Broken Lines Of Silver
Author: ChristinaRoss
Disclaimer: I do no own the Teen Titans or any of their characters. I do own Amie.
Author's Notes: Finally done! This one was a big challenge. Well, I hope you people are happy though. Because I'm forced by you reviewers to write so much, I am now thinking in writing. I narrate my own actions in my head like a story. "It's annoying and constant!" she screamed. Oops. There I go again! Plus, I think about what will happen in my next chapters at night and I can't sleep because I might forget it, which I always end up doing anyways (forgetting that is). Therefore… my point is… if I failed any of my hard exams, I blame you all and the sleep deprivation you have cursed me with! Sorry for the lateness on this chapter, I'm stuck in the middle of studying for exams PLUS I must watch the chilling conclusion(s) to season 4 of Teen Titans! That's right! Raven fans will not be disappointed with it! Pure Awesomesity (I know, I make up a lot of words)! I hope I'm breathing again… And this is somewhat of a hard chapter to write; it's pretty risky and must to be done perfectly or else it would ruin everything. Lastly, there will be some actual 'action'/fighting next chapter, I think… I hope. Anyways, Read, Review, Enjoy!
Chapter 7:
Lost Control
A bright pink light flashed from underneath the mountain of books, highlighting every object within inches of it.
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The small, green car spun in circles wildly and eventually crashed into a nearby wall.
"Ah. No fair," the driver protested. "Give me a chance."
"No way, B.B." his competitor taunted. "If you can't deliver, than don't bother challenging me to a dual."
Beast Boy slinked down further on the couch, mumbling curses towards the robot man under his breath. His car reloaded onto the screen and he was using all his force to try and regain the lead. The sleek, blue car glinted on the horizon in Beast Boy's screen and he pressed down hard on the turbo button, his vehicle whizzing forward, catching up to his foe. He trailed close behind the leader, switching sides quickly to zip ahead. Cyborg blocked all of his attempts at passing him, always getting to the opening slightly ahead of the changeling. As Beast Boy still attempted to out maneuver his metal friend, he didn't notice the mines Cyborg just dropped until it was too late. He swerved his vehicle, trying to dodge the deadly orbs, but he ended up swiping against another cluster of them. "No!" he screamed, tapping multiple buttons, trying to recover control. The small, green car blew up within seconds, pieces flying all over his screen. Giant, red letters flashed in front of his eyes, proclaiming him a loser and Cyborg the victor. The game was over.
Beast Boy kept the controller loosely within his grasp and groaned, as Cyborg danced around in circles yelling, "Booyah!"
"Alright, I get it. You win, Cy," the crushed green being sighed.
After a few more moments of gloating, Cyborg calmed down and sat back down on the couch next to his creature friend. Cyborg noticed that something had been troubling the lad lately, so he decided to ask. "Hey, what's wrong with you lately? You seem… kind of down."
"Oh," Beast Boy whispered. Should I ask his advice? Cyborg's a guy, I'm sure he knows a thing or two about the ladies. "It's just… What do you think about Amie?"
Cyborg was shocked; he didn't expect the topic to be about her, he thought that Beast Boy was just upset again about not owning his own moped. "I don't know," he replied. "She's nice, kind of quite but that could be expected. I haven't actually talked to her much by ourselves. Why?" I think I already know the answer to this question.
"Well, I don't know." Beast Boy scratched his scalp, and brushed his hair back a bit.
"You better not have fleas again," Cyborg interrupted.
"What? Oh, no. Just a nervous thing. It's just that I think… I really like her. I know I don't know her all that much, but just something about her, it just feels… like… wow. You know?"
"Uh… sure, I guess. But maybe you should hold off on making any moves on her for a while though," Cyborg instructed.
"Why?" Beast Boy's brow scrunched and he frowned, displeased with Cyborg's request.
"Well, we're trying to help her out right now, and dating her isn't going to help that much. Plus, she might not want to get too close to anyone, what with her past being how it is."
He's got a point… I guess. But…"Wait a minute! You just want her all for yourself! You're just as bad as Robin. Trying to trick me into thinking I shouldn't go for her so you can swoop in and steal her!" he accused, harshly.
"What? No," Cyborg stuttered. "That's ridiculous. I'm just saying that she might be too fragile for any relationship now and if you date her, it'll distract you from trying to catch this guy and save her. I'm not trying to steal your crush."
