Broken Lines Of Silver
Author: ChristinaRoss
Disclaimer: I do no own the Teen Titans or any of their characters. I do own Amie.
Author's Notes: This chapter has two fight scenes. I'm sorry if it disappoints any of you. I'm not good at describing fighting so I tried my hardest to avoid as much of it as I possibly could. If you would like a more intense battle scene, have no fear, I promise one later (I mean of course there has to be another fight scene when… I mean if they find Sir). And I know, I'm kind of steering off the track of Sir, but some issues needed to be pressed first, so I'll go back to him soon enough. Also, would you like any pairings in this story? I sort of purposefully left it kind of open for any kinds, like AmiexTitan or TitanxTitan, or maybe even Titan/AmiexVillain (but that might be a little more of a challenge). I'm flexible; I might be able to work in any you suggest, as long as they make sense (not something like SirxAmie, that's just crazy!). And if you want a pairing, would you also like a sex/lemon scene? I'm a little nervous about that, not sure my skills are up to it but I can give it a try and hope that it doesn't end up ruining my whole story. Please inform me in your reviews and I may or may not consider them, depends on what they are. But I do want to hear your opinions! Thank you and please: Read, Review, Enjoy!
Chapter 8:
Exterior And Interior Battles
The mini caped crusader was the first to arrive at the large screen and powerful computer. It contained all kinds of databases about Jump City and its villains. A map was launched into view at the press of a button, a red blip blinking on a particular road. Robin studied it for a bit while he waited for the others to catch up. As the arrived at the scene, he explained the situation in a matter-of-fact knowing voice, "It's Mumbo Jumbo. He's robbing a casino downtown. Let's move out!"
Robin was half way out the door when the innocent Tamaranian princess piped up. "Excuse me, Robin, but what about our new friend, Amie? Surely she cannot come with us. It would be dangerous."
Robin pondered the thought, rubbing his smooth chin in a fashion to show this off. Well, I certainly don't want to put her in danger. "You're right, Star," he agreed. "She'll have to stay here. And someone will have to stay with her, just in case some trouble occurs, like this is some kind of diversion to lead us away from her." He eyed the silver-eyed girl and quickly added, "Oh! And of course, to keep her company."
Beast Boy frantically waved his arm about in the air, resembling an eager student who knew the answer to a teacher's tough question. "Ooh! Ooh! Pick me! I'll stay!" he offered. This is great! I can spend time alone with her, showing off my awesome charm.
Cyborg smirked. Why is Robin the leader? That whiny, arrogant, obsessive, non-power holding hotshot. I should so be leader! Everyone knows I'm cooler. Why am I so jealous lately?
Robin went through the options in his mind, considering whom he should allow to miss out on the battle. Let's see… I can't let Beast Boy stay alone with her, who knows what he'll try. Same goes with Cyborg, I can't trust either them with her. They might try and snatch her for themselves. And I can't let Raven stay either. I have to keep watch over her while she behaving so odd like. Plus things seem a little awkward between her and Amie since she fainted. I still have to find out why. Well, I don't want Amie feeling uncomfortable or too comfortable, so I guess that leaves Starfire. Yeah, that's perfect. "Star, how'd you like to keep Amie company? I'm sure we can manage taking Mumbo down without your help for once."
Starfire shined a huge overjoyed smile, reaching from ear to ear. "It will be my pleasure," she answered, clamping onto the brunette with an excited hug. "We will have so much fun together. We could paint our toe nails and perhaps watch a movie while we discuss the male gender, no?"
Amie tried to pry open the redhead's arms to free herself. "Yeah, of course. Sounds like fun," she stifled in between grunts.
"Good. Then it's settled. Starfire will stay to protect and entertain Amie, while the rest of us will end that mad magician's tricks." Robin started to lead the way out of the tower once again, signaling his team to follow.
The remaining team members, minus Starfire, followed close behind him. The green shape shifter groaned as he left the room. "I wanted to stay with Amie," he complained but Robin wasn't listening.
Instead, the leader looked back over his shoulder, spotting a reluctant Raven trailing behind. "Come on, Raven. Pick up the pace. You're falling behind," he threw back behind him, hoping the quiet girl would hear him.
"Oh. I'm sorry. I didn't mean to. Please don't be mad at me." She quickened her pace to catch up with him, flying through the air, her hood still covering her sad face.
"It's okay, Raven. I'm not mad at you. Just wanted you to hurry up a little so we can get to Mumbo before he flees."
The dark sorceress sighed and continued on with her friends to the crime scene.
