt pocket. Jade waited until he introduced himself.

"Oh, right! I'm Ronald Weasley, but I go by Ron." he said to Jade.

"Is this your first year at Hogwarts? I haven't seen you before at school, but you look the same age as us…" Harry commented.

Jade knew this question would come up sooner or later in their introductions. "Well, I didn't actually go to school before this, but I should be in the same year as you guys. I'm 16 so that would make me 6th year, right?"

"Yeah, we're in 6th year too. Dumbledore might put you in first year."

Jade winked at Harry and Ron, "I have a feeling I'll be put in 6th year." She looked at the clock in the train station and then said, "Should we go now?"

They entered Platform 9 and ¾ and hopped aboard the Hogwarts Express.

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And that's my first chapter! You like? Reviews please! Sorry it was short!