Ch. 3
As they got to class Danielle's eyes opened wide and she smiled. "Wow I have never seen anything quite so amazing!"
"Yeah it is great." Harry said.
"Look at the plants they are moving"
"Yeah they tend to do that there great. you should have been here a couple of years ago mandrakes funniest plants ever! Acne and the crying"
"What? Wow!" she said laughing
"Hey D! Come sit here next to me!" max called
"Lets go sit their Harry!"
"Sure Pudding anything you want."
"Pudding?" D asked laughing never having a nickname like that.
"Because your hair is dark brown rich like my favorite chocolate pudding. Plus you also taste as yummy" Harry said kissing her again.
"Thanks and good answer." D said smiling as they walked and D sat next to Max and Harry next to D.
"Hey D, aww you two match. Meet my friend his name's Draco, Draco Malfoy Meet D."
"Hello D," he said, "A Gryffindor are you? How interesting but I guess any friend of max is a friend of mine." Draco said.
"Thanks, so you are in Slytherin with her?"
"Yes. I am," he said looking over and seeing Potter next to her holding her hand.
"What, why are you staring at Harry like that what's between you guys?" max asked
"We go back. let's say we don't get along that well." Malfoy said
"Hey Ron! Ginny sit here!" Harry yelled at the 4 empty sits next to him. Ron sat next to Harry and Ginny next to Ron. Then Neville came and sat next to Ginny.
"Hello Class and Welcome to Herbology Year 6! Today we shall discuss Krafloo plant which is a main ingredient in what?" Professor Sprout asked. "Yes Ms. Weasley." "It is the main ingredient in Floo powder." Ginny answered
"Correct. AS you see if you.." She went on
"Ron. Do you know where Hermione is?"
"No clue, I thought she was with you?"
"No.I wonder where she is?"
"Max, Have you seen Hermione?"
"She said she was going to upstairs to get something."
"I wonder what is taking her so long.." Harry wondered
*Gryffindor common room*
Hermione was sitting on her bed crying. *I wish I could tell them! About her dying about my parents falling apart. Will I have to go live with Ron? Will I be like Max! What will happen I mean its all my fault! They were saying! *
Flashback
~"You know we have to split for Hermione! How is he going to get any work done if were fighting all the time!" mom yelled "Hermione always having to be Perfect you except too much of that kid just leave her alone!" Dad was yelling~
"It was my fault they got a divorce I wasn't good enough! Never good enough for them" she cried out while holding her scissors " Cant I just make the pain go away." And she cut herself over and over again. Until she was feeling much better, she was normal and O no she had Class! So she ran all the way to Herbology.
"Ms. Granger you are late!" Professor sprout said
"I am so sorry I just was."
"No matters sit down, as I was saying if you mix the Odeon powder in the mix from this plant it makes.."
"Hermione Where were you?" Harry asked
"I forgot something and then just lost track of time."
"Hermione the perfect! Losing track of time I though you knew everything!" Ron was laughing as Harry laughed along. "O shut your bleeding mouth! You guys are just AHH!" She said and walked off and sat in the only other available sit instead of near Harry next to Malfoy.
"Hermione you are so luck girl" Max called
"Why?"
"You got to miss the most boring thing ever! I'm looking forward to Flying next and potions but after lunch History of Magic, runes, and Muggle studies sounds boring! You want to skip with me after lunch?"
"Skip class?" Hermione said in a worried voice. Why should she always be perfect her life wasn't perfect why shouldn't she have some fun! "Sure after lunch." Hermione said smiling.
"Draco you up for it?" She asked
"Cutting class's. Sounds like fun and wrong and braking rules so I'm in!"
"All right so the three of us it is." Max said and noticed Hermione turn a bit red when she realized Draco was coming too.
"You don't mind do you Frizz?" Max asked
"What o no problem M?" Hermione said
"Hermione! What are you thinking of cutting!" Harry said
"Yeah come on don't be daft!" Ginny said
"Why don't you go back to being madly in love with Harry and reading your stupid books and leave me alone to have a real life" Hermione said
"Max!" D said relaxing what was happening
"Don't worry D this isn't for you, you and your boyfriend go to class I don't want to get you in trouble babe."
"Max," D whispered, "What is going on? All this fighting?"
"That is not my deal. From what I saw she came in late ad as supposedly friends they dissed her right to her face. They have their own issues I'm just trying to have a little fun. Don't worry D they'll figure things out. hey class is over yes Flying I have been wanting to get my feet of the ground."
"Yeah it sound great though I am a little scarred." "Don't be Pudding I'll show you how." Harry said
"Really I can't wait then."
**
"Welcome class! To advanced flying today we shall warm up first off and then try some zigzagging through the magic rings! First off warm up!" Madam hooch said, "Max and Danielle please come here."
"Yes," D said, "They call me D just to let you know."
"Do you girls have last name's?"
"Well I don't" Max said
"Neither do I" D said
"All right so D and Max I realize you two are at beginner Level so please get someone to work with and learn."
"I all ready is going to work with Harry" D said
"Fine Choice... He is a excellent flyer. And you Max?"
