The Training

If Mulan wanted to stay at train, the camp she would have as a soldier because she could not just sit pretty and watch everyone else fight. It was hard for the first few weeks, and it did not really help when Shang kept telling her to go home. She worked her butt off and finally it paid off, she was able to do better than everyone else was in the camp and she was almost as good as Shang. Shang never told his soldiers that there was a woman among them, he thought it would be better if no one knew, and Mulan understood. After everyone went to bed, Mulan crept out of her tent to go take a bath in the lake. The water felt good on her acing body and the water was warm, she felt like she could stay in the water forever! Then she heard a noise...

"Hello? Who's there?" trying to keep her voice low.

However, there was no answer, oh why did she come out to the lake alone at night? she waited for 20 minutes looking around seeing if she could see someone, but there was no one around. So, she got out quietly and cautiously as possible. She got dress making sure a towel was around her at all times, and ran back to Shang's tent to tell him she heard something. but before she entered, she thought I cant he might make me go home because he might think that someone found out who I was or something. So, Mulan just walked to her tent and tried to go to sleep.

The next day, Mulan went to Shang's tent.

"You wanted to see me?" Shutting the tent flap. Shang looked at Mulan and smiled. They really have not shown any affection towards each other since Mulan came to the camp a couple of months ago. He walked up to her and gave her an intense kiss, and Mulan wondered why, was there something wrong.

"I love you my dear, and since this is the final day of training until they are ready to fight I am letting them go home to see their families for the day and return the next day. Since we haven't got any word on the Huns moving I believe we are able to take a day off just to see our families."

"Mai will be thrilled! I love you too Shang!" little did they know they were being spied on

The next day Shang was working them harder than he ever did, just to make sure they would pass. All of a sudden, Mulan froze in the middle of marshal arts and was knocked out cold. when she woke up, she found Shang sitting by her.

"Mulan are you ok?"

"Yeah Shang, I am ok... where am I?"

"You are in the medical tent. What happened, you were doing so good and then you just froze."

"I...I... I saw... Ye Jun"

"Are you sure?"

"Yes...Yes I can never forget his face."

After they finished, the training Mulan and Shang went home to see their beloved Mai.

Mai was extremely happy to see her parents once again. Mulan left Shang to play Mai, for she was not feeling very good, so she went inside to rest. Shang came inside about an hour later to put Mai to bed. He walked into Mulan's room and saw that she looked very pail, so he called a doctor. Mulan knew something Shang did not and she wanted to keep it that way. Luckily, Mai started screaming when the doctor came.

"Excuse me dear. I'll be right back." Mulan nodded and Shang left. The doctor came and left in about 5 minutes, and told Shang that Mulan was going to be just fine.

The next day Shang said hisgoodbyes to the family and waited for Mulan. Mulan came out holding Mai tight in her arms

"Good-bye my love. Mommy will be back very soon. I love you"

" I wove do to mommy."

"OH MY GOSH SHANGCOME HERE!" Shanggot off his horse and came toMulan to see what was the problem

"What's the matterMulan?"

"Listen... Mai... mommyloves you!"

"I wovedo to mommy!" Shang looksat hisdaughter that just saidher first words and smiled. just then, there was aknock at the door. it was Chin Po, Ling, and Yau,we have come to get you and Mulan, General. (They were the only other soldiers that knew Mulan was in the army) Thank you. Shang and Mulan kissed their daughter goodbye and left knowing that their daughter would be safe. (or so they thought)

Hope you like it! give me some ideas! i am open for suggestions about how to make this story better! How did you like it? I dont think I will be able to make any more chapters this week because i have Lacrosse the entire week from 7-9 and homework, projects, church thing, i will be lucky if i am able to talk to some of my friends! hope you like it! later