LOL!! Yeah go Rin!! I personally HATE Jaken and think that Rin is awesome!
Evil, stupid, fat, ugly TOAD! MUAHAHAHAHA! clears throat I mean, uh...
I... dislike Jaken... Well PLEASE update soon. C'mon people!! REVIEW FICS
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Gavroche I got the idea from a fic I read, I forget what it's called. Thanks for your reviews; I personally think that the toad should be Rin's personal slave (and maybe Shippo's, too). To Kagura being good, she's not exactly good, more mischievous. She went along with Naraku for a while, but he started mistreating her so now she only fights because she's forced. And besides, she has to fight Koga, who's too cute to Kagura to kill. But near the end Sango will...whoops! Better not tell you... about Kikyo being evil. It's not entirely her fault, she's soulless, you know. She'll be evil in this fic, but I'll give her back her soul in the end. How...you'll just have to read and find out. Thanks for saying what I've been saying since I started this story. Maybe the point's finally got through...
I know what you can call your story! you can call it, "the battle fields of love". p.s-YOU ROCK! rulebreaka come on! I'm not that good! Nice idea, but I'm not sure. I thought about it and came up with one similar (sorta). Thanks for your review and inspiration! That reminds me of a song... my responses
You love me! You really love me! Sniffsniff I'm okay now. Hey! There's pennies under this keyboard! Must be my bro's (he's a pain in the butt). Back to what I was talking about...
Please review, even if you have already, like Gavroche, who's reviewed many times (THANKS!)
Have any of you wrote stories? I otta read 'em.
I'm not quite sure if I should kill Kanna or not. If I shouldn't, what should I do? Sorry this came in late, mom doesn't let me on the internet after 6 and I missed the deadline.
Disclaimer: After I get married to a hot, rich guy with an 8 pack I'll own Inuyasha. {Stats say the chance of that is 1:10,000,000,000,0002 (notice the square sym.)} rite now I'm stuck with... oops! I forgot! There's three people on this site who'll know who I'm talking about! hides behind curtain and falls out an open window (ouch) Enough of my blabber! On to the story...
Ch7 Love and those who are loved
3rd person summery After they left the western lands (with Sess and Rin), they returned to the village they had rid of Kagura. Miroku was up to his usual tricks. He actually got a yes! From an old lady, but with Miroku... he ran out into the woods with Inu shouting after him to get the firewood today. Kagome is still upset about Kikyo (girls remember everything! Boys on the other hand... let me put it this way. My evil 8 yr old brother was trying to hit me, so I pushed him near the curtain. He grabbed the curtain to steady himself, and it came off! 2 sec. later he started yelling "mom, look what she did! She broke the curtain!" while he was still holding it! No offence to the smart guys out there, this don't apply to you). Sango is up (well, as up as you can be with a hairline fracture in your rib) and at it trying to figure out what's wrong while Kag's in denial.
Kag's view. It's sunset, to help clear things out
Dumb Kikyo! She had to go and ruin everything! Just when I was going to make my move! We were alone in the woods, nearing sunset, by the god tree, it was perfect! I was going to kiss him and tell him I loved him and would see what happened. Why does Kikyo have to come and ruin it! He told me he didn't love her anymore. Liar! Stupid Kikyo! Stupid two-timing Inuyasha! Sango's trying to help, but she can't do much in her injured state. Yawn I'm getting sleepy, I hope Miroku catches something soon. I'm really hungry. There he is now.
"What's the catch of the day, Miroku?"
"A rare white rabbit! See how delicious it looks, Kag?"
"Rare white rabbit?"
"A rare catch for me indeed!" I should of guessed. He only catches black rabbits.
"I'm going to lay here until you cook it. don't you dare try to peek up my skirt!" Yawn I guess I'll just rest my eyes for a moment...
The ground ran red with the blood of her comrades. Inuyasha lay unconscious on the ground behind her as did all her friends. Kikyo stood in front of her with a menacing look.
