I truly hate my computer... this is my 2nd time writing this chapter... (It did not save the first time)

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Mulan was riding now for 4 hours trying to go as fast as she could so Ye Jun could not harm Mai. Mulan begged to the ancestors to protect Mai from Ye Jun. She hoped that Ye Jun would not harm Mai, and she would just let Mai go. When Mulan reached Wei forest, she walked slowly. All of a sudden, she was knocked off her horse. Someone had knocked her out. When she awoke an hour later, she saw that her hands were tied. She looked around the room, and there she could see Ye Jun.

"Where is my daughter?"

"I don't have her."

"You said you had her! NOW let me see her!"

"I'm sorry, but you are to late."

"What?" Tears started to form in her eyes. "If you did something to her I swear I will kick your ass you son-of-a-BITC-"

SMACK!

"You are now mine! You will do as I say, you WILL Obey! OR else..." a smile came to his face along with a little chuckle.

"Or Else what?"

"Or else a certain Captain will... hmm. lets just say Mai won't have her father to care for her!" He said now laughing aloud.

"You wouldn't dare!"

"Try me!"

Mulan did not want anything to happen to Shang, so she hung her head in defeat.

"That's a good girl" Ye Jun chuckled

Meanwhile

Shang was riding his horse as fast as he could hoping he could catch up with Mulan... All of a sudden, he heard a cry. Shang stopped. He looked for what was making the sound, and there he saw was Mai. She was wrapped up in a blanket. He immediately got off his horse and ran over to her.

He picked her up and said, "Mai I have missed you so much. Thank the ancestors that you are alright!"

"Daddy? Where is momma?" Shang looked at her daughter he said, "She's not here"

He could not bear to tell her that her mother sacrificed herself to get Mai back.

just then, an arrow shot at them. Shang ran to his horse and rode off as fast as he could back to the tent.

When they got back, Shang went right to his tent to lay down his child. As soon as Shang put her down on his bed, she fell asleep. Just then, a soldier came in.

"Sir."

"Yes?"

"I have a letter for you."

"Who is it from?"

"The emperor."

"Thank you. You are dismissed."

When the soldier walked out. Shang turned around and read the letter.

Captain Li Shang,

I am sorry to hear about your wife and daughter. However, the Huns are moving forward. I need you at the Tung Chow Pass right away.

Shang put down the letter and walked outside.

"Chien Po!"

"Yes sir."

"I need to see you in my tent."

Chien Po fallowed Shang to his tent.

"I need you to do me a HUGE favor. I need you to take Mai back to Mulan's parents. The Huns are coming fast and we have to leave by dawn, do you think you will be able to make it back in time?"

"Yes sir."

And with that Shang nodded. He walked over to where Mai was sleeping. Shang picked her up in his arms. He said, "Good-bye Mai, I love you, and so does your mother. I will be back to see you soon." and with that he kissed her on the forehead and handed her to Chien Po.

Meanwhile

Ye Jun untied her, knowing she would not run away. Mulan was now a slave for Ye Jun. He had complete power over her. She was cleaning and doing her chores when someone knocked at the door. Mulan stood there not knowing if she was to get the door or if Ye Jun would get it.

"What do you think you are doing?" SMACK! "Get the door... NOW!" after he said that Ye Jun returned to his study.

Mulan walked up to the door and answered it. when she opened the door, shefound three large men standing there.

"Hello? May I help you?"

"We are here to see Ye Jun."

"Hold on, I'll get him" SMACK!

"NO! Take us to him NOW!"

Mulan bowed her head "As you wish. Fallow me."

Mulan walked down the hall of the little hut and knocked on the door.

"Yes?"

"There are some men here that wish to speak to you Jun"

Ye Jun walked to the door and opened it.

"Please come in and have a seat, I will be right with you." The three men walked in and Ye Jun closed the door behind him.

SMACK! "You are to call me Sir! Not Ye Jun... NOT Jun... NOT ANYTHING ELSE BUT Sir! Do you hear me?"

Mulan bowed her head "Yes sir." and left him to go back to work.

About an hour later, she saw the door open and the three men walk out. Mulan opened the door for them and when they left, Mulan went to Ye Jun's study and stood in the doorway.

"Yes?"

"I was wondering if you wanted something to eat sir."

"Yes I would."

Mulan bowed and walked out. about 20 minutes later, she returned. She walked up to Ye Jun's desk and set down his food. She could not help but stare at the paperwork on the desk.

"What do you want now?"

"Nothing sir. I was just wondering if I could go to bed now?"

"I guess so, since you have to wake up before dawn, so we can leave."

"Where are we going?" SMACK!

" I TOLD YOU NEVER TALK WITHOUT PIRMISSION! But if you must know we are going off to war."

"...us?. war?..."

"Yes us, yes war. I want to take over China!"

"But that would mean you were a...-"

"A Hun? Yes, I am a Hun. And the best thing is. You get to see the action up front. you get to see your country fall into my hands!" and there Ye Jun let out a deep DEEP laugh.

To be continued...

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