"I'll just learn on my won thanks"
"It is quite difficult." Madam Hooch Warned her
"I like a challenge plus might I add you are amazing eyes like cats. I love them." Max said walking away and grabbing a broom.
She watched Harry Teach D and she did as D did and said up and once the broom was ups he got on "I hope this is work."
"To the New girls please do not life off the ground too much.Max!" As she was saying this Max zoomed up and flew around. "Max Get Down!"
"I don't think she can hear you miss" Draco said
"Dammed does that girl ever listen?" She yelled
"She's quite good!" Harry said
"Yea but that high is dangerous especially now that Hagrid is teaching hippogriffs to fly." Suddenly a flock of them came towards max she had nowhere to go so she tried to out run them.
"Max! Max Get out of there!" D yelled but she saw Max going in the wrong direction. "Up!" D yelled and got on and went after Max. *Wow this is great so comfortable so right! *
"D! Get down Here! What is it with Americans!" Madam Hooch said as she took out her wand but they we re lost in a flock.
"Madam, Please let me go up there! I know how to fly I could help please!"
"I don't know. though you do have skill. If you're sure all right!" and Harry was up there fast.
"D, Max! Where are you guys?" Harry yelled through the flock.
"Max! Go left the way out is left you are going the wrong way!" D yelled
"All right! D what are you doing here!"
"Had to save you're ass didn't I!"
"D isn't this so just Right! It fits flying?"
"Yeah I know what you mean I can just be laid back" She said and as she relaxed a hippogriff hit her and knocked her off her broom."
"D!" Max yelled ad zoomed down but the birds were all in the way then she heard a voice it was Harry! "Harry! Harry! D she fell! HELP HER NOW!"
*O my god D! * HE thought he had to get her he zoomed downs o fats he couldn't see anything but he didn't care D! He zoomed and saw he grabbed her and brought her down "D! D! Are you OK! Say something"
"I'm all right, thanks to you Harry!"
"No big thing!"
"What were you thinking? Going up there that was stupid and irresponsible 10 points from Gryffindor for your Rash behaviour! And 25 points to Harry for not only saving the girls but showing some excellent flying."
"Where's Max?" D asked looking around
"I don't know she was coming out last I saw." Harry said. Then suddenly a broom came crashing down. "O no!" Harry said
"Max!" D said and then closed her eyes then she was floating just a little bit off the ground.
"D what are you doing?" Harry asked worried
*Max Ca you hear me are you all right?"
*Yes I can Harry knocked me off my broom zooming down so quickly he slammed into me without even noticing*
*Where are you now? *
*On top f one of these things I'll be down as soon as I get how to steer *
"She is fine she on top of one of those tings and will be down soon."
"How did you know that D? "Harry asked
"O me and her have a connection a mess up with one of our potions now if we need to we can connect and talk mentally."
"Do you always float?" Ron asked smiling
"No only when I'm really nervous and am calling out to her no just talking." Whoosh then Max came flying down and landed perfectly got off and pet the animal.
"All right ladies understand his cannot be a regular thing in my class! Though some excellent flying max! I award 20 points to Slytherin for Max's flying. Now I think we have had enough excitement and I want everyone inside and if anyone even thinks of flying you will be gone before you can say Nimbus!"
*Next is potions class. I have been looking forward to it all day! * Max telecommunicated to D
*Why? I always get nervous if you are looking forward to it. *
*Have you seen the teacher? Do not say anything but the second I saw him I felt like what I felt for James. The same passion and I am going to get him. *
*You have always gotten what man you wanted and were always picky but this is not smart he is a teacher much older and I have been told about him not friendly and not the cuddly type but evil and cold. *
*My kind of man. I'll warm him up. *
Potions
"Welcome class to sixth year of potions. Advance potions will be difficult so do not expect any easy assignment because it is your first class of the year." Snape said coldly then he max in the front of his class. Most students decide not to sit there I guess she wasn't warned of him. Snape sweeping over to his desk and stood strict and tall giving a strong glance at the class. " You will need plenty of talent and vision to accomplish this class. Like what main ingredients are used in a draught of peace?" He looked at Hermione waiting for the usual striking hand up but so none she saw just looking around the classroom relaxed how odd. Then Draco raised his hand. "Yes, Mr. Malfoy."
"Powdered moonstones sir." He said
"Correct 10 points to Slytherin."
"Now instructions are on the board and the supplies in your cabinet so Begin." Snape said coldly as he sat down and saw all the students participating the new girl Danielle was with potter *stupid mistake that girl made* and Max seemed to be sitting there not caring but biting her lip a little and looking at him. "Ms. You doesn't seem to have a last name?"
"Nah It's just Max thanks."
"Well Max, I know you are new but that is no excuse you can read and follow direction's? I am not expecting Great talent and vision just do it." He said coldly
"I have plenty of talent and vision. I just don't give a damn." She said laughing, as the class laughed softly.