Yeah, right. I know his and Robin's little game. They're both against me. But I'll play along for now. And they can be sure that I'll be keeping a close eye on them… both of them.
"Oh, yah. I guess you're right," Beast Boy corrected himself, bearing a fake, thankful smile. "Thanks for the tip. I'll keep it in mind."
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Raven stepped gracefully out of the steaming shower, water droplets falling off of her, soaking the floor beneath her feet, and she turned the knob slowly to cease the oncoming water flow. She wrapped a dry, warm towel around her slippery, glistening body and examined herself in the small bathroom mirror. As if on cue, her purple eyes flashed a light pink hue and then returned to their normal state within a mere millisecond. Having caught the quick changes, Raven blinked tightly and stared harder at her reflection, boring her sight into her deep eyes. "That was weird," she commented. Wonder what that was all about. Well, everything looks fine now. I must have been seeing things.
After reassuring her normality, she shook her head, clearing her jammed thoughts, and brushed the happening swiftly out of her mind as she exited the small room.
The pale woman scanned her bedroom quickly and headed towards her closet. Why I'm I bothering to wear a towel? I'm in my own room. She shed her covering before she reached the large, sliding closet door. She placed a tiny hand upon the door, and pushed it open, revealing a row of identical leotard suits and hooded cloaks, dangling from separate hangers. Wow. I need a new wardrobe. Everything's the same. As she stared into the darkened closet, inspiration struck her and she grabbed the nearest outfit, flinging it over her shoulder onto her bed. She closed the closet's door, hiding the costumes once again, and plunked herself down onto the bed in front of the crumpled clothes.
This can be fixable. I just need to make a couple of teeny adjustments, that's all. With that, she got to work, starting with the black leotard. The dark sorceress began by ripping a long sleeve off and tearing it again in half, tossing the upper part behind her. She repeated the same actions to the other unsuspecting sleeve, creating two, long, black gloves lying by her side. Once she had accomplished this, she moved her attention down to the abdomen section, splitting the lower piece off completely. Her final alteration to the leotard suit was shredding up the top section, causing it to dip in a low U-shape. For the blue cloak, all she did was rip it in half length-wise, flinging the hooded half behind her with the rest of the scrap material. With the long, thick cloth remaining, she simply turned it upside down so the jagged edge was at the bottom and placed it with her newly redesigned gear.
"There," she announced her completion to herself, showing off a pleased smile. She stood up, picking up her clothes as she did, and quickly dressed, rushing out of her room just as had finished tying her new, blue skirt covering her satin, black panties.
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Four Titans and Amie gathered around the kitchen table, the room abuzz with laughter and talking. Robin flipped another pancake out of the griddle and poured in some more thick, pancake mixture. "Hope you guys are hungry," he chanted, readjusting his yellow chef hat that matched the apron tied around his waist. Everyone shouted their eager responses at once from behind him, causing the pancake resting on his flipper to slip, as he was about to toss it. The tasty breakfast treat spun through the air, soaring behind the team.
Cyborg and Beast Boy rose at the same time. "I'll get it," they cried out in unison, both racing to retrieve the flying, pastry disk. Just as the Cyborg had reached up an arm, almost touching it because of his large height, he tripped, sending himself and the green wolf crashing to the ground. They landed hard, their limbs entangled together, and moans seeping from their clenched mouths.
The remaining teenagers sitting around the table gasped at the sight before them. With his eyes still closed tight, Cyborg murmured, "It wasn't that bad guys. You don't need to act all shocked."
"That's not what we were reacting to," Robin informed.
Cyborg and Beast Boy opened their eyes to see a pair of bare feet right in front of their faces. The set of rowdy boys slowly untangled themselves and rose from the ground. It wasn't until they stood tall that they noticed the ruined pancake sprawled across the dark sorceress' head.
Neither looked at Raven's face, fearing the angered expression, which would lie upon it. They just glanced around nervously, occasionally returning their glares at the flopped pancake. Cyborg started to apologize first, too impatient to wait for the cowardly changeling who was procrastinating. "Look, Rae. Sorry about that. It just kind of… got away from us, you know?" he said, his voice wavering his uneasiness.
