In this chapter there's a character I forgot to put in the Clan profiles, he lives in ShadowClan and his name is Brambleclaw
Brokenstorm and Adderfang sat in the darkness in the cavern of Moonstone while Sunstar shared tongues with StarClan. The dark brown warrior sighed; he wasn't allowed to speak until Sunstar had woken. The deputy's tail tip twitched in inpatients. Thunder cracked out side the cavern making the two toms jump.
Outside, Thistleclaw and Crookedfang guarded the entrance while Tornscar, Brackentail, and Tigerclaw hunted. Lightning flashed making all five of the siblings looked up at the gray sky, something dark brown flashed and bowled Tigerclaw over he whipped around snarling with the light of battle in his eyes, his gaze softened when he laid eyes upon a cat he hadn't seen since he was a kit. Ashclaw didn't have five kits, she had six. The kit born between Tigerclaw and Thistleclaw was a dark brown tabby tom with bright green eyes, he had the muscular body of a WindClan warrior and the sleek pelt of a RiverClan warrior, the silent stalking skills of a ThunderClan warrior and the fierce loyalty of a ShadowClan warrior, the cat that all of these traits describes name is Brambleclaw.
"Brambleclaw!" He yowled at the sight of his brother, when he was a kit he'd gone to live with Avalanche in ShadowClan but when Greencough took her life, Crimsonstar became his foster father, alone with his stepsister, Cloudfur.
"Don't forget me!" The white she cat leapt out of the under growth, the gray ion her pelt had faded and her bright green eyes stood out like emeralds in the snow. She looked more like Snowfur than Avalanche.
"What are you two doing here? How'd you get past WindClan?"
"We followed you, it's so easy to get past those rabbit chasers it's sad." Brambleclaw meowed sitting down and licking a forepaw.
"Well, look what the dog dragged in." Tornscar mewed looking at her brother; his sleek thick gray pelt was barley visible in the dark light, "How are you Cloudfur?"
"Fine,"
"And Crimsonstar?"
"…He's been going off on his own lately, he's still upset about mother's death."
The ground started to shake. Adderfang looked nervously at Brokenstorm although he couldn't see him in the dim light. He gathered his courage and felt his way over to Sunstar, his fading vision acted up when a storm was coming, but he never admitted to any one that he was going blind, not even Lionpelt, Russetpelt and Rowanfur suspected some vision loss in their father but they would never guess that when it rained, he was totally blind.
"Sunstar…" He mewed quietly when he finally found the dark tabby leader, "Sunstar we need to…" A loud crack cut him off. Brokenstorm yowled as he witnessed the Moonstone cracking in half.
"Great StarClan!"
"What's happening?"
"Can't you see it?"
"No Brokenstorm I can't, I'm…I'm blind." He mewed speaking so he could hardly hear him when he said, "I'm blind"
"What?"
"I'm blind." He hissed through gritted teeth,
"I can't hear you Adderfang, speak up."
"I'm blind!" He practically shrieked, Sunstar lurched up,
"We have to leave…"
"But-"
"Now!" Sunstar spat at the deputy,
Adderfang didn't have to see to get out of the tunnel, he could scent his way back and he could smell Thistleclaw's fear scent as if he were right next to her. Sunstar who was in the lead could see Thistleclaw and Tornscar yowling for them to hurry. When a crack in the middle of the ceiling came into view and the entrance to Moonstone started to fall the three toms broke out into a heart stopping desperate sprint. Brokenstorm made it out just barely keeping his tail from getting crushed. The entrance to Moonstone was now covered in rocks, and the Moonstone it's self was in two. There was no way to speak to StarClan now.
Tigerclaw, Brambleclaw, Cloudfur, Brackentail, and Crookedfang came running up only to yowl in dismay.
"Sunstar…what…" Tigerclaw trailed off, his father stood with his back to them staring at the caved in entrance of Moonstone. His ears were drooping and his tail hung low. Then with out warning he whipped around and yowled,
"Brambleclaw, Cloudfur what are you doing here?"
"We followed you Sunstar,"
"Does Crimsonstar know you're here?"
"…No," The dark tabby replied looking down at his paws and shuffling them, "But I don't need to ask permission to come see my family!"
"He's still your Clan leader!"
"He's not my father!"
"You still must obey him!"
Thistleclaw and Tigerclaw sat with the three siblings they grew up with; a raindrop hit Tigerclaw on his muzzle soaking it through to the skin immediately. The next drop his Thistleclaw and ran down her spin making her yowl. Sunstar flashed an angry glance at her until it started to rain,
"C'mon…" He spat, and ran down the rocky ravine towards the Thunderpath.
"Sunstar-"
"We shall travel in silence Brokenstorm!" The deputy stopped taken back at the hostility in his leader's tone then let his fur bristle. He padded towards the back next to Adderfang.
"Brokenstorm?"
"Why didn't you tell anybody you're blind?"
"Because then I would have to retire to be an elder!" He hissed,
"How do you hunt for yourself?"
"I find a way…now let's drop the subject."
"Sunstar has no right to talk to me like that." Brokenstorm hissed,
"When he gets angry he gets angry, I should know, I have known him since he was a kit."
"Really? Where you a kit?"
"I was made an apprentice the day he was born, and I was made a warrior the day he was an apprentice, and when he was made a warrior, I'd been one for a couple of moons already,"
"Hmm, I wasn't born yet when he was made an apprentice, I'm Twilightpelt's brother, but you probably knew that, you being her mentor."
"I washer mentor, now I'm just her friend."
"She's quite fond of you,"
"…Really? I always thought she didn't like me."
"No, she told me that she was tempted to name Shadepaw, Adderpaw."
"You're joking."
"No I'm not, Stormpaw looks up to you and wishes you were his mentor, I promised him that you would take him out training some day."
"…I will." The group came to the Thunderpath and stopped, but Adderfang kept walking with out even knowing where he was. It was raining hard and all of the cats were soaked through