PLEASE READ THIS! DO NOT SKIP! THIS IS A VERY IMPORTANT NOTICE! I'M SORRY, THIS ISN'T AN UPDATE. (well it kinda is...)
Hi my faithful readers who all read my story and reviewed! I deeply regret -- and I do appologise -- for goin' so long without puttin' up another chapter.
But really, you have to understand that I can't pin the blame entirely on me lazyness, for i had a few problems going on with my poor computer.
Ok, scratch that, it had a hell of alot of things wrong with it. So many that i can't really remember what all was wrong with it. But I do know that when we took it to the Geek Squad over there at Best Buy, they told me that I had a shit load of spy-ware and viruses on my computer. I had so many that they said that there were 2 of them in the Start Up system (or is it start-up menu? oh well, w/e...). And it took them a full week to clear all of them off completly and install the anti-virus and spy-sweeper software.
Anyway on to things that actually matter --- when we went to take it to the Squad, I asked them if it was possiable for them to retrive any of my programs if they happened to get losted, namely MS Word (which I had Ch. 7 stored on with 13+ pages); they said that they wouldn't be able to retrive it b/c of some stupid azz reason. Anyway, long story short: I ended up losing that last chapter, which I have to say that I doing really good on.
Now you may be asking yourself (aka) your computer, 'Well why doesn't she just retype the whole chapter, sence it wasn't that long ago and her memory should still be able to remember the majority of the material? Right?'
Well guess what? I don't. Sorry to burst your bubble, but before we went to get the computer fixed, the was a period of time, i don't know...5, almost 6 months ago when my computer was on the fritz and i was trying to find someone who actually knew a LITTLE bit about what the hell they were doing to fix my computer. But then by that time, I'd already typed the 13+ pages for that chapter.
So sorry to say but i will hav to do it over. But don't worry i'll have it to you as soon as i can. Just to let you know how i'm actually typing this, is b/c I'm using MS Notebook.
Yea, I went back to read how I'd written the first 6 chapters...and I've come to an conclusion.
Before last Year, I sounded horrorable! I mean I know this is my 1st serious fic and all, but damn! I sound like a lil' first timer who's never even TRIED writing before; and then I noticed how many errors and mistakes were in there! So, of course I will be reposting all the chapters. And about that shot gun in the first chapter, it'll be changed to an iron baseball bat.
'Cause with that shot gun, Adrienne just sort of takes on the appearence of a black red-neck. Personally, I was totally NOT going for that image. So, with the bat she'll appear more teenager-ish. I'll also be updating their school class/grade, and their ages will be hiked up too. Oh, and about the part in the 6th chapter where Adrienne called TJ a 'negro', well yeah. The fact of the mater is that, I'm black, she's black, he's black so they have my permission to say that, b/c i can. And the only reason why I can is b/c my family says that on...odd impulses. PLEASE TAKE NOTICE THAT I'M NOT TRYING TO BE RACIST, OFFEND ANYONE, OR GIVE SPECIAL PRIVILAGES TO PEOPLE WITH AFRICAN-AMERICAN DECENT!
At the time when I wrote that part I was being plagued with different family members; and when my family gets into big groups they tend to get a bit...vulgur .U (for lack of better word). So with all that stuck in my head, it thus bleeded out into my story.
Now if the majority of you say, "Hey, I don't mind at all; i like it, keep it." Then keep it I will.
But if the majority of you say, "WTF! It makes the character seem too ghetto for this story and I don't like it, take it out." Then take it out i will. Now just so you know i will be adding a little bit of ghettoness all around the story to serve for comedy causes, but I don't want too much, thus making it tacky. I'm really gonna need your help people.
Kiyoshi
P.S. this story was NEVER ment to be a Mary-Sue! Believe me! BUt it starts going down Mary-Sue Lane then please give me a heads up. Kool!