Everyone grew silent as the entire group heard the last thing they ever thought they would hear coming from Raven's lips. She giggled, a sweet, lyrical giggle escaping her mouth and she pressed a hand to her mouth to cover it up. No one moved, his or her eyes practically coming out of their sockets as they studied her over to make sure that this really was the half-demon they've known. As they gawked, she grabbed the flapjack from her hair, which she had earlier put into a half ponytail, the bangs pulled back and fastened together with an elastic band, and smiled cheekily.
"Oh, you silly boys and your games," she teased, letting out another child-like giggle, sending chills up everyone's spine.
Okay… What's wrong with her?
Someone must have replaced the real Raven with an evil mutant zombie version of her!
I knew Raven would cheer up someday. Perhaps she would like to 'hang out', as they say, with me later.
That's weird. I don't think I've ever heard Raven giggle like that before. And her voice… It sounds… not as cold as usual.
What the…?As everyone was occupied with the thought of Raven actually laughing about something, Amie was the first to notice the girl's new attire. "Trying a new look?" she offered, inspecting the torn clothes. Raven did not only sound different but defiantly looked the part too. She wore her homemade, long, tight gloves, stretching up to just before her elbows. Her tattered cloak was used as a short skirt, tied in a knot at her right hip. Her shoulders were half showing due to the missing pieces of the sleeves and the opening now dipped low over her chest, showing some rather promiscuous flesh. She twirled on her heel to show off the backside, causing her skirt to flutter up, flashing a little of her black lingerie at her audiences.
"Do you like it?" she asked, aiming the question back at Amie.
What is she doing? This isn't like her. How could she have changed so fast? Is this her way of dealing with that…? Does she think this is some kind of game? Is she mocking me? Why is trying to act all… flirty and fluffy?
"Yeah, looks… umm… great," declared Amie.
"Uh… Breakfast is ready. You going to join us, Raven?" Robin asked, changing the topic and acting like nothing was different, hoping that would get everyone else to behave normal in front of the reformed girl as well. He removed his puffy chapeau and handed out plates.
"You bet! I love it when you cook, Rob-ums. You look so dashing it that little chef's hat." Raven strutted over to the counter and leaned up against it while she waited to be served. She rested her elbows atop the hard surface, cradling her head in her palms, and positioned her chest in between the slanted arms on the flat top. The others continued about their own business, trying to act normal but all secretly wondering about Raven, especially Amie.
Beast Boy stared at the sight; Raven had purposefully set herself up to show off as much cleavage as possible, which was a fair amount. His eyes stayed fixed at the breasts starting to pop out of the new jagged top until he remembered Raven's previous threat about such lustful actions.
But she was talking about Amie. Maybe… Who am I kidding! This is Raven! She would be even more pissed off about it. She'd probably beat the living crap out of me! Better look away before she notices me staring.
He lifted his eyes to her face, surprised to see her looking straight at him with a humoured expression, cocking an eyebrow in his direction. "Nice view, B.B.?" she smirked, pushing her chest further into the counter, ultimately causing them to plumb up more and push out.
Caught off guard, Beast Boy gulped hard. "Yah, some nice hills and a quaint valley," he joked, praying she wouldn't beat him to a pulp for his retaliation.
Raven burst out laughing, throwing her head back and clutching her sides. "Good one!" she complimented through her loud chuckles.
The green boy was stunned, for a third time this morning. "You're laughing at my joke?" he questioned, emphasizing the word 'my'. "And you called me B.B.?" That's a first. Whatever it is, I like this new Raven. He decided to stop questioning why she was behaving differently, not wanting to jinx her transformation because she actually now seemed to like him.
"Yeah, you're so funny," she stifled, finally ending her prolonged laugh, striving to catch her breath. Once she composed herself again, Raven's short attention skipped over to Starfire who was reaching up in one of the cupboards to gather the maple syrup. "Wow, Star. Can your skirt be any shorter? Looks totally hot," she purred in a sultry, enthusiastic tone, her usual monotone voice long gone since her shower.
Starfire turned to face the speaker, giving a puzzled look, trying to figure out what her friend could possibly mean. "My skirt is not burning me. It is actually well-temperate," Starfire tried to explain.
"You're one to talk, Raven. Your skirts so short I can almost see your…"
"Beast Boy!" Robin interjected. "Sit down and be quiet. You're not helping anything."