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As the Titans fled their home, Amie watched them until the last of them were gone. She turned to her afternoon companion and smiled hopeful. "So what do you want to do first?" she asked brightly.
"Would you like to join me in watching a film? Perhaps one of the romance kinds, which I always enjoy watching with Robin?"
"Sounds good to me." Starfire grabbed her favourite video and popped it into the VCR, pressing random buttons with nothing happening.
"Ooh! How do you work these things? They are worse than a Snarplox on a Weenible!" Starfire complained, frustrated.
"Here, let me help you," Amie offered, bending down beside the irritated heroine. They're hands momentarily touched, feeling each other's smooth skin against their own. Amie blushed and pulled her hand away quickly, using it to press the correct key to begin the movie. "There we go."
Starfire took a seat on the couch and patted the space beside her, motioning her new friend to join her. Amie obliged sitting relatively close to the other girl. "Thank you," Starfire said cheerfully, "for your assistance in operating the video displayer device. Robin is usually the one who activates it for me."
"No problem. I understand. Those things can be quite fiddly sometimes."
Starfire looked astonished. "That is what I had told Robin… but he did not believe me."
"Oh," was all Amie could manage to whisper, not knowing how else to answer.
The pair began to watch the movie, creating small chat in between about what was happening, and they sat side by side, their thighs slightly rubbing up against one another.
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The usual Raven continued down the floating pathway, passing the dying trees filled with black, cawing birds. She sighed out loud and muttered in her monotone voice, "Wonder when this path will end. And what's going on outside my mind right now."
Suddenly, a spark of hope came in her eyes as she spied some hooded figures standing off in the far distance. "Now I will find my answers… I hope." She picked up her speed, walking briskly towards her emotions, which seemed to be standing in a line. "Hey!" she yelled up ahead, hopping to catch at least one of their attentions. No one heard her cry, as another flash of colour blinded her, this time a dark green hue. Her head pounded once again and she held it, hissing through clenched teeth, "What the hell is going on in here?"
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"Alright, Mumbo Jumbo. You've had your fun. Now hand over the money and come in easily," the Boy Wonder commanded as he arrived at the scene, three of his four teammates standing beside him. I hope he resists so I can kick his ass. I love fighting. Too bad Amie couldn't be here to see me take this pathetic loser down.
The blue skinned magician turned around to face his opponents. "Oh! If it isn't my favourite audience! Though it looks like you're short one. No matter. I'm sure you four will enjoy my show. Now pick a card any card." He shoved the large sack of money into his hat, it magically disappearing within the smaller confinements. With a flick of his wrist, a deck of cards fanned out of his palm.
"We're not here to play your childish games, Mumbo," Robin threatened.
"Yeah! We're here to kick your ass!" Cyborg added, satisfied with his contribution.
"Ahh... Come now. Pick one. Or maybe you would like all fifty-two." He flicked his wrist once again, sending all the cards from his hand towards the Titans. The cards edges glistened in the streetlights and the heroes noticed their unusually sharp sides, as sharp as knives.
"Titans, move!" Robin ordered, back flipping himself out of the way of the weapons. Beast Boy changed into a crow and followed suit, Cyborg hot on his heels. Raven drifted through a black portal and popped back up behind a trashcan, hiding from the foe.
Once all the cards missed their desired targets and hit instead some random nearby street objects, Cyborg shifted his right arm into a plasma cannon. A low humming sound emitted from the blue, metal weapon as it powered up, aiming directly at the mischievous criminal. He fired when it was at the ready, Mumbo dodging the close call. "That was close," Mumbo Jumbo said, irritated.
Robin jumped in for his chance to attack; he held five bird-a-rangs in his gloved hand, poised for the ready. Mumbo cut him off before he could make his move. "Tell me, Bird Boy, are you a gambler?" he asked, distracting the boy from completing his assault.
Robin fell for the interruption, replying, "No, but I am somewhat of a good risk taker."
"Good, my boy. Then, why don't you take your chance at rolling the dice?" With a wave of his wand, two very large dice appeared in front of their creator, blocking any possible shots to be made by the Titan leader. The dice began to roll quickly towards their victim, Robin, who stood stunned for a split second. The giant, white cubes covered with black dots nearly crushed the hero if it were not for a lightning fast cheetah knocking him out of the way.