"Now all between me and vengeance is you!" She pointed at me. "Go my minions, bind her! Bind her!" These eel-like creatures that swam in air glided over to me so fast, it would have been impossible to prepare for. They wrapped around my arms and legs, and held me 5ft above the ground. Kikyo came to me, it seemed she floated here than walked, and said
"Lucky Kagome, you get to watch me drag the hanyou to Hell!"
"NOOOOOOOOO!!!!" My head jerked up just as Miroku was attempting to... you-know-what. My mouth was inches from Miroku's ear. Everyone (except for Sango, who was in the village getting a sorta feudal world cast) even Sesshomaru (soooo sorry for previous misspellings!) came running towards the direction of camp. Inuyasha got here first.
"Are you alright Kagome?" I stared into his amber eyes. I could see his affection, his worry, it was almost like I could see into his soul. We locked eyes for a few seconds, but it seemed like an eternity. Rin broke the spell.
"Kagome-chan, are you ok?"
"I'm fine, just a bad dream, that's all,"
Inu's view
Did we just lock eyes? It was like I couldn't move, paralyzed by some strange hex. I could see her fear, uncertainty and...love? I'm fooling myself. She doesn't love me, even though wish she did. Did she see Kikyo and me? Maybe that's why she's so upset! No, she doesn't like me. Sesshomaru doesn't have to deal with this! Girls are so confusing (and we're proud of it)! Sango had just came back with the aid of two funny y- shaped sticks.
"Dinner is served!" said Miroku as he started handing out rabbit portion to everyone. Rin and Shippo were playing not to far away, and ran over to their appointed guardian (Kag for Shippo, Sess for Rin) and told them excitedly about all the fun they had and how they helped Miroku catch a rabbit. For some reason I'm not hungry now. That's unusual for me after a long hike. I ate it anyway, Didn't want to appear too conspicuous (what does that mean anyway?). Miroku came and sat next to me and whispered in my ear
"I saw you two lock eyes what were you thinking?"
"Nothing you would!" I screamed that, injuring his ear (again, even though Inu doesn't know that), and bopped him on the head.
"Owwww!" Everyone but Sess, who didn't know about the monk's antics, was laughing.
"What's so funny?"
"You!" The sun had set by then, cloaking the camp in darkness. Sango was explaining to my brother about Miroku so he would understand why they were laughing. I decided to take first watch, I would give me some time to think about everything. About how Kagome avoided eye contact, how she looked at me when she thought I wasn't looking, how she looked when she saw me and Kikyo, how Sess got dreamy eyed when anyone brought up Kikyo. He had look between love and hate. Kagome looks like an angel when she's sleeping.
Sess's view Inu took first watch today. I saw how he locked eyes with Kagome, but I didn't say anything, even though we pick fights with each other constantly, I can't be as mean to tell everyone that he loves Kagome, no one should be that mean (I wish Jessica could see that)! I can tell Kagome loves him back, but I'm not going to tell him, he needs to find out for himself, only then will he believe. I've only loved one girl in my life, but she was in love with my brother! That is why I despised him, not because he was only a half demon, even though that had some to do with it, because he stole my girl. But then she went and killed him, so now I have mixed emotions about her. I love her and hate her. Kagome told me about Kikyo and Inu's meeting, except for how she felt about it. And Inu thinks he has it hard!
On the girl's side of the camp...
Kag's view (note to reader: Inu's back was to Kag)
No matter what I do, I just can't get to sleep! I can't help but think of how Inu kissed Kikyo! It tears my heart out to think he had ever loved me. I wish I had someone who's been in my situation to help me out (I have, but they weren't actually kissing). Sango tries to help, but she just can't understand! It's not fair! Inuyasha turned around halfway, so that half his face was visible to me. He looks so handsome when the moonlight hits his face like that. Dreamy look runs across face (both Kag's and mine) Oh! He's looking this way! I shut my eyes in fake slumber, hoping he hadn't seen me looking at him. Yawn! I think I'm going to sleep now. Shippo snores like a tornado!
Sango's view Miroku's so cute when he sleeps. I wonder what he's dreaming about. Probably something wrong, knowing him. Everything about him is perfect, except for his groping. But at least he acknowledges me as a woman, not just a hardcore exterminator. Oww stupid Kanna and her mirror! I wish I wasn't wounded the way I am!
