Disclaimer: Sailor moon does not own me. Sailor moon does not own me...I mean, (he he ^^) I do not own sailor moon. I do not own sailor moon. I do not own sailor moon. I do not own sailor moon. I do not own sailor moon.
Author's Note:
I was really depressed when I got those flames, because they had to do with the fact that I was 13 when I wrote them. There is nothing I know how to do, to revise and fix those chapters. I hope that with my age my chapters have gotten better. If they have, please state that in your review. It would really make me feel better. After reading those flames I wasn't going to write anymore.
I was going to start again when I was I dont know, 19 or 20. By then I would problubly forget about this site and it would disappear from my mind like bad memories do after a long time. I can't take critacissim easily. Why I write fics knowing the review could be nice makes me want to write more. Writing fics knowing the review could be mean hardly crosses my mind. When you do something you're proud of criticism doesn't cross your mind.
I learned again (I can never learn anything once and not forget to make the same mistake) that you make mistakes only because that's life. To learn from them is to live a good life. So I'm going to live a good life and make it the best I can by finishing this 30 chapter story I plan to write called "R o m a n t i c". So read it and enjoy it. Review please, may it be good my story will be fun to read. May it be bad, so what, I'll learn something new. Okay, I'm done. You can read.
Chapter 8
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Darien's Apartment...
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Darien was face to face with 4 pairs of eyes. Two of which are green and the other pair blue. "Can I help you," Darien said politely felling a really bad presence. Diamond looked at him coyly answering, "Yes, ummm.... actually we just got back from seeing-" "Beauty and the Beast", Crystal spoke right when Diamond did," Cats." "Anyway," Diamond gave Crystal and evil glare than finished, "Can we please use your telephone to call the locksmith?" Peering at Darien in their most innocent faces, Diamond and Crystal smiled. Darien granted them entrance as he held open the door and they walked into the living room. "So," Darien began, "I'll show you to the phone?" Crystal soon took his arm dragging him forward as he led her to the kitchen. Leaving Diamond in silence and a seemed like an empty room as well, he turned on the light switch that was a couple inches to the right of the front door.
Slowly he began to survey the room. There seemed to be millions of memories portrayed into photographs that covered the bookshelves. Passing by any photo that displayed Serena he would pick it up and observe it carefully. Darien walked into the room just in time to catch Diamonds interest in these photographs that meant so much to him. Taking the framed photograph politely from Diamonds hand Darien surveyed it himself and smiled. "She's very beautiful," Diamond said. "Yes she sure is," Darien agreed putting the framed photo back where it was placed before.
"Darien," Crystal summoned him from the kitchen. He looked at the couch then started for the kitchen. Diamond assuming he was gesturing for him to sit down or something went over to the couch and sat down. "Oww.." Diamond completely scared quickly got up from the couch and stared down only to be looking at a sitting up half covered, yawning Serena with her eyes closed and her mouth so wide she could swallow a basketball. Serena's yawn slowly came to a close (of her mouth anyway) and her eyes opened slowly. "Hmmnn.....," Her groggy eyes looked up to him as he spoke," I'm ummm... Diamond I live in this apartment complex."
Letting out his hand as Serena took it and began shaking back. Cupping her one hand in both of his he carefully sat back down being careful not to sit on any of her body parts again. Slowly she pulled her hand from his grasp. Darien walked in the room. "Oh, you guys met, they're here to call the locksmith, his ummm," he paused. "Friend," Diamond spoke. "Is in the kitchen trying to reach someone," he finished. He leaned in to kiss her. She got the silent message that seemed to flow through their brains and tiled her head as far as it went and they locked lips.
Pressing a little bit and backing off. Watching everything take place Diamond stared at how serenas neck seemed to elongate as she tired to kiss Darien. How she brought her hand and slid it across Darien's cheek only to the huge diamond that seemed to shine a million times before it was brought back down to her lap. "I'll be in the kitchen," with that he was gone and the two were by themselves once more. She turned back to face Diamond. "So which apartment?" Smiling at him she picked up a few pieces of popcorn from the bowl and threw them in her mouth as he began to speak, only grabbing a couple handfuls soon after.
"May I?" Diamond spoke. "You want?" She motioned to the popcorn. "Yeah", he nodded, "if that's okay." She was about to give him a handful when he motioned for her to throw it. "Throw it", she asked shocked. "Yeah," He smiled. She smiled," okay." Piece by piece she threw it only to have him catch them all accept the last one that flew in the air and hit the curtains leaving them both laughing. "Did you really think I was going to catch that", he said before cracking up. Serena was laughing so much she didn't realize she was being stared at so keenly.
That's when the doorbell sounded. Ding! Dong! I'll get it she said in a loud tone while getting up and walking over to the door. She opened it slowly.
Authors Note: Okay, so the scene isn't over. I felt like this was the thriller of the fanfic so far and I wanted the suspense to last a while. You are suspended right? Well anyway. My Beginning Authors note was heart warming. So anyway I'm desperate for reviews okay! I said it there! You happy! Please when you leave a review tell me what you want to see happen so I can get some ideas please!!!! Bye!!!!