"Thanks, B.B." he complimented, thankful for his friend's quick thinking. Robin stood up and brushed himself off a little, Beast Boy rejoined the battle. The black, spiky-haired boy looked around for any sight of his last partner. Where the hell is Raven? And why isn't she helping us fight? He spotted her squatting behind the garbage can, observing the fight from the safe distance. "Raven!" he called out. "Why aren't you fighting? Get in there and lend a hand! We could really use your help!"
Raven stood slowly, mouthing a "Sorry" towards him, and walked out from behind her hiding place. As she approached the others, she stopped, her eyes flashing dark green and then returning to their normal purple colour.
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A dark green flash illuminated the surrounded area around the fractured glass, ending just as quickly as it had started.
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About half way through the movie, Starfire had something itching her mind, remembering her previous curiosities. She placed a hand on Amie's thigh, hoping to draw her attention away from the kissing scene happening on the screen. Amie shot her eyes at the alien in a questioning stare, muffling, "Uh huh?"
Starfire removed her hand from its position on the other girl's flesh and proceeded with her question. "Amie, I was wondering if you would be able to perhaps explain to me the peculiar behaviour you and friend Raven demonstrated a while ago in the infirmary." She held a serious face as she spoke, not showing off her usual joyful smile.
Amie felt herself become anxious and hot at remembering the embarrassing moment that she shared with the dark sorceress. She shifted her silver eyes off of the green pleading ones in front of her and glanced around nervously. "Oh, that? That was nothing. Just…" She stalled; trying to think of a likely excuse that the Tamaranian would buy. Her eyes fell upon the movie once again, the kissing scene becoming more passionate and intense. She stared at it for a while, the man and woman morphing into the figure of her and Raven. Eek! She hurled her sight off of the familiar picture and returned her gaze upon the ever patient Starfire. "I just woke up screaming from a nightmare and it startled Raven a bit, which startled me," she lied, praying that the tanned beauty would be satisfied with the response and drop the subject immediately.
"Oh, I see. But if you two were merely just frightened by one another, why are you still acting unusual towards each other?"
"It's nothing, okay?" she snapped, regretting her harsh tone. She sighed, seeing the disappointment in the other girl's eyes. Starfire dropped her head, looking as though she was a child who was scolded for trying to sneak a cookie. Amie touched her chin and tilted her head to face her again. "Hey, I'm sorry. Didn't mean to snap like that. But really, you shouldn't worry what's between Raven and I. It's not as though we hate each other." Though maybe Raven does hate me. Why else would she be acting so strange?
Starfire smiled and refocused on the television, just catching the end of the long, heated kiss. "That looks so pleasurable," she commented, sighing at the romantic-ness of it. "I wonder what it feels like."
Amie was a little shocked. "You mean you've never kissed anyone before? Not even tried?"
"No," Starfire admitted bashfully. "I was hoping that perhaps Robin would kiss me like that someday but I fear he may not like me that way."
"That's crazy, Star. How could he not like you? Just look at yourself! You're beautiful, funny, and sweet and caring. I think he just must be shy."
"Shy? People can feel timid about kissing one another?" she questioned, curious at this new idea.
"Yeah," Amie answered back.
"Are you shy of the kissing?"
Amie let out a little giggle at the question; never thinking someone would ever ask her something like that before. "No, not really. Maybe sometimes, if it's with someone really special that I'm nervous around. But I don't really like to be around people… in that way." She shuddered, remembering the numerous, dreadful times she was taken advantage of by Sir, pledging to herself that she would never get close to anyone ever in her life.
"Oh. I see. But I am afraid that when the time comes for my first kiss with someone special, I won't know how to do it properly," Starfire said with concern.
"Well, just do what comes naturally. There's no actual right or wrong way to do it."
"Will you show me how?" Starfire pleaded, her eyes wide in a puppy dog stare.
Amie was thrown back by the request. "Show you? How?"
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Raven shook her head vigorously and grinned at the sight before her. "Time for a butt whooping!" she exclaimed, enthused. She flew with quick speed towards the blue villain, who was occupied with fighting off the three boys with his many tricks. While he was distracted she mashed into him, launching a powerful uppercut, sending him soaring backwards into a brick wall.
"Ouch," he protested, slowly picking himself up. "That hurt, missy!"
Before he could fully stand, she was on him again, wrapping him up in black magic and bashing him into wall after wall. She stopped after the fifth time. "Stop that! You're not even giving me a chance to regain my composure! You have to let me do that! It's the unwritten law of battling! Everyone knows that!"
Raven smirked devilishly. "Well, maybe I don't like to follow the rules when I'm fighting scum like you," she said in a spiteful tone. Without anymore talking, she recommenced her attacks, one after another, alternating between her magical powers and her sheer physical force, clobbering him repeatedly.