Wondering why I didn't give Miroku a paragraph? Just think of what he might think. He's too perverted!
Gavroche I got the idea from a fic I read, I forget what it's called. Thanks for your reviews; I personally think that the toad should be Rin's personal slave (and maybe Shippo's, too). To Kagura being good, she's not exactly good, more mischievous. She went along with Naraku for a while, but he started mistreating her so now she only fights because she's forced. And besides, she has to fight Koga, who's too cute to Kagura to kill. But near the end Sango will...whoops! Better not tell you... about Kikyo being evil. It's not entirely her fault, she's soulless, you know. She'll be evil in this fic, but I'll give her back her soul in the end. How...you'll just have to read and find out. Thanks for saying what I've been saying since I started this story. Maybe the point's finally got through...
I know what you can call your story! you can call it, "the battle fields of love". p.s-YOU ROCK! rulebreaka come on! I'm not that good! Nice idea, but I'm not sure. I thought about it and came up with one similar (sorta). Thanks for your review and inspiration! That reminds me of a song... my responses
You love me! You really love me! Sniffsniff I'm okay now. Hey! There's pennies under this keyboard! Must be my bro's (he's a pain in the butt). Back to what I was talking about...
Please review, even if you have already, like Gavroche, who's reviewed many times (THANKS!)
Have any of you wrote stories? I otta read 'em.
I'm not quite sure if I should kill Kanna or not. If I shouldn't, what should I do? Sorry this came in late, mom doesn't let me on the internet after 6 and I missed the deadline.
Disclaimer: After I get married to a hot, rich guy with an 8 pack I'll own Inuyasha. {Stats say the chance of that is 1:10,000,000,000,0002 (notice the square sym.)} rite now I'm stuck with... oops! I forgot! There's three people on this site who'll know who I'm talking about! hides behind curtain and falls out an open window (ouch) Enough of my blabber! On to the story...
Ch7 Love and those who are loved
3rd person summery After they left the western lands (with Sess and Rin), they returned to the village they had rid of Kagura. Miroku was up to his usual tricks. He actually got a yes! From an old lady, but with Miroku... he ran out into the woods with Inu shouting after him to get the firewood today. Kagome is still upset about Kikyo (girls remember everything! Boys on the other hand... let me put it this way. My evil 8 yr old brother was trying to hit me, so I pushed him near the curtain. He grabbed the curtain to steady himself, and it came off! 2 sec. later he started yelling "mom, look what she did! She broke the curtain!" while he was still holding it! No offence to the smart guys out there, this don't apply to you). Sango is up (well, as up as you can be with a hairline fracture in your rib) and at it trying to figure out what's wrong while Kag's in denial.
Kag's view. It's sunset, to help clear things out
Dumb Kikyo! She had to go and ruin everything! Just when I was going to make my move! We were alone in the woods, nearing sunset, by the god tree, it was perfect! I was going to kiss him and tell him I loved him and would see what happened. Why does Kikyo have to come and ruin it! He told me he didn't love her anymore. Liar! Stupid Kikyo! Stupid two-timing Inuyasha! Sango's trying to help, but she can't do much in her injured state. Yawn I'm getting sleepy, I hope Miroku catches something soon. I'm really hungry. There he is now.
"What's the catch of the day, Miroku?"
"A rare white rabbit! See how delicious it looks, Kag?"
"Rare white rabbit?"
"A rare catch for me indeed!" I should of guessed. He only catches black rabbits.
"I'm going to lay here until you cook it. don't you dare try to peek up my skirt!" Yawn I guess I'll just rest my eyes for a moment...
The ground ran red with the blood of her comrades. Inuyasha lay unconscious on the ground behind her as did all her friends. Kikyo stood in front of her with a menacing look.
"Now all between me and vengeance is you!" She pointed at me. "Go my minions, bind her! Bind her!" These eel-like creatures that swam in air glided over to me so fast, it would have been impossible to prepare for. They wrapped around my arms and legs, and held me 5ft above the ground. Kikyo came to me, it seemed she floated here than walked, and said
"Lucky Kagome, you get to watch me drag the hanyou to Hell!"