"But I was just… fine," the discourage lad protested, and then halfheartedly regained his original seat.
Raven ignored Beast Boy's antics and attempted to clarify what she meant earlier, "No, silly. I mean your skirt looks good on you. Really shows off your legs." She gave a sexy wink towards the alien, still perplexed beyond repair.
Hmm… friend Raven certainly is pleasant today. Starfire was too naïve and unfamiliar with the Earth's ways to question the sudden difference in her companion.
What the hell is going on with her? Am I the only one noticing? Or caring? I have to talk to her.
"Uh… Raven can I talk to you for a minute?" Amie asked politely.
Raven cocked her head to one side as a dog would when being spoken to. She didn't reply.
"About… about earlier?" Amie clarified.
A grin streaked across the purple-haired girl's face and she glided over to the shorter woman. She came in real close, surprising Amie, their boobs bumping up against one another, and she moved her face beside the brunette's. Amie could smell her sweet scent flowing from her hair and skin. When her lips were near enough to Amie's ear, she whispered, "You mean our little kiss?" sending chills down Amie's spine and causing her stomach to flutter. Amie gradually nodded her head and Raven backed away, smiling as she sat down beside her metallic friend.
"Wow, Cyborg, have you been working out again?" The excited girl ran her hand slowly down Cyborg's arm, teasingly. "Or maybe you just got a new upgrade."
"Uh… I guess," he answered, smiling at the compliment.
Sitting at the head of the table, Robin took action, "Are you feeling alright, Raven? You seem a little… different."
Raven's expression dropped into a small, pout-y one, whispering pathetically in a sad, whiny voice, "You don't like the way I'm acting?"
Falling for the girl's crushed act, he oddly felt guilty and sympathetic towards her. "No, I'm just worried that something might be wrong," he defended.
"Well, you don't need to worry," she cheered. "I'm fine! In fact I'm better than fine! I feel great! Just look at these fantastic firm breasts I've been hiding all this time. They're finally getting some air and light." She cupped her chest and lifted it up to emphasize her point.
All three guys gawked; drool dripping from their open mouths. Well, if she wants to act this way, who am I to stop her. I'll just be sure to keep a close eye on her.
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The cracked mirror, still concealed underneath the stacks of books, flashed a tint of light gray and then dimmed down to nothingness again.
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The confused girl awoke to find her head throbbing hidden within her darkened hood. She gradually picked herself up from the dusty ground and placed a cautious hand to her temple. Her purple eyes shot open and she searched the area around her, determining her location. She was wearing her usual black, one-piece leotard suit and blue hooded cloak. How'd I get in my mind? I don't remember… Her thoughts echoed loudly through the black, empty space in a dead voice, shadowing her like a ghost. "No point in thinking anything. It's too loud," she noted. As she scanned the region, she noticed the absence of some particular beings, all very similar yet uniquely different, her emotions. "Where are they?" She stood still for a while, surveying her options and possible actions, until a flash of gray light off in the far distance caught her attention. "Interesting." She started to head in the direction of the mysterious light source and then her head pulsated with pain. "Agh," she exclaimed. "Feels like someone's slashing my brain apart." After a few moments, the torture ceased. "I bet that light had something to do with this," she deduced. She continued on her way down the winding paths of her mind towards her answers.
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After their morning meal was complete, with a few more minor flirtatious comments made by Raven and some attempts at humourous jokes made by Beast Boy, the team and their guest moved their way to some nice, relaxing time in front of the television. As Raven sashayed her way towards the giant screen, following closely behind the boys and Starfire and being followed by a concerned Amie, she halted suddenly. Her eyes flashed a grayish colour and then returned to normal without anyone noticing. Amie, coming up close behind her, put a hand on the taller girl's shoulder. "You alright?" she asked in concern with the girl's unexpected stop, but with an underlining meaning about her overall welfare.
Raven shook her head, and whispered quietly, "Yes, I'm fine thanks." She continued her path to the remainder of people and took a seat far from the group. Abruptly feeling a wave of embarrassment, Raven curled her body up, hiding her skimpy outfit.
Cyborg hit a key on the remote control and the TV came alive with sound and colour. He flipped through a couple of dozen channels until one seemed to satisfy everyone. Raven timidly spoke up, "I'm sorry if I made anyone feel uncomfortable earlier. I hope you didn't mind the way I was acting. I didn't mean to. I'm sorry."
