Disclaimer: don't own anything except Mystery girl in the first chapter, (I'll write what I own with each chapter when I write the chapter)

Hi everyone yes I am finally writing my own fic, after reading all those ones in my fave's, I have written before but on different screen names.

I'm not the best writer out there so be nice, but comment all you like if you have a complaint about the fic please review and tell me how to correct it, like I said I am not the best or professional fic writer out there and I will need your help to get better so don't just complain to tell me and also tell me how to correct the problem, I would more then happy to correct any mistakes, and write them as the readers want then to be written.

Warning this is going to be a tom/ Mystery girl fic (Mystery girl is Mary-sue, so please I already know she is not a real character, but that is the point of this being FANFICTION and not JK Rowling copy, this is about writers using their imagination, I think I should put in why I am actually writing this all long script down THIS IS ALL DEDICATED TO CLOAKED FOX because it seems to think fanfiction should not include Mary-sue)

And I am very sorry this is short, but I sort of got attacked with a bottle of bleach by my older brother, and my whole body is itching, and I also got into my ear and eye.

On with the fic

Chapter 1 – The New Arrival

She got of the red Hogwarts Express, by her appearance she looked like a normal muggle girl dressed in a leather mini-skirt and thigh-high leather boots with heels as thin as the thinnest pencil, a white tank top and a short leather jacket.

Her hair was a jet black colour and of a wild nature, it had been left open and hid her face from view as the strong autumn/winter wind blew it into her face.

She walked through the crowds of Hogwarts students, her heels clicking a rhythm as she walked.

Finding an empty carriage she stepped inside, she sat down with her head low. The door of the carriage opened and in stepped a boy with blonde hair, grey eyes and a pinched in face, behind him were two boys who were much better described as gorilla's and a tall girl who looked as though she might have some trollish blood in her.

'Who are you?' drawled the blonde in a dull toneless voice.

She looked up at him through the protective curtain her hair had created around her face, looked at the boy she knew at once who he was what with his trademark blonde hair and grey eyes, he was a Malfoy.

'Why bother Draco, she thinks she's above us, the filthy little mudblood,' the trollish girl spat the last word out as though it was too filthy for to even speak.

She turned her eyes onto the only other female in the carriage; she was very surprised she could talk while she had expected a trollish grunt.

'No I am not a Muggle-born, I have reasons to dress like a muggle, non of which are of any of your concern, and the name is Her,' she stated in a soft but cool voice, after a moment of silence she added, 'and who must you three be? I know he is Draco Malfoy, the trademark hair and eyes mark him as a Malfoy.' Her voice was soft but firm it held no emotion, it gave nothing away.

The biggest (and the thickest) of the two gorilla's scratched his head, looking even more like a gorilla.

'Vincent Crabbe,' he said after a while.

'Gregory Goyle,' the other one said, it again was quite surprising for her to learn they could speak English and that they had different sir names for all she knew they were twin gorilla's.

'Millicent Bulstrode,' the trollish girl said eyeing her suspiciously.

Leaning forward so that her whole figure was enveloped in total darkness, 'a pleasure to meet you,' she stated, then got up, 'good day to you,' with that she stepped of the carriage which had stopped moments ago, the four Slytherins stared after her then traded looks.

Who was this girl and what business did she have at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry?

I'm sorry the first chapter is short, I usually get bored writing long chapters, because I forget what I wanted to write, I usually hand write it first so it is hard for me because my hands start to hurt. And I can't write all that much because, I am still studying and also work full time as a teacher (training) in a private nursery.

Chapter two should be out soon.

RLP

Answers to review from Prologue:

Padfoot's Fire: I must say there is such thing as 'a curtain of protective hair', I my self have it, that is why I wrote it, the girl in that fic is me, except of course I don't have a few of the thing I have added on my mystery girl.

Thank you for being my first reviewer, I luv u X )