"Silence," he said, " You may be new but understand this you will need to learn to behave and speak with respect! And the sooner the better before you get yourself into serious trouble. So how soon do you think you can behave?" He said coldly expecting her to answer "right away sir" as all kids do. The class looked frightened he knew he still had it.
" O how about never? Is never good for you?" She said smiling
"Excuse me!" Snape said shocked
"I haven't behaved my whole life why would I start now?"
"Max you will see me after class!" He said upset as he squinted his eyes
"Looking forward to it," She said just as coldly.
"Nice, I like her even though she is a Slytherin." Ron said
"What is between Gryffindors and Slytherins?" D asked
"O well we have al ways hated each other. Because there hasn't been one bad wizard who didn't come forms Slytherin."
"Maybe all the bad wizards come from Slytherin because you all treat them badly they become bad?" D asked "I think we should all be friends separating only lead to badness."
"I agree. I mean we should try to get along even the hat said so even with I guess Malfoy."
"I am not saying don't fight with someone because they are in another house I am saying don't fight with only because they are in another house all right?"
"I'll try and so will Ron right?"
"Yeah sure I'll try." He said "And you too Hermione?"
"What, o yeah sure."
"You OK Hermione?" Harry asked
"Fine! I just have a lot of work OK!" she said cleaning up after her potion because class was going to be over in a minute.
"I think that Max will give Snape a run for his money." Ron said
"Yeah I can not believe she said those things to him!" Harry said laughing just thinking about it.
"That's Max for you never did behave and all ways spoke her mind." She said.
"D, Guys, I'll meet you at lunch ok just head there without me." She said looking over at Snape "Frizz save me a sit." She said
"What, O sure max, and after we'll have fun." Hermione thought about it cutting class it would be a blast. Max winked at her and the bell rang as they all left max stayed behind. Snape was wondering. what were they talking about "We will have fun."
"So, Snape you wanted me to stay." She said softly starting at him. Her knees became weak though she would show no sign for it.
"Yes, your behavior in my class shall not go on or you shall face the consequences." He said coldly sounding very dangerous. "Consequences? What type of consequences torture or something?" she asked actually serious she realized this was a ancient school and may have it but its been done to her before so not like she couldn't handle it.
"Torture! No, not like you would know what torture is like," Snape said coldly tough he wondered if she did. "Detentions with me! Which are a far worse faith then torture."
"Snape I am not scarred of you." Max said
"You should be."
"I actually do know what torture is like thank you very much and I think I can handle some detentions from some prick who thinks he is this mighty scary force."
"Excuse me! Fine you think you can! Well then a week's detention starting tonight at 6 o'clock sharp and do not be late."
"Fine, I wont be late."
"Fine, you are excused." And with that she headed out the door. Something about her as she walked away she wasn't like most of his students, she behaved like a woman and looked like one too she was beautiful even he noticed that and tall and was as smart as a woman. What am I thinking! She is a 6th year I have to stop that. He said as he went td working on a new potion for Dumbledore.
**Lunch**
Max walked in late and saw there was seat next to Hermione and one next to Draco. "Yo, Draco," she yelled at him "I'm sitting here today aight either come or met me later outside aight?" and saw him nod and smile she could tell people were looking at the girl screaming and she gave a face like what you looking at? And they all looked away. She went and sat next to Hermione "Hey frizz, Hey D, Hey Harry, Ron, Ginny, Sup?"
"Nothing much, though class's here is so much better."
"Yeah they are." Max said, "Snape is interesting" she said smiling.
"Well he is one nasty fellow." Ron said
"Yeah he is," Harry said "But he has been through a lot including torture."
"Well Max has been through torture and you don't see her being a bitch." D said and saw Max's look and said "oops."
"Torture?" Ginny said, "Rally what do you mean?"
"Well you see all my family lives in a country Israel have you hear of it?"
"I have." Harry said and Ron and Ginny nodded.
"Well I went there to visit and I loved it but times there were getting hard and still are. I had this boyfriend James," after she said his name she smiled a sad smile. "I loved him d he was the first person I ever truly loved. He was great we would hold hands and walk together. I got my first kiss from him and a lot of other firsts. Well we were visiting my friend and a cousin of mine in Gilo a town in Jerusalem. While we were there Palestinians attacked." Her voice got more serious "He was shot and I held him in my arms as he fell. Then he died in my arms. I just held him until the ambulance came but it was too late. He was gone because of them. So I decided to fight back and I attacked them with a gang I joined and we won the first few battles. Then one night we were captured and tortured then they let us go, at least some of us. I went home the next day on an early flight. I only told D about it but I would never forget it." They were all quiet.
"What type of torture did they put you through?" Ron asked. Then he saw the door slam Professor Snape just walked in and sat down.
"You want to know." Max said and lifted her shirt her stomach was full of scars small and big and so was her back and whippings. "They did more but those parts of my body I don't show to just anyone." Ron was shocked and the gang was feeling bad for her. "Don't be sorry shit happens and plus I am stronger for it."