"It's okay, Raven. Whatever problem you might have, you know you always have your friends to talk to about it," Cyborg comforted.
"Yeah, besides… I didn't mind." Beast Boy grinned. How could I mind? She acting so sexy and she actually seemed to like me!
With that done with, all eyes were pinned onto the screen in front of them, none wishing to miss a moment of their favourite program. Except for Amie. She bent down close to Robin's ear and whispered something, keeping her eyes downcast, not wanting anyone to know what her topic was about. Robin nodded and she took his hand, walking him over to secluded corner of the room.
A few minutes into the show, Raven's throat tickled and she let out a small cough. The viewers' attention was momentarily shifted from their interest to the dark, now quiet sorceress. "Sorry," she sighed just as Amie and Robin returned from their little discussion, her voice sounded as if she was going to burst into tears. "I didn't mean to distract you guys for your show. I'm sorry."
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As the teens gathered around the television, Amie took the chance to pull Robin away to spill her worries and ask some questions. She bent in close to Robin's ear and whispered, "Uh… Robin, is it okay if I talk with you for a second… alone?" Robin nodded his response and she grabbed his hand, hoisting him up. She's holding my hand… I feel so excited. She dragged him to a far corner of the room and stopped, releasing her hold on him as she did.
"So what's this about?" Robin wondered. "You thought of something useful for catching this Sir guy?"
"What? Oh, no. It's about Raven… I'm worried. Why is she acting like this? I know I don't know her as well as you guys do but this certainly can't be normal. Has she every done this before? Is she just trying to get attention or something?" she flung off her questions rapidly.
"Wow, slow down, Amie. I don't know what's wrong with her but if she says she's fine then we should leave her to take care of it herself."
"But she's so obviously not fine! Don't you care about her? Aren't you worried at all?" she retaliated, frustrated and furious.
"Yes, yes," he tried to calm her. "I am a little concerned but if she doesn't want our help, I can't force it onto her. Don't worry about it. I'll keep an eye on her. If the situation gets out hand, I'll swoop in and fix it." Then I can show you how amazing I am. You'll just die when you see me in action.
The conversation came to a close and they returned back to the others just as Raven was apologizing for a small cough she had made.
"Sorry," Raven sighed, her voice sounded as if she was going to burst into tears. "I didn't mean to distract you guys for your show. I'm sorry."
What? Now I'm completely sure that something's up. Robin's wrong about her. She wouldn't apologize for coughing like that! She practically told me so herself!
"It is alright, friend Raven. We do not mind. Coughing is a normal human function, correct? Therefore, you are not to blame," Starfire explained, smiling brightly at the melancholic girl.
Something struck Cyborg as very familiar about how the half-demon was now behaving. I know I've heard that voice and seen that person before somewhere… Well, I know it's Raven but I mean the way she's acting… Before he could reach the deja-vu's conclusion or anyone else could say anything further, an alarm blared throughout the tower. Everyone sprang into action while Robin yelled, "Titans, go!"
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I'm going to have to shorten my replies soon, or else they'll be as long as the chapter itself!
DBZmotoko: Sweet! I'm glad my story is touching someone, I hope in a good way. Yeah, flashback was sad; unfortunately that was her life on a regular basis. Three cheers for thesauruses! Without it I would be lost, my story would be filled with the same words like: nervous, said, looked, umm… well you get my point. And I like the 'Wow' at the beginning of your review, like your socks got knocked off or something. I shall attempt to keep up the spectacular writing and you keep up the fabulous reviews. Thank you!
Rabid-Gouki817: Yes, Sir is kind of obvious, though I hoped he wouldn't be. There is one line in the flashback scene, which really gave it away, and I wasn't sure if I should put it in but eventually people will have to know. Yah, since Raven's my favourite, I wanted a story focusing mostly on her and Amie needed someone she could feel safest and comfortable with so… that's Raven! And the BB scene, I wanted to add in some humour so it's not all serious. Thank you for the input and praise!
raerob4ever: Muhahaha! I love leaving a good cliffhanger so you'll come crawling back for more (does that make me sound evil or sadistic in anyway?)! Wow, I was laughing so hard when I read your CAPITALS demand. I must have looked crazy in front of my family. Oh no, I am weak against a please and I'm completely powerless against capitals! You have found my one weakness! Nooo! I'm melting, I mean typing, typing! Okay, now that that's done. Thank you for the boost, and I will update soon, but I don't take orders.
