Ooh, this is cool! (Grins) Hmm, my fanfic writing powers are slipping downhill, I have a small touch of writers block... But keep at it! You will get more reviewers through perseverance! Trust me on that one... I have spent many LONG hours writing Demons never cry... My head hurts. But you have a talent! I'm sure that things will look up soon! sasha-nyanko

mine does too. Me? Talent? I wish. To add to my suggestion, maybe have Jaken be surprised by the two and then scared to death when they jump on him and then play beat-Jaken-with-his-own-stick

Sasha, I liked your physic kitty, so I think I might steal that. Not exactly the same way, but...

Here's ch 17 for all my faithful readers (which is probably just sasha- nyanko, but...) If that is false, review! If it's true, review anyway, sasha.

And that 'really?' was supposed to have puppy-dog-eyes with it, but I forgot to put 'em in.

Disclaimer: after my world conquest I will own Inuyasha! And all of you are so unsuspecting...Muhahahah!

Have any of you seen Finding Nemo? Have you seen at the end of the credits when the little yellow fish eats the angler? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! You gotta laugh!

Ch17 joining the group

=3rd per=

"We musssst give her a stronger poison. She's been wandering in her sleep," the evil-looking female snake demon gestured to a beautiful young girl about 20 chained to a wall. She was sleeping, as she had been for twelve years.
"Remind me why we keep her around?"
"Because Naraku said so!"
"Why?"
"Go ask him yourself, you dolt!" at that moment the demon walked into the room.
"Because if she were given a chance to meet Kagome they would be unstoppable. With her knowledge from Kikyo and Kadea and the power Kagome has they would rid the earth of me. I got rid of her once, and then her recarnation came. That is why I have you two to watch her. Remember, anyone who fails me has dire consequences,"

LYDV

"What's wrong, Natomi?" the white wolf bore her teeth and growled. She was restless, pacing in circles around me. I went back to my attempts of fixing my broken bow, being careful to leave my dagger within easy reach. It was fruitless work; there was no way I could fix the bow without a bowstring! There was no way to get one either, the villages would all throw me out before I could even ask to barter for one. {Sigh}. {CRASH!} I got up, dagger in hand. I heard voices arguing and there was no evil aura about them, but I never let down my guard. I told Natomi with my physic powers not to attack until I told her to.
"Why'd ya do that?"
"Cause your being a jerk, Inuyasha!"
"No I wasn't! Hey what's that smell?" I could hear someone sniffing. I sniffed, and could immediately tell that there were four humans, a kitsune, a hanyou, and a full yokai dog-demon.
"Weird, I never smelt anything like that before," I heard the half- dog-demon say.
"As long a it's not Naraku,"
"Yeah," they were obviously against Naraku. They couldn't be so bad. If they got a little closer I could read their minds. Good thing they were coming my way. In a couple of minutes they were in full view. The girl in an atrociously (what does that mean?) short skirt spotted me first.
"Look!" I sent a wave of physic force at her and it hit her with a green flash. I read her mind and found out she was in love with the hanyou, hated Naraku and was from a million year in the future. I also found out that the monk was fond of girls butts, had a wind tunnel resulting from a curse from Naraku. The girl's mind told me that her name was Kagome and what everyone else's names were. I saw the hanyou reach for his sword.
"I mean you no harm, I'm also against Naraku."
"How do you know we're against Naraku?" the girl named Sango asked.
"I read minds, watch," I sent a wave towards Miroku.
"What did you do?" he said as he saw the green flash.
"Let's see, you're a monk who acts un-monkly, loves girls butt and you wanna do WHAT to Sango?" I grimaced. "You have a very nasty mind, Miroku." {SLAP}
"Why'd ya do that, Sango?"
"Whatever you were thinking, I'm sure it wasn't nice!" the offended monk rubbed his newest slap, as I read that he received them a lot. The half dog demon called Inuyasha still looked untrusting, even though the rest seemed to trust me.
"Why should I trust you?" I flashed him. It hit him squarely between the eyes.
"Because I know you have a crush on,"
"Yeah right," I sent him a message. I told him that he liked Kagome. He blushed.
"Okay, okay, you win," I glanced at the one called Sesshomaru. He had remained silent.
"Your sent is familiar, wait a second, you don't happen to be the pup who was always brushing his hair at my aunts house?" it was now the yokai's turn to blush. Natomi growled and attacked little fluffy-wufficines (that was his pet name).
"Natomi!" ended up she was attacking what he had in the folds of his clothes. She dragged out a little doll of a frog humanoid with a staff that apparently was a splinter of another staff.
"Are you so girly that you carry dolls around?"
"Shut up. It's what I scare Jaken with to make him obey. It's a voodoo doll (yes, I stole that from you Sasha. I had to bash Jaken somehow)," Natomi continued to tear it to pieces.

(Somewhere far away...)

Jaken sat there in a nice comfy chair, happy that Rin was gone when suddenly he felt like he was being shredded to pieces.
"Ow! Ow ow ow ow!"

(Back to Lydia)

Sesshomaru, realizing how much pain Jaken was probably going through and made some signs in the ground near where Natomi was destroying the doll:
Must have been a deactivating spell. Still it was a few minutes before he got it all done and Natomi has very sharp teeth. Poor Jaken, but I'm sure he deserved it, he was always mean to me when I lived at Sessie's house.
"Natomi must dislike Jaken from what I've told her about him," and Rin, having felt my ears with as much enthusiasm as Kagome when she first felt Inu's, added
"But I love to play games with him! He plays tag with me all the time!"
"Tell us why you're here,"
"And why you have such a funny sent,"
"SIT"
"Can't take those prayer beads off, can you,"
{GROWL}
"SIT"
{OUCH}
"Well, I'm the offspring of a wolf and dog demon and I'm Inuyasha and Fluffy's cousin. My parents died when I was very young under Naraku's hand and it was partly his fault I have physic powers. It was when he..."

This ch is getting to long, time to stop. I know it's a cliffhanger, but I love cliffies! I'll tell you the rest of Lydia's story tomorrow. Lydia: yeah, why am I physicked? IM: hold on a second shoots thousands of icicles at Jaken voodoo doll Lydia: backs away from crazy author maybe I'll wait till tomorrow

Review already!