Sorry everyone, but in the past chapters there have been spelling errors, most of them were with 2 words together… my computer was acting retarded and for some reason didn't put a space.
Sorry I took along time writing this chapter, but I have been extremely busy.
Previously…
"Someone get help... NOW!" Shang ordered (The battle was over the Huns were dead... well what was left of them on the mountain. hint hint)
"Mulan... Hold on, please!" tears came to Shang's eyes.
"Shang I have to tell you something, I should have told you months ago, please forgive me for not telling you this sooner but I think you should know..."
"What ever you did I forgive you-"
"No Shang! Listen" Mulan coughed "I..." her breathing began to get heavy, "I am about a couple months... pregnant"
"PREGNAT?"
"Yes, I am sorry Shang, that you have to lose me and your unborn child." Mulan started to cough hard, she released some tears from her eyes.
"Mulan I am not going to lose you... not again. Please stay with me... I love you Mulan!"
"I...cough cough... Love you too Shang." Mulan started to close her eyes. (She doesn't say the cough cough part)
"Mulan keep your eyes open, the medic will be here any second... stay with me Mulan"
"I'm sorry Shang..." after that everything went black...
Death is knocking at your door.
By now Shang was in tears. He held Mulan as close as he could to her.
He kissed her forehead…
"Mulan stay with me… I lost my father, and I already lost you once, I refuse to lose you once again"
By That time, her breathing was extremely heavy, and her pulse was weak. By the time the doctor came, everyone knew it was too late for her.
Please come now I think I'm falling
I'm holding to all I think is safe
It seems I found the road to nowhere
And I'm trying to escape
I yelled back when I heard thunder
But I'm down to one last breath
And with it let me say
Let me say
Hold me now
I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking
That maybe six feet
Ain't so far down
I'm looking down now that it's over
Reflecting on all of my mistakes
I thought I found the road to somewhere
Somewhere in His grace
I cried out heaven save me
But I'm down to one last breath
And with it let me say
Let me say
Hold me now
I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking
That maybe six feet
Ain't so far down
Sad eyes follow me
But I still believe there's something left for me
So please come stay with me
'Cause I still believe there's something left for you and me
For you and me
For you and me
Hold me now
I'm six feet from the edge and I'm thinking
Shang took her into the tent that they finally set up. He stood by her side through the worst.
"Captain Li Shang, may I have a word with you."
Shang looked up at the doctor. "What is it?" He said enraged.
"Sir I don't know how to tell you this, but she might die. There is only one way to save her life right now, but it is extremely dangerous, she might die through the surgery. "
"If I lose her I really have nothing else to live for."
"Sir what about her daughter?"
"Mai? Hump… she doesn't care for me. She loves her mother more then me"
"Sir I-."
One of the other medical people came out.
"Sir, she is having a seizure if we don't start the surgery she will surely die."
The doctor looked over at Shang.
"I don't want to lose her."
"I will try my best to save her. But sir I am sorry to have to tell you this, but you must stay out of this tent."
It was so hard for Shang to think about Mulan dying and him not being by her side.
"…Okay…" Shang said weakly.
It had been three hours later. Shang had been by the medical tent, waiting for the news if Mulan had made it. The doctor came out with a sad look on his face.
"What happened? Is she all right? Oh, my God she is dead isn't see… I should have been by her side."
"Sir, calm down. She is all right."
"Then what is with the face?"
"We were able to stop the bleeding-"
"Then she is alright!"
"No Shang listen to me!" Shang stopped talking, for no one had called him by only his first name except for Mulan, her parents, and his.
"I was able to stop the bleeding, but she has lost so much already, her pulse is weak still, and… and she is still breathing very heavy. We are not sure if she will make it."
Shang stopped to understand if he heard the doctor right… "What? Sh…She may not make it through the night?" Shang turned his head so the doctor could not see a tear drop for his eye.
"I'm sorry sir."
How could this be? His best soldier… his wife… the mother of his child might die because of him. Shang quickly ran into the tent, for he knew this might be the last time he could see her… alive.
"Oh Mulan, how… why couldn't I protect you? This should have been me laying here, fighting with death not you." He could not go on it was way to emotional for him. He laid his head down to cry next to Mulan's arm.
All of a sudden, Shang felt a hand his head. He looked up to see Mulan's head turned to him.
"Shang do not blame yourself."
"NO! Because I was not there to protect my father… he is dead now. And because I wasn't there to protect you-"
"Shang, your father wanted me to tell you that he is extremely proud of you. And that… and that." Mulan took a DEEP DEEP breath. "That he loved you. And I love you too Shang…"
"No! Mulan! Stay with me! Mulan that is an order!"
"Shang… I am sorry… Take care of Mai…. I love… you."
"NO MULAN DON'T LEAVE ME I LOVE YOU! I CANT BARE TO LOSE YOU!"
The doctor ran into the tent to see Shang with his hands on Mulan's shoulders shaking her, "WAKE UP MULAN! WAKE UP!"
Just then, everyone ran inside the tent. Chein- Po, Ling, and Yau had to drag Shang out so the doctors could try to save Mulan's life.
"NO! I wont leave Mulan!… MULAN!" Shang yelled hoping Mulan could hear him… but she couldn't…
Sleep came to Shang, but Shang didn't give it a warm welcome. But when he fell asleep, he saw Mulan. Mulan looked up at Shang and said,
O my luve's like a red, red rose.
That's newly sprung in June;
O my luve's like a melodie
That's sweetly played in tune.
As fair art thou, my bonnie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will love thee still, my Dear,
Till a'the seas gang dry.
Till a'the seas gang dry, my Dear,
And the rocks melt wi' the sun;
I will luve thee still, my Dear,
While the sands o'life shall run.
And fare thee weel my only Luve!
And fare thee weel a while!
And I will come again, my Luve,
Tho' it were ten thousand mile!
"Mulan please… I don't want to lose you."
"Shang I love you don't forget that."
Shang placed his hand on her cheek and Mulan moved her hand to where Shang's had was.
"Mulan please return to me."
"Shang darling… my ancestors are calling me-"
"NO! Mulan don't listen to them they are trying to take you away from me! I wont let them!"
"I love you Shang. And I always will." And with that Mulan gave him a kiss on the cheek and backed up. Shang was walking after her, but then she disappeared…
"Mulan!" Shang cried, "Please Mulan return to me!"
Return to me, oh my dear I'm so lonely.
Hurry back, hurry back, oh my love I'm yours.
Return to me, for my heart wants you only.
Hurry home, hurry home, won't you please hurry home to my heart
My darling, if I've hurt you I'm sorry. Forgive me, and please say you'll be mine.
Return to me, come back belamia. Hurry back, hurry home, to my arms to my lips to my heart.
Oh my darling. If I've hurt you I'm sorry. Forgive me, and please say you'll be mine.
Return to me, caramia di amor, so lo to, so lo to, so lo to, mi amor.
To Be Continued…
The poem was by Robert Burns
That was a hard chapter to write… I had to go get some tissues for myself! Well tell me how you liked that! Please Respond, and Review. I will be happy to read your reviews to see if you liked it, if you didn't like it, what you think will happen, ect. Thanks!