inu-yaha 1234: MORE CAPITALS! Funky Fresh (ooh, that sounded bad… or lame… or both)! I am thrilled that my chapters are getting better and better and you keep reminding me of it, because heaven knows that when I'm writing them, I seem to forget. I have the worst short-term memory. I have the worst… oops already said that. I will write more soon, but I hope that if I ever can't write more SOON, that you won't get mad for the delay. I set the update time bar too high! Oh well. I like the cute face. Thanks a million!
sweetnsexy2688: Wonderful! Another new person! Ah, what I wouldn't do if I didn't have people like you… (rhyming is fun!) It's cute? That's awesome! And I'm glad you clarified that the cute you were referring too was the good kind. I can't begin to describe how many times using that word and not explaining to people that I meant it in the good way has caused me some troubles. (I'm not mocking you.) Ooh! And I love your politeness! 'Please and thank you.' Much appreciated, most people demand. Thanks!
kairistwin: Yeah, good ol' reliable but feeling awkward Raven. You can always count on her to keep you safe. Unless you're on her bad side, as Amie seems to think she is. I am not at liberty to neither confirm nor deny that this will be a RavenxAmie story. The reason? One: I don't want to ruin it for anyone. And Two: I don't honestly know who will end up with who (or is it whom? Grammar ain't ever been my forte. hehe) I have no idea how this will end, I just let the story write itself. It's Alive! Thanks you!
silverfox: (hangs head in shame) Well, it tis true, I'm afraid I have no life… (sniff) all my friends are where I used to live (an hour's drive) so I don't really go out. Plus I have more time right now to write because I'm in the middle of exams. Well depicted you say, eh? That was my first ever attempt at any kind of sexual writing, even though not much sexually happened. I guess I just watch enough Law and Order SVU to describe rapes well. I will give myself more credit. Thanks for the kind words and waiting!
Desharik: Fantastic! Another, another new person! This story must be like honey if so many people (well many by my standards) keep coming in and joining the party! (I love honey… and parties!) And I get a 'very' attached in front of a 'good'? That's awesome! Not just awesome, but super rockin' awesome! I will keep up the good work, especially since I will soon have all the time in the world, until I forced to get a job. Thank you for joining my small crew of followers and adding my story to your favourites!
Helga vonGoogenshmit: To those who read other people's review replies: This is my sister so that would explain the playful bantering I am about to deliver, I will not insult any of you REAL reviewers. Hey! I'm no thief! Why don't you tell the world where you got your fake penname? (cough)Totally Spies(cough)! Your review/comments are somewhat biased though so I must disregard it, as I can only believe strangers. But it is awesome, isn't it? Don't tell people who Sir is! Bad Athena (hehe, sucker)! Thanks!
yurifan134: Or to whatever your real penname or whatever is. Another, another, another new person! I'm unstoppable! Soon the world will be mine! Or… just my story will be pretty popular and well liked. Either one works for me. I will write more! And I'm super, oober glad you liked it so much that you took time to review and demand for some more! And SURE that isn't your real name thingy… no need to be shy. Yuri is fun in healthy doses suitable to the reader's likes. Nah, I believe you. Thanks for the words!
vinnie the geek: Yeah! I've been hoping you would read my story (that sounded desperate). Every really good Titans story I've read, you reviewed so I was looking forward to you coming my way. I've only been able to read a bit of some of your stories (amazing so far, but I only review at the end of what's written) and I read your profile, pure hilariousity (not a word… I know). It's okay to Raven obsessed, I somewhat am, she is the coolest. Well, thanks so much for reading/reviewing and I hope you do return!
oBsEsSiVe AnD hYpEr: Another, another, another, another (hmm… how many do I need to use this time? Oh well.) new reader/reviewer! Oh happy and blissful day, can you get any better? No? I didn't think so. Wowee! You gave me a lot of input back (most so far) about my story/writing skills! Amazing, wonderful, strong, flowing, good and superb are such heart-warming words! And I loved your profile (I like to get to know my readers/reviewers better); it was hilarious! Thanks so much for words and the favs!