The three boys stood watching from a distance, unsure what to do.
"Should we help her?" Cyborg asked, wondering.
"Maybe we should help Mumbo out instead. Looks like he could use it," Robin replied, dryly.
"Yeah. Raven's going medieval on his ass. Almost feel sorry for the guy," Beast Boy added. "Almost."
They continued to stare at Raven, who was eager and excited in her battling, unlike how she was previously, avoiding such physical contact, until she had her fill. She tied the poor, beaten man up with a large, steel lamppost and joined her colleagues. "That was fun!" she announced, smiling happily.
"That was awesome, Raven!" burst out Beast Boy from behind Robin and Cyborg. "You were all like: Neeeerrrrrmmm! Bang! Crash! And he was all like: Noooo! Help me!"
"Yeah, pretty good job, Raven," Cyborg agreed with his green, little buddy, patting him on the head.
Robin just stood there, trying to hide his obvious frown. So now she thinks she's all better than me… I mean us? She barely let me touch him. Oh, well… I guess she did do a good job after I forced her too. So in a way, my leadership skills were really responsible for this win.
The four Titans gathered up the evil magician who was pleading for mercy from the "wicked purple-haired girl" and dropped him off at the prison before heading back home with another successful job done at keeping the peace in Jump City.
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Before Amie could receive an answer from the bewildered but willing participant, her head surged with pain. Images burned her mind, flashing by quickly.
She saw Sir's shadowed face and heard him talking in his charismatic voice of his. She saw her parents bodies drop to the ground; blood spilling from them and muffled screams heard in the background. She saw Raven rapidly and ruthlessly attack a blue skinned man dressed in a magician's outfit and heard her pleasured cries. She saw Robin frowning in disappointment and then suddenly switching to smiling while he talked to her. She saw Cyborg waxing his precious T-car and singing along to his favourite tune. She saw Beast Boy staring lustfully at Raven's chest, only drool escaping his mouth. She saw Starfire leaning in closer to her face, trying to steal a first kiss. All these images and thousands more raced through her mind all at once, some events that already happened and some that have yet to happen.
She clutched her head, hoping that would stop them, but it didn't. Starfire became very worried for her friend's welfare and frantically asked Amie what was wrong. Amie's mind couldn't hear the terrified girl's pleaded cries; they just passed by her ears, not entering. She fell to her knees and rested her head against the hard ground, taking in rapid breaths. She couldn't feel Starfire's warm hand rubbing her back comfortingly. She couldn't feel anything but the pain. "Stop!" she screamed as loud as she could, her lungs aching, feeling as though they would bleed and explode within her.
As if the images had heard her, they stopped instantaneously. She released her death grip on her own head and suddenly felt sick to her stomach. Her body temperature was high and her vision and hearing was blurred. She could just make out an orange-red blob in front of her. "Are you all right, friend Amie?" the soft voice asked, Amie only hearing it in a deep, slow motion.
Without realizing it, she nodded her head, picking herself up off the floor. "I'm fine, Star. I just need to lie down," she mumbled, not recognizing what she was saying.
"Let me help you to your room," the princess begged, holding the petit brunette up.
"No, I can manage." She led herself away, feeling her way through the darkened corridors until she reached what she thought was her room, stripping down to just her green panties and collapsing onto the comforting bed. She wrapped herself up in the warm, soft sheets and fell fast asleep.
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The blue, hooded Raven finally caught up to her emotions, noting her accurate observation that they indeed formed a line. She passed by her 'clones' and made her way to the front of the line to investigate what was going on. At the head of the line stood happiness, draped in a dark pink cloak.
"What's going on here?" she asked bitterly.
Happy was taken off guard and spun around, expecting almost see Hate, instead only seeing the complete, full Raven. "Oh! Hi!" she bounced, hugging her controller. "What brings you here?" she asked lightly.
"Don't 'hi' me! What are you guys doing lining up in front on this… this…?" She concentrated on what stood before her. It appeared to be some kind of portal, similar to the kind she used to move around more easily but coloured white instead of black.
Happy didn't let her finish her talking. "We're all lining up to take turns!"
"Turns?" Raven asked coldly. "Turns for what?"
A small, logical voice answered her question for Happy. "Well, you see, this portal allows us to control you for a short momentary time. Once we have had our fair turn, we return back into your mind and the next emotion has a chance to be released for a while."
"Released," Raven hissed.