"NOOOOOOOOO!!!!" My head jerked up just as Miroku was attempting to... you-know-what. My mouth was inches from Miroku's ear. Everyone (except for Sango, who was in the village getting a sorta feudal world cast) even Sesshomaru (soooo sorry for previous misspellings!) came running towards the direction of camp. Inuyasha got here first.
"Are you alright Kagome?" I stared into his amber eyes. I could see his affection, his worry, it was almost like I could see into his soul. We locked eyes for a few seconds, but it seemed like an eternity. Rin broke the spell.
"Kagome-chan, are you ok?"
"I'm fine, just a bad dream, that's all,"
Inu's view
Did we just lock eyes? It was like I couldn't move, paralyzed by some strange hex. I could see her fear, uncertainty and...love? I'm fooling myself. She doesn't love me, even though wish she did. Did she see Kikyo and me? Maybe that's why she's so upset! No, she doesn't like me. Sesshomaru doesn't have to deal with this! Girls are so confusing (and we're proud of it)! Sango had just came back with the aid of two funny y- shaped sticks.
"Dinner is served!" said Miroku as he started handing out rabbit portion to everyone. Rin and Shippo were playing not to far away, and ran over to their appointed guardian (Kag for Shippo, Sess for Rin) and told them excitedly about all the fun they had and how they helped Miroku catch a rabbit. For some reason I'm not hungry now. That's unusual for me after a long hike. I ate it anyway, Didn't want to appear too conspicuous (what does that mean anyway?). Miroku came and sat next to me and whispered in my ear
"I saw you two lock eyes what were you thinking?"
"Nothing you would!" I screamed that, injuring his ear (again, even though Inu doesn't know that), and bopped him on the head.
"Owwww!" Everyone but Sess, who didn't know about the monk's antics, was laughing.
"What's so funny?"
"You!" The sun had set by then, cloaking the camp in darkness. Sango was explaining to my brother about Miroku so he would understand why they were laughing. I decided to take first watch, I would give me some time to think about everything. About how Kagome avoided eye contact, how she looked at me when she thought I wasn't looking, how she looked when she saw me and Kikyo, how Sess got dreamy eyed when anyone brought up Kikyo. He had look between love and hate. Kagome looks like an angel when she's sleeping.
Sess's view Inu took first watch today. I saw how he locked eyes with Kagome, but I didn't say anything, even though we pick fights with each other constantly, I can't be as mean to tell everyone that he loves Kagome, no one should be that mean (I wish Jessica could see that)! I can tell Kagome loves him back, but I'm not going to tell him, he needs to find out for himself, only then will he believe. I've only loved one girl in my life, but she was in love with my brother! That is why I despised him, not because he was only a half demon, even though that had some to do with it, because he stole my girl. But then she went and killed him, so now I have mixed emotions about her. I love her and hate her. Kagome told me about Kikyo and Inu's meeting, except for how she felt about it. And Inu thinks he has it hard!
On the girl's side of the camp...
Kag's view (note to reader: Inu's back was to Kag)
No matter what I do, I just can't get to sleep! I can't help but think of how Inu kissed Kikyo! It tears my heart out to think he had ever loved me. I wish I had someone who's been in my situation to help me out (I have, but they weren't actually kissing). Sango tries to help, but she just can't understand! It's not fair! Inuyasha turned around halfway, so that half his face was visible to me. He looks so handsome when the moonlight hits his face like that. Dreamy look runs across face (both Kag's and mine) Oh! He's looking this way! I shut my eyes in fake slumber, hoping he hadn't seen me looking at him. Yawn! I think I'm going to sleep now. Shippo snores like a tornado!
Sango's view Miroku's so cute when he sleeps. I wonder what he's dreaming about. Probably something wrong, knowing him. Everything about him is perfect, except for his groping. But at least he acknowledges me as a woman, not just a hardcore exterminator. Oww stupid Kanna and her mirror! I wish I wasn't wounded the way I am!
Wondering why I didn't give Miroku a paragraph? Just think of what he might think. He's too perverted!