"You mean colder." D suddenly said
"What!" Max yelled and some people turned around
"All of this crap of yours! You are making yourself cold. I don't even know who you are anymore! You look for ways to get into trouble cutting class mouthing off what happened to my friend Max!" Professor McGonagall, Snape, and Dumbledore were staring at them to see what was going on. McGonagall and Snape realized it was fight and got up to try to stop it.
"The Max you knew! She grew up unlike you and you're perfect life you a have never had to go through anything! I grew up and realized the world is not some fantasy you live in its Hell!" She yelled and everyone was staring at them.
"Don't you dare tell me I don't know life is HELL! You Bitch! Because of you my life became a hell I'm in some new dimension I don't have my parents!"
"If I am Such a CRAPPY FRIEND WHY DO YOU STICK WITH ME?" She asked yelling
"Ladies what is going on?" McGonagall asked firmly
"But out!" Max yelled and flicked her hand and McGonagall flew back to her seat and so did Snape. McGonagall grabbed her wand but Dumbledore nodded to her no.
"You have no respect for others! And I card about you that are why I am your friend! But you are turning colder every day and I'm loosing you!" she said almost crying " I am sorry he died and I am so sorry you were so badly treated and much more then that but that's over it's OK now it's OK you have to let go!"
" I can't!" Max said
"Then you know what will happen! You will self-destruct! You will loose everyone! You already lost everyone else the day you killed someone and you kept going for revenge but I didn't kill James I didn't hurt you don't push me away."
"I have already lost everyone! I called you when he died and you didn't come to me! You knew what I was going to do and you didn't stop me so I changed but don't act like you are all innocent!" She said and she used her powers to zoom two swords over to her from above the teachers there was a crest with two swords. Then they went at it and fought.
"D! Stop it!" Harry yelled
"D, Max said suddenly and dropped her sword and fell to the ground."
"MAX!" D yelled "Max! Are you OK? Max! HELP!" And Dumbledore snapped his fingers and Max, D, Harry, Snape, McGonagall, and him were in his office.
"Max" Dumbledore said and she started shaking.
"O No dammed!" D said and was holding her "It is her seizures. she needs her medicine" She went through her bottle 5 pills left "These will last for now but she will need more." D said putting them in her mouth "Max it's all right max I'm here." Max opened her eyes.
"Should we take her to the hospital wing?" McGonagall asked
"No we shouldn't move her she'll be all right. giver her 10 15 minutes." D said holding her
"Shit, " max said breathing hard and shaking. She started grinding her teeth and D put her finger in between as she grinded on the instead.
"D! What are you doing?" Harry said
"These are very painful she gets them do not worry I know what I'm doing."
"D," Max said still shaking "I am so sorry I didn't mean to."
"It's OK Max it's all OK no worries." D said looking down at max as she shook.
"May I have one of your pills? So I can give it to Snape to make more." Dumbledore asked
"Sure" D said handing it to him. D was taking off Max's Shirt and once she got it off put it on a chair.
"What are you doing Danielle?" McGonagall Asked firmly
"This is what I normally do she gets very uncomfortable plus she's wearing a shirt underneath."
"If you call that a shit" McGonagall said because it was a belly button shirt so it was high up.
Snape was starting at her his eyes rather fixated on her beautiful then at her scars. "What are those?" Snape asked
"What?" D asked
"Those scars on her stomach?" Snape asked and McGonagall also noticed. And then Max shook harder unconscious and flipped. Snape eyes opened wider he knew the marks on her back those were whipping marks clearly. "Are those Whipping marks on her back?" He asked strongly
"Well." D said unsure of what to answer but the truth was all ways the best way. "Those are whip marks and the front are torture marks."
"Torture?" Snape asked. "Who did this to her?"
"Well she joined a gang to kill the people who killed James someone very close to Max actually the most close anyone ever got to Max especially a man she tends to use them and loose them. She was captured a couple of times and tortured. They only gave her though 10 whippings the rest. Well she didn't have the best parents or boyfriends you can imagine." D said
Snape and McGonagall looked shocked. Her back was so full of them she must have gotten beaten regularly by her parents and boyfriends but how could she let his happen to herself. Max started calming down and sat up.
"D" she said and she just looked into her eyes and the best friends knew everything was OK. Then she saw two teachers and the Headmaster in the same room. "Shit!" She said seeing them.
"Max are you feeling alright do you need to see the nurse?" Professor McGonagall
"No I'm fine rally once they stop I'm a bit weak but 100% OK after 5 minuets" Max said smiling as she got up then she realized she didn't have her over shirt on. "D where is my shirt?" she asked
"Here it is." And she handed it to her but it was drenched wet in sweat "O great! Its no big I can wear this to class's" McGonagall looked horrified.
"We shall get you some robes for tomorrow" McGonagall said
"Thank you" D said
"Yes. Thanks so much." Max said
"Any certain colors?" McGonagall asked being nice
"Green or blue for me." D said
"Black" Max said in one simple word
"All right" McGonagall said
"Well I have 3 more class's and," she looked at Snape "things to do so I got to go thank you for everything." Then D hit her and gave her a look "O and sorry for the fight."
"Yes we are really sorry." D answered as they left.