"Yeah! We want a turn at showing through for once. You never let us out, so now's our chance!" Happy finished up.
Raven bit her lower lip. "Great. Who knows what you have already done out there? I may have a big mess to clean up once I'm finished in here," she mumbled. "Well, this ends now!"
Just as she announced her decision, Courage stepped out of the portal smiling. "That was fun. I came in just at the right time to give that dumb ass Mumbo Jumbo a good whooping." She giggled, suddenly stopping once she saw Raven's angered frown. "Oopsies. Busted."
Raven pushed all her emotions back, telling them to go about their normal business while she used her powers to close up this nuisance of a portal. They reluctantly departed, most complaining how they didn't get to have their chance of control, and Raven began her chanting. "Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos. Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos. Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos."
The portal began to seal until a yell behind her distracted her from the task at hand. "Hey! Don't close that thing just yet. I didn't get my turn."
Raven knew which emotion it was before she even turned around. She spun in a circle and was face to face with the worst part of herself, Hate. "Tough luck if you think you're getting a chance at controlling me."
Hate grinned evilly, all four of her crimson eyes glowing from within her blood-red cloak. "Well, then, if you won't let me pass, I'll just have to force my way in." She positioned herself into an offensive stance, preparing for battle. "Come on, let's see you size up," she taunted.
Raven didn't waste time considering the demon-side-of-her's proposal. She formed a large ball of black energy in her hands and flung it at the similar girl's body. The attack caught Hate off guard, sending her flying backwards. "Why you little…' she hissed, forming her own identical energy ball. "I'll get you for that." Raven smirked, daring her to try and Hate released her giant, powerful orb, screening towards the dark sorceress. Raven created a black wall to shield her from the impact, lessening the force of the attack.
Hate snarled, swooping in to use a physical attack, kneeing Raven in the stomach. Raven coughed, sucking in air to regain the breath that was knocked out of her. While Raven was incapacitated, Hate took this opportunity to soar up in the air, wishing the battle to be aerial.
Raven composed herself again and joined her foe up into the pitch-black sky. "This is ridiculous. Stop this now!" she commanded, tired of fighting herself.
"Never! I want to be able to control you. Then I can do all the fun, nasty things that you are too chicken and noble to do." Hate formed an enormous fist out of her magical energy and grabbed Raven, squeezing her tightly in its grasp.
Raven gasped and grunted, trying to slip free. "Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos!" she yelled, her eyes glowing bright white, causing her attacker's fist to dissipate and release her. As soon as she was free, she fired off a couple of miniature energy balls and swooped in close to her, punching Hate hard across the face.
The battle continued on for a long while, each sharing equal attacks and blocks. They both flew apart after a long, striking merge between the two, panting for breath. "I need help," Raven whispered in between gasps. Using her mind, she called for her other emotions to reemerge and join her. Many of them obliged, floating up to the battle scene, and they hovered beside their leader.
"Do you really want to take us all on?" Raven asked, teasing and threatening at the same time.
"Crap," Hate growled. She knew that this battle was over and there would be no way she could bring them all down once they were working together. "Fine! Take back your precious control! Lock us up some more! But we will get out eventually… and then… you'll be screwed!" With that said, Hate disappeared off into the distance, not looking back.
Raven thanked her other emotions for their support and returned below to finish her task of sealing up the portal. After a few still moments, the portal was fully closed and she exited her mind in her usual fashion.
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A small crack on a beautiful hand mirror slowly disappeared, fixing itself up like magic, no more colours flashing from it.
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Feeling back to her usual self again, Raven reassured her teammates that now she was truthfully fine and that she was just going though a 'phase' earlier. They accepted the matter because she was acting normal and had her same emotionless expression and voice again.
When they arrived back at the Titan Tower, a lonely Starfire greeted them. "Greetings, friends! How did the battle with the Mumbo go?"
"Pretty good," Robin answered wearily. He looked around the room hurriedly. "Where's Amie?"
"She did not feel well and so went to her room to rest. We did have a good time though. We watched a romantic film and had a 'Girl Talk'."
"Oh, that's good. I'm glad you two were bonding," he said sincerely.
Raven didn't care to hear anymore of the conversation. She was tired from her battles, her body's battle against Mumbo Jumbo and her mind's battle against Hate. She levitated her way out of the room, slipping away with out anyone noticing.
Shortly after, the dark sorceress' friends mimicked her idea and made their own way through the empty hallways, departing into their separate rooms. One of them was in for an unusual surprise, as they would soon discover an interesting intruder sleeping soundly amongst their belongings.
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