Author's Note:
I was really depressed when I got those flames, because they had to do with the fact that I was 13 when I wrote them. There is nothing I know how to do, to revise and fix those chapters. I hope that with my age my chapters have gotten better. If they have, please state that in your review. It would really make me feel better. After reading those flames I wasn't going to write anymore.
I was going to start again when I was I dont know, 19 or 20. By then I would problubly forget about this site and it would disappear from my mind like bad memories do after a long time. I can't take critacissim easily. Why I write fics knowing the review could be nice makes me want to write more. Writing fics knowing the review could be mean hardly crosses my mind. When you do something you're proud of criticism doesn't cross your mind.
I learned again (I can never learn anything once and not forget to make the same mistake) that you make mistakes only because that's life. To learn from them is to live a good life. So I'm going to live a good life and make it the best I can by finishing this 30 chapter story I plan to write called "R o m a n t i c". So read it and enjoy it. Review please, may it be good my story will be fun to read. May it be bad, so what, I'll learn something new. Okay, I'm done. You can read.
Chapter 8
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Darien's Apartment...
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Darien was face to face with 4 pairs of eyes. Two of which are green and the other pair blue. "Can I help you," Darien said politely felling a really bad presence. Diamond looked at him coyly answering, "Yes, ummm.... actually we just got back from seeing-" "Beauty and the Beast", Crystal spoke right when Diamond did," Cats." "Anyway," Diamond gave Crystal and evil glare than finished, "Can we please use your telephone to call the locksmith?" Peering at Darien in their most innocent faces, Diamond and Crystal smiled. Darien granted them entrance as he held open the door and they walked into the living room. "So," Darien began, "I'll show you to the phone?" Crystal soon took his arm dragging him forward as he led her to the kitchen. Leaving Diamond in silence and a seemed like an empty room as well, he turned on the light switch that was a couple inches to the right of the front door.
Slowly he began to survey the room. There seemed to be millions of memories portrayed into photographs that covered the bookshelves. Passing by any photo that displayed Serena he would pick it up and observe it carefully. Darien walked into the room just in time to catch Diamonds interest in these photographs that meant so much to him. Taking the framed photograph politely from Diamonds hand Darien surveyed it himself and smiled. "She's very beautiful," Diamond said. "Yes she sure is," Darien agreed putting the framed photo back where it was placed before.
"Darien," Crystal summoned him from the kitchen. He looked at the couch then started for the kitchen. Diamond assuming he was gesturing for him to sit down or something went over to the couch and sat down. "Oww.." Diamond completely scared quickly got up from the couch and stared down only to be looking at a sitting up half covered, yawning Serena with her eyes closed and her mouth so wide she could swallow a basketball. Serena's yawn slowly came to a close (of her mouth anyway) and her eyes opened slowly. "Hmmnn.....," Her groggy eyes looked up to him as he spoke," I'm ummm... Diamond I live in this apartment complex."
Letting out his hand as Serena took it and began shaking back. Cupping her one hand in both of his he carefully sat back down being careful not to sit on any of her body parts again. Slowly she pulled her hand from his grasp. Darien walked in the room. "Oh, you guys met, they're here to call the locksmith, his ummm," he paused. "Friend," Diamond spoke. "Is in the kitchen trying to reach someone," he finished. He leaned in to kiss her. She got the silent message that seemed to flow through their brains and tiled her head as far as it went and they locked lips.
Pressing a little bit and backing off. Watching everything take place Diamond stared at how serenas neck seemed to elongate as she tired to kiss Darien. How she brought her hand and slid it across Darien's cheek only to the huge diamond that seemed to shine a million times before it was brought back down to her lap. "I'll be in the kitchen," with that he was gone and the two were by themselves once more. She turned back to face Diamond. "So which apartment?" Smiling at him she picked up a few pieces of popcorn from the bowl and threw them in her mouth as he began to speak, only grabbing a couple handfuls soon after.
"May I?" Diamond spoke. "You want?" She motioned to the popcorn. "Yeah", he nodded, "if that's okay." She was about to give him a handful when he motioned for her to throw it. "Throw it", she asked shocked. "Yeah," He smiled. She smiled," okay." Piece by piece she threw it only to have him catch them all accept the last one that flew in the air and hit the curtains leaving them both laughing. "Did you really think I was going to catch that", he said before cracking up. Serena was laughing so much she didn't realize she was being stared at so keenly.
That's when the doorbell sounded. Ding! Dong! I'll get it she said in a loud tone while getting up and walking over to the door. She opened it slowly.
Authors Note: Okay, so the scene isn't over. I felt like this was the thriller of the fanfic so far and I wanted the suspense to last a while. You are suspended right? Well anyway. My Beginning Authors note was heart warming. So anyway I'm desperate for reviews okay! I said it there! You happy! Please when you leave a review tell me what you want to see happen so I can get some ideas please!!!! Bye!!!!