As they got to class Danielle's eyes opened wide and she smiled. "Wow I have never seen anything quite so amazing!"
"Yeah it is great." Harry said.
"Look at the plants they are moving"
"Yeah they tend to do that there great. you should have been here a couple of years ago mandrakes funniest plants ever! Acne and the crying"
"What? Wow!" she said laughing
"Hey D! Come sit here next to me!" max called
"Lets go sit their Harry!"
"Sure Pudding anything you want."
"Pudding?" D asked laughing never having a nickname like that.
"Because your hair is dark brown rich like my favorite chocolate pudding. Plus you also taste as yummy" Harry said kissing her again.
"Thanks and good answer." D said smiling as they walked and D sat next to Max and Harry next to D.
"Hey D, aww you two match. Meet my friend his name's Draco, Draco Malfoy Meet D."
"Hello D," he said, "A Gryffindor are you? How interesting but I guess any friend of max is a friend of mine." Draco said.
"Thanks, so you are in Slytherin with her?"
"Yes. I am," he said looking over and seeing Potter next to her holding her hand.
"What, why are you staring at Harry like that what's between you guys?" max asked
"We go back. let's say we don't get along that well." Malfoy said
"Hey Ron! Ginny sit here!" Harry yelled at the 4 empty sits next to him. Ron sat next to Harry and Ginny next to Ron. Then Neville came and sat next to Ginny.
"Hello Class and Welcome to Herbology Year 6! Today we shall discuss Krafloo plant which is a main ingredient in what?" Professor Sprout asked. "Yes Ms. Weasley." "It is the main ingredient in Floo powder." Ginny answered
"Correct. AS you see if you.." She went on
"Ron. Do you know where Hermione is?"
"No clue, I thought she was with you?"
"No.I wonder where she is?"
"Max, Have you seen Hermione?"
"She said she was going to upstairs to get something."
"I wonder what is taking her so long.." Harry wondered
*Gryffindor common room*
Hermione was sitting on her bed crying. *I wish I could tell them! About her dying about my parents falling apart. Will I have to go live with Ron? Will I be like Max! What will happen I mean its all my fault! They were saying! *
Flashback
~"You know we have to split for Hermione! How is he going to get any work done if were fighting all the time!" mom yelled "Hermione always having to be Perfect you except too much of that kid just leave her alone!" Dad was yelling~
"It was my fault they got a divorce I wasn't good enough! Never good enough for them" she cried out while holding her scissors " Cant I just make the pain go away." And she cut herself over and over again. Until she was feeling much better, she was normal and O no she had Class! So she ran all the way to Herbology.
"Ms. Granger you are late!" Professor sprout said
"I am so sorry I just was."
"No matters sit down, as I was saying if you mix the Odeon powder in the mix from this plant it makes.."
"Hermione Where were you?" Harry asked
"I forgot something and then just lost track of time."
"Hermione the perfect! Losing track of time I though you knew everything!" Ron was laughing as Harry laughed along. "O shut your bleeding mouth! You guys are just AHH!" She said and walked off and sat in the only other available sit instead of near Harry next to Malfoy.
"Hermione you are so luck girl" Max called
"Why?"
"You got to miss the most boring thing ever! I'm looking forward to Flying next and potions but after lunch History of Magic, runes, and Muggle studies sounds boring! You want to skip with me after lunch?"
"Skip class?" Hermione said in a worried voice. Why should she always be perfect her life wasn't perfect why shouldn't she have some fun! "Sure after lunch." Hermione said smiling.
"Draco you up for it?" She asked
"Cutting class's. Sounds like fun and wrong and braking rules so I'm in!"
"All right so the three of us it is." Max said and noticed Hermione turn a bit red when she realized Draco was coming too.
"You don't mind do you Frizz?" Max asked
"What o no problem M?" Hermione said
"Hermione! What are you thinking of cutting!" Harry said
"Yeah come on don't be daft!" Ginny said
"Why don't you go back to being madly in love with Harry and reading your stupid books and leave me alone to have a real life" Hermione said
"Max!" D said relaxing what was happening
"Don't worry D this isn't for you, you and your boyfriend go to class I don't want to get you in trouble babe."
"Max," D whispered, "What is going on? All this fighting?"
"That is not my deal. From what I saw she came in late ad as supposedly friends they dissed her right to her face. They have their own issues I'm just trying to have a little fun. Don't worry D they'll figure things out. hey class is over yes Flying I have been wanting to get my feet of the ground."
"Yeah it sound great though I am a little scarred." "Don't be Pudding I'll show you how." Harry said
"Really I can't wait then."
**
"Welcome class! To advanced flying today we shall warm up first off and then try some zigzagging through the magic rings! First off warm up!" Madam hooch said, "Max and Danielle please come here."
"Yes," D said, "They call me D just to let you know."
"Do you girls have last name's?"
"Well I don't" Max said
"Neither do I" D said
"All right so D and Max I realize you two are at beginner Level so please get someone to work with and learn."
"I all ready is going to work with Harry" D said
"Fine Choice... He is a excellent flyer. And you Max?"
