Wednesday, July 6, 2005
Ebacusta: Hello again. Well, I've been quite busy on the site lately. So, I figure it's time to update this little baby as well. I'm pretty proud of my constant involvement on aren't you? I mean, I've updated more times than I normally update in like a year. Hahaha.
Anyway, thanks to all the reviewers. I figure now might be a good time to go back through my reviews and answer some questions.
Review lord: Ah, look everyone, it's David (I think that's right, isn't it?) Well, as for the number of killers, you'll have to wait and find out.
KoumiLoccness: You didn't really ask a question, but, I'm not quite sure what you were trying to tell me. So…
Vampslayer89: Well, after a month, you'll finally have a name to give your punching bag. The name will be revealed soon.
Theladyknight: Well, it's to be expected that something was wrong. When Kari emailed Mimi, she probably partially explained the situation, but not completely. Therefore, Mimi and Izzy were already expecting something to be out of place. That's why it was probably more believable. But in the context of a normal conversation, that would be a very had statement to believe off hand. So did you end up doing something special on June 30th for your anniversary?
StarGazingMoonPrincess: Yes, she is a very strong willed person.
SaddenedKimiko: That's my job isn't it? (smiles)
Mica the Cat Kid: Wow, I'm glad to hear that. You have to admit, I was a terrible writer two years ago wasn't I? Ha ha ha. I'm glad I've greatly improved as well.
Fanfic: Guess you'll have to see, won't you?
Sov: When did what happen? And yea, where were you? Blowing me off for like, what? Months and months at a time.
Judy: April 29th is Kei's birthday too. And the unfortunate death of his parents, kind of.
ROCKEN RODNEY: Was there a point to your review? It seems to me that you were just being overly violent. I mean seriously. And furthermore, I don't care who you are, or what you think about George Bush, or Kari for that matter, but don't mess with me. I ain't your bitch, and I ain't nobody else's, so keep your language to yourself.
Fairytale freak aka bookworm: Are you still confused on who the bad guys are? And thanks for the compliment.
Okay, with that taken care of, I would like to thank everyone who has reviewed thus far (even ROCKEN RODNEY) and I appreciate it if you left a review for me after reading this chapter. I noticed I only got six on the last chapter (gently nudges reviewers to give her more reviews). I mean, you wouldn't really want me to feel sad. If I'm sad, that means my characters have to feel sad, which means the story is heading south probably with the death of one of the oh so loveable main characters.
Mimi: (punch) Stop threatening people.
Ebacusta: Why are you here? I don't put you in these. Ow, jeez that hurt. Without further ado, the next chapter.
Warning: this chapter contains some big implications. If youare offendedsexual implications, please do not read the following chapter. I will provide a review at the bottom.
That Day Was The Last Day I Saw Your Smile
By ebacusta
Chapter 4
Certain Death
Kari and TK looked around. "This is the place," Kari whispered. "Let's go." As the waves crashed onto the beach, TK and Kari entered the warehouse that lay in front of them.
"Let's split up and meet back here in thirty minutes," TK said. Kari nodded and headed right. Kari looked around. In the darkness she couldn't see very well. She stumbled over a chain lying on the floor. As she flung her hand out to catch herself, she felt something snap around her wrist. Kari her wrist up into a ray of moonlight. The thing sparkled brilliantly.
"Handcuffs?" Kari asked. Suddenly, as if that had been the magic word, something began dragging Kari across the floor. And then, her heart jumped into her throat as she felt her feet leave the ground. The lights snapped on and Kari gasped. There lying in a heap on some blankets was her beloved baby, Tina Satsuki. Kari cried out as she realized that she would not be able to reach the unconscious girl. The convener belt to which her handcuffs were attached stopped.
Kari heard footsteps and then TK entered the room. She watched as he spotted Tina on the floor and ran over to her. He knelt and picked the girl up. Her long blonde hair hanging down. As TK stood he noticed Kari and nearly dropped his daughter.
"Kari!" he called out. More footsteps began to echo through the ware house. TK didn't pay them much mind as suddenly, the convener belt was moving again. It stopped in front of a gap in the boxes on the second floor. A man stepped from the shadows. He had brown hair and was wearing black clothes. He pulled from within them a gun and pointed it down at TK's head.
TK gasped. "Ryodo Monton? Why?"
The man smirked as he looked down at the blond man clutching his equally blond unconscious daughter. "You have always been an eye sore. Acting as if you own Japan. Stealing my ideas and using them as your own. And then when they become best sellers, you become… a celebrity."
TK shook his head, "I never did that. I never stole your story ideas. Ever."
"Liar!" Ryodo shouted.
"I have a family to support, just as you do… but I would never do something as low as stealing story ideas and claiming them as my own," TK protested, looking hurt that Ryodo would even think about something like that.
Ryodo chuckled, "Takeru Takaishi… and the beautiful, loving wife, Hikari." He moaned sensually as he leaned over, pushing Kari's head to the side, and running his tongue up the side of her neck, across her soft cheek, and across her mouth. Kari shuddered with revulsion.
TK growled as Ryodo turned his attention back to him. "She tastes so sweet. I think I might just keep her." Reaching out, he grabbed the hem of her shirt and began pulling the blouse apart, watching the buttons pop off one by one with a kind of lustful glee. Kari could hear each one as they hit the floor of the warehouse with a soft clatter. He groaned slightly, but let out a frustrated sigh when the shirt fell open, revealing a white tank top. Kari looked at him angrily, wishing she could do something to keep his hands off her.
Ryodo noticed this and whispered, his voice coated with lust, "Let me have my fun." Grabbing the skin tight tank top, Ryodo began to slowly pull it up, revealing more of Kari's slinky white stomach.
"Grrr… STOP IT!" TK yelled. Ryodo turned his head and looked down at him with mild surprise.
His surprise turning into an evil smirk, he turned and raised the gun back up. "You ruined my fun." He eyed Kari's jean shorts, hungrily.
"Leave her alone!" TK yelled, fixing him with an icy glare.
"Or what? You'll knock me over?" Ryodo asked, an eyebrow tilting toward the ceiling, "Excuse me, but I do believe I have the upper hand." TK's lips remained firmly shut as he stared up at him. Ryodo took this as his cue to continue, "And you know the winner gets the prize." He slid his hand around Kari's hips and over her flat stomach, so his arm was encircling her waist. It came to stop with his hand resting on the hem of her shorts, his thumb resting on the button. TK glared on, getting angrier, every second he knew he couldn't help his wife. Ryodo lowered his lips to Kari's neck once more. She struggled to push herself away.
Ryodo let out a loud moan as his lips connected and then he straightened and re-aimed the gun at TK's head, clicking the safety off. A triumphant smirk crossed his lips, "And now, I shall enjoy my prize." He pressed the trigger. A gun shot echoed through the warehouse.
Kari's scream with it, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
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Short and evil. Cliffy #32. (smirks evilly) I'm done typing the story, I'll just wait to see how many reviews I get before I put it on So review away. Go in as many different anonymous users and leave as many reviews as you can. And all the people that read the story and don't review, you should say something too. Depending on how many I get, I may update sooner.
(laughs evilly) Tchao!
ebacusta (with devil horns)
Chapter Overview:
TK and Kari enter the warehouse. Kari gets caught with handcuffs attached to a covenor belt. The lights come on and Kari see Tina. TK comes in and sees Tina and then Kari. A man, named Ryodo Monton, steps from the shadows. After talking a bit, Ryodo accepts his prize, Hikari, and prepares to shoot TK. A gun shot goes off, and Kari's scream("NO!") echoes through night.