Blehh...this story was turning into a Mary Sue. I fixed the first chapter (At the Station), Getting Sorted, and Feelings Unleashed. Hopefully that made the story seem a little less Mary Sueish. The changes are kind of subtle but be sure to read those chapters over again!

Yes I know Cedric died in the 4th book but he's still alive in my story.

I'm still open to any suggestions on how to make this story better. )

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Jade was sitting in transfiguration daydreaming about Cedric. It's been two weeks since they started going out. She still remembered when he asked her out.

She was sitting in the library and found a book sitting at her usual table. She was looking for the book forever. She opened it up and saw a note, "Meet me at the astronomy tower." She stuffed the note back in the book and ran to the tower. When we she got up there the first thing she noticed were all the stars in the sky. It was incredibly romantic. Then Cedric came out of the shadows. She smiled like she always did when she saw him. He put his arms around her waist and said, "Be my girlfriend?" She replied, "Of course." Then they kissed. It was short, but sweet all the same. She'd never been so happy in her life. Being in Cedric's arms was the only place she wanted to be.

"Ms. Jade? What's the answer?"

"Err...yes?

Professor McGonagall nodded with a disappointed smile. She needs to stop daydreaming.

Jade was relieved that class was over. Of course she liked the class but she didn't want to get caught daydreaming again.

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"Wake up Jade! You have a game today!" Hermione said while shaking Jade to wake up.

Jade did her morning routine and stopped in front of the mirror. She brushed her shoulder length brunette hair until it was shiny and soft. She popped her contacts into her hazel eyes and brushed her teeth. Pleased with how she looked she headed toward breakfast.

"Hey guys." Jade said sleepily to her friends.

"Hey Jade! Are you ready for the game? I can't wait! We're going to crush those Ravens." Harry said all to eagerly.

Jade gave him an annoyed look and chucked a muffin at his head.

He was team captain so he had a reason to be excited but come on.

Even getting hit by a crusty muffin couldn't put a damper to Harry's spirits.

Jade just smiled. He has so much spirit.

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Jade walked with her fellow Gryffindor team mates onto the field. She breathed in the smell of the new grass.

"Getting pumped up yet?" Harry asked with a big smile.

Jade winked at him, "As much as I'll ever be."

They hopped on their brooms and flew up above the field. Jade was waiting at a spot next to Harry in the air waiting for the balls to be released. She was just a mediocre chaser but her best attribute was that she could always fly fast to grab a ball in the beginning of the game. The other team's chasers were counting on her to get the red ball.

Jade snapped out of her thoughts when she heard a whistle blow signaling the beginning of the game.

She flew down and snatched the ball right from under Cho's nose. (Cho was a Ravenclaw chaser).

And so began the game.

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Jade walked with her head down in defeat into the locker room. Gryffindor lost by a few points. She hated losing as much as Harry…and that was a lot. None of the team members were talking so it was dead silent in the changing room.

"Don't worry guys, we'll get them next time." Jade managed to say with a quaint smile in the midst of all her frustration.

Harry nodded and the rest smiled back at her.

Jade was the last one to leave the locker room. Sulking made her move slower. As soon as she opened the door to walk to her dorm Draco was there.

"I'm not really in the mood to have another argument Draco."

"Oh me neither. I was just going to ask you something."

Jade waited impatiently tapping her foot.

"A Hogsmeade trip is coming up and I was wondering if you wanted to go with me."

She was surprised. I thought he got the point that I didn't like him. Maybe that topic was to hard for Malfoy to comprehend.

"It would be an honor to go with me you know." Malfoy winked.

Jade looked disgusted "Please!"

She could tell Malfoy was getting annoyed. His expression soon changed the surprise when the little redhead Ginny appeared.

"Why hello Draco." She said batting her eyelashes once again.

Jade rolled her eyes. Boy that was getting annoying.

"The answer is no Draco and that's final. I have a boyfriend you know." She stomped off before he could say anything else. She heard someone following her and suspected it was Draco. Instead she found Ginny.

"What do you think you're doing? He asked you the dance! You should be honored to go with him!"

"Yeah that's what he said." Jade told her shaking her head. I'm starting to get a headache with all this nonsense.

"But he's so pretty! He's the most handsome guy in Hogwarts you know. He's a great quidditch player too. My brother would be furious if I went out with him though. Oh I know I'll go out with one day no matter what anyone says. He's so…"

Jade cut her off before anymore of her squealing nonsense could continue.

"Just stop talking!" She said loudly but exhausted. She rubbed her temples in a failed attempt to cure her headache.

Ginny stopped talking and walking.

Jade sighed. Well that's a miracle.

"That was the single most rude thing ever!"

I don't have time for this! Jade just passed by Ginny trying to ignore her.

"Don't walk away from me!" Ginny shrieked. The freckle face grabbed Jade's robes and pulled her back.

"Don't touch me…" Jade mumbled with a serious look on her face.

Ginny hmmpfed.

Jade tried to control her anger and turned her back on the red-head and kept walking.

Ginny once again pulled her around and managed to scratch her across the face. Jade instantly reacting to the attack punched her in the face. Jade had amazing reflexes.

Ginny layed on the floor in amazement.

Jade sighed and helped her off the floor.

"I don't regret hitting you because you were bloody annoying. But I'm not going to leave you here."

Ginny was still in surprised.

"Blast Ended Skrewt Dung."

The portrait opened and she helped the girl into the dorm.

She managed to get Ginny into the bed across from her.

"You hit me!" She yelled at Jade finally realizing what happened.

Jade sighed and pulled the covers over her head.

I better get a good sleep tonight. I'll have to deal with Ron in the morning.

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