"I'll just learn on my won thanks"
"It is quite difficult." Madam Hooch Warned her
"I like a challenge plus might I add you are amazing eyes like cats. I love them." Max said walking away and grabbing a broom.
She watched Harry Teach D and she did as D did and said up and once the broom was ups he got on "I hope this is work."
"To the New girls please do not life off the ground too much.Max!" As she was saying this Max zoomed up and flew around. "Max Get Down!"
"I don't think she can hear you miss" Draco said
"Dammed does that girl ever listen?" She yelled
"She's quite good!" Harry said
"Yea but that high is dangerous especially now that Hagrid is teaching hippogriffs to fly." Suddenly a flock of them came towards max she had nowhere to go so she tried to out run them.
"Max! Max Get out of there!" D yelled but she saw Max going in the wrong direction. "Up!" D yelled and got on and went after Max. *Wow this is great so comfortable so right! *
"D! Get down Here! What is it with Americans!" Madam Hooch said as she took out her wand but they we re lost in a flock.
"Madam, Please let me go up there! I know how to fly I could help please!"
"I don't know. though you do have skill. If you're sure all right!" and Harry was up there fast.
"D, Max! Where are you guys?" Harry yelled through the flock.
"Max! Go left the way out is left you are going the wrong way!" D yelled
"All right! D what are you doing here!"
"Had to save you're ass didn't I!"
"D isn't this so just Right! It fits flying?"
"Yeah I know what you mean I can just be laid back" She said and as she relaxed a hippogriff hit her and knocked her off her broom."
"D!" Max yelled ad zoomed down but the birds were all in the way then she heard a voice it was Harry! "Harry! Harry! D she fell! HELP HER NOW!"
*O my god D! * HE thought he had to get her he zoomed downs o fats he couldn't see anything but he didn't care D! He zoomed and saw he grabbed her and brought her down "D! D! Are you OK! Say something"
"I'm all right, thanks to you Harry!"
"No big thing!"
"What were you thinking? Going up there that was stupid and irresponsible 10 points from Gryffindor for your Rash behaviour! And 25 points to Harry for not only saving the girls but showing some excellent flying."
"Where's Max?" D asked looking around
"I don't know she was coming out last I saw." Harry said. Then suddenly a broom came crashing down. "O no!" Harry said
"Max!" D said and then closed her eyes then she was floating just a little bit off the ground.
"D what are you doing?" Harry asked worried
*Max Ca you hear me are you all right?"
*Yes I can Harry knocked me off my broom zooming down so quickly he slammed into me without even noticing*
*Where are you now? *
*On top f one of these things I'll be down as soon as I get how to steer *
"She is fine she on top of one of those tings and will be down soon."
"How did you know that D? "Harry asked
"O me and her have a connection a mess up with one of our potions now if we need to we can connect and talk mentally."
"Do you always float?" Ron asked smiling
"No only when I'm really nervous and am calling out to her no just talking." Whoosh then Max came flying down and landed perfectly got off and pet the animal.
"All right ladies understand his cannot be a regular thing in my class! Though some excellent flying max! I award 20 points to Slytherin for Max's flying. Now I think we have had enough excitement and I want everyone inside and if anyone even thinks of flying you will be gone before you can say Nimbus!"
*Next is potions class. I have been looking forward to it all day! * Max telecommunicated to D
*Why? I always get nervous if you are looking forward to it. *
*Have you seen the teacher? Do not say anything but the second I saw him I felt like what I felt for James. The same passion and I am going to get him. *
*You have always gotten what man you wanted and were always picky but this is not smart he is a teacher much older and I have been told about him not friendly and not the cuddly type but evil and cold. *
*My kind of man. I'll warm him up. *
Potions
"Welcome class to sixth year of potions. Advance potions will be difficult so do not expect any easy assignment because it is your first class of the year." Snape said coldly then he max in the front of his class. Most students decide not to sit there I guess she wasn't warned of him. Snape sweeping over to his desk and stood strict and tall giving a strong glance at the class. " You will need plenty of talent and vision to accomplish this class. Like what main ingredients are used in a draught of peace?" He looked at Hermione waiting for the usual striking hand up but so none she saw just looking around the classroom relaxed how odd. Then Draco raised his hand. "Yes, Mr. Malfoy."
"Powdered moonstones sir." He said
"Correct 10 points to Slytherin."
"Now instructions are on the board and the supplies in your cabinet so Begin." Snape said coldly as he sat down and saw all the students participating the new girl Danielle was with potter *stupid mistake that girl made* and Max seemed to be sitting there not caring but biting her lip a little and looking at him. "Ms. You doesn't seem to have a last name?"
"Nah It's just Max thanks."
"Well Max, I know you are new but that is no excuse you can read and follow direction's? I am not expecting Great talent and vision just do it." He said coldly
"I have plenty of talent and vision. I just don't give a damn." She said laughing, as the class laughed softly.
"Silence," he said, " You may be new but understand this you will need to learn to behave and speak with respect! And the sooner the better before you get yourself into serious trouble. So how soon do you think you can behave?" He said coldly expecting her to answer "right away sir" as all kids do. The class looked frightened he knew he still had it.
" O how about never? Is never good for you?" She said smiling
"Excuse me!" Snape said shocked
"I haven't behaved my whole life why would I start now?"
"Max you will see me after class!" He said upset as he squinted his eyes
"Looking forward to it," She said just as coldly.
"Nice, I like her even though she is a Slytherin." Ron said
"What is between Gryffindors and Slytherins?" D asked
"O well we have al ways hated each other. Because there hasn't been one bad wizard who didn't come forms Slytherin."
"Maybe all the bad wizards come from Slytherin because you all treat them badly they become bad?" D asked "I think we should all be friends separating only lead to badness."
"I agree. I mean we should try to get along even the hat said so even with I guess Malfoy."
"I am not saying don't fight with someone because they are in another house I am saying don't fight with only because they are in another house all right?"
"I'll try and so will Ron right?"
"Yeah sure I'll try." He said "And you too Hermione?"
"What, o yeah sure."
"You OK Hermione?" Harry asked
"Fine! I just have a lot of work OK!" she said cleaning up after her potion because class was going to be over in a minute.
"I think that Max will give Snape a run for his money." Ron said
"Yeah I can not believe she said those things to him!" Harry said laughing just thinking about it.
"That's Max for you never did behave and all ways spoke her mind." She said.
"D, Guys, I'll meet you at lunch ok just head there without me." She said looking over at Snape "Frizz save me a sit." She said
"What, O sure max, and after we'll have fun." Hermione thought about it cutting class it would be a blast. Max winked at her and the bell rang as they all left max stayed behind. Snape was wondering. what were they talking about "We will have fun."
"So, Snape you wanted me to stay." She said softly starting at him. Her knees became weak though she would show no sign for it.
"Yes, your behavior in my class shall not go on or you shall face the consequences." He said coldly sounding very dangerous. "Consequences? What type of consequences torture or something?" she asked actually serious she realized this was a ancient school and may have it but its been done to her before so not like she couldn't handle it.
"Torture! No, not like you would know what torture is like," Snape said coldly tough he wondered if she did. "Detentions with me! Which are a far worse faith then torture."
"Snape I am not scarred of you." Max said
"You should be."
"I actually do know what torture is like thank you very much and I think I can handle some detentions from some prick who thinks he is this mighty scary force."
"Excuse me! Fine you think you can! Well then a week's detention starting tonight at 6 o'clock sharp and do not be late."
"Fine, I wont be late."
"Fine, you are excused." And with that she headed out the door. Something about her as she walked away she wasn't like most of his students, she behaved like a woman and looked like one too she was beautiful even he noticed that and tall and was as smart as a woman. What am I thinking! She is a 6th year I have to stop that. He said as he went td working on a new potion for Dumbledore.
**Lunch**
Max walked in late and saw there was seat next to Hermione and one next to Draco. "Yo, Draco," she yelled at him "I'm sitting here today aight either come or met me later outside aight?" and saw him nod and smile she could tell people were looking at the girl screaming and she gave a face like what you looking at? And they all looked away. She went and sat next to Hermione "Hey frizz, Hey D, Hey Harry, Ron, Ginny, Sup?"
"Nothing much, though class's here is so much better."
"Yeah they are." Max said, "Snape is interesting" she said smiling.
"Well he is one nasty fellow." Ron said
"Yeah he is," Harry said "But he has been through a lot including torture."
"Well Max has been through torture and you don't see her being a bitch." D said and saw Max's look and said "oops."
"Torture?" Ginny said, "Rally what do you mean?"
"Well you see all my family lives in a country Israel have you hear of it?"
"I have." Harry said and Ron and Ginny nodded.
"Well I went there to visit and I loved it but times there were getting hard and still are. I had this boyfriend James," after she said his name she smiled a sad smile. "I loved him d he was the first person I ever truly loved. He was great we would hold hands and walk together. I got my first kiss from him and a lot of other firsts. Well we were visiting my friend and a cousin of mine in Gilo a town in Jerusalem. While we were there Palestinians attacked." Her voice got more serious "He was shot and I held him in my arms as he fell. Then he died in my arms. I just held him until the ambulance came but it was too late. He was gone because of them. So I decided to fight back and I attacked them with a gang I joined and we won the first few battles. Then one night we were captured and tortured then they let us go, at least some of us. I went home the next day on an early flight. I only told D about it but I would never forget it." They were all quiet.
"What type of torture did they put you through?" Ron asked. Then he saw the door slam Professor Snape just walked in and sat down.
"You want to know." Max said and lifted her shirt her stomach was full of scars small and big and so was her back and whippings. "They did more but those parts of my body I don't show to just anyone." Ron was shocked and the gang was feeling bad for her. "Don't be sorry shit happens and plus I am stronger for it."
"You mean colder." D suddenly said
"What!" Max yelled and some people turned around
"All of this crap of yours! You are making yourself cold. I don't even know who you are anymore! You look for ways to get into trouble cutting class mouthing off what happened to my friend Max!" Professor McGonagall, Snape, and Dumbledore were staring at them to see what was going on. McGonagall and Snape realized it was fight and got up to try to stop it.
"The Max you knew! She grew up unlike you and you're perfect life you a have never had to go through anything! I grew up and realized the world is not some fantasy you live in its Hell!" She yelled and everyone was staring at them.
"Don't you dare tell me I don't know life is HELL! You Bitch! Because of you my life became a hell I'm in some new dimension I don't have my parents!"
"If I am Such a CRAPPY FRIEND WHY DO YOU STICK WITH ME?" She asked yelling
"Ladies what is going on?" McGonagall asked firmly
"But out!" Max yelled and flicked her hand and McGonagall flew back to her seat and so did Snape. McGonagall grabbed her wand but Dumbledore nodded to her no.
"You have no respect for others! And I card about you that are why I am your friend! But you are turning colder every day and I'm loosing you!" she said almost crying " I am sorry he died and I am so sorry you were so badly treated and much more then that but that's over it's OK now it's OK you have to let go!"
" I can't!" Max said
"Then you know what will happen! You will self-destruct! You will loose everyone! You already lost everyone else the day you killed someone and you kept going for revenge but I didn't kill James I didn't hurt you don't push me away."
"I have already lost everyone! I called you when he died and you didn't come to me! You knew what I was going to do and you didn't stop me so I changed but don't act like you are all innocent!" She said and she used her powers to zoom two swords over to her from above the teachers there was a crest with two swords. Then they went at it and fought.
"D! Stop it!" Harry yelled
"D, Max said suddenly and dropped her sword and fell to the ground."
"MAX!" D yelled "Max! Are you OK? Max! HELP!" And Dumbledore snapped his fingers and Max, D, Harry, Snape, McGonagall, and him were in his office.
"Max" Dumbledore said and she started shaking.
"O No dammed!" D said and was holding her "It is her seizures. she needs her medicine" She went through her bottle 5 pills left "These will last for now but she will need more." D said putting them in her mouth "Max it's all right max I'm here." Max opened her eyes.
"Should we take her to the hospital wing?" McGonagall asked
"No we shouldn't move her she'll be all right. giver her 10 15 minutes." D said holding her
"Shit, " max said breathing hard and shaking. She started grinding her teeth and D put her finger in between as she grinded on the instead.
"D! What are you doing?" Harry said
"These are very painful she gets them do not worry I know what I'm doing."
"D," Max said still shaking "I am so sorry I didn't mean to."
"It's OK Max it's all OK no worries." D said looking down at max as she shook.
"May I have one of your pills? So I can give it to Snape to make more." Dumbledore asked
"Sure" D said handing it to him. D was taking off Max's Shirt and once she got it off put it on a chair.
"What are you doing Danielle?" McGonagall Asked firmly
"This is what I normally do she gets very uncomfortable plus she's wearing a shirt underneath."
"If you call that a shit" McGonagall said because it was a belly button shirt so it was high up.
Snape was starting at her his eyes rather fixated on her beautiful then at her scars. "What are those?" Snape asked
"What?" D asked
"Those scars on her stomach?" Snape asked and McGonagall also noticed. And then Max shook harder unconscious and flipped. Snape eyes opened wider he knew the marks on her back those were whipping marks clearly. "Are those Whipping marks on her back?" He asked strongly
"Well." D said unsure of what to answer but the truth was all ways the best way. "Those are whip marks and the front are torture marks."
"Torture?" Snape asked. "Who did this to her?"
"Well she joined a gang to kill the people who killed James someone very close to Max actually the most close anyone ever got to Max especially a man she tends to use them and loose them. She was captured a couple of times and tortured. They only gave her though 10 whippings the rest. Well she didn't have the best parents or boyfriends you can imagine." D said
Snape and McGonagall looked shocked. Her back was so full of them she must have gotten beaten regularly by her parents and boyfriends but how could she let his happen to herself. Max started calming down and sat up.
"D" she said and she just looked into her eyes and the best friends knew everything was OK. Then she saw two teachers and the Headmaster in the same room. "Shit!" She said seeing them.
"Max are you feeling alright do you need to see the nurse?" Professor McGonagall
"No I'm fine rally once they stop I'm a bit weak but 100% OK after 5 minuets" Max said smiling as she got up then she realized she didn't have her over shirt on. "D where is my shirt?" she asked
"Here it is." And she handed it to her but it was drenched wet in sweat "O great! Its no big I can wear this to class's" McGonagall looked horrified.
"We shall get you some robes for tomorrow" McGonagall said
"Thank you" D said
"Yes. Thanks so much." Max said
"Any certain colors?" McGonagall asked being nice
"Green or blue for me." D said
"Black" Max said in one simple word
"All right" McGonagall said
"Well I have 3 more class's and," she looked at Snape "things to do so I got to go thank you for everything." Then D hit her and gave her a look "O and sorry for the fight."
"Yes we are really sorry." D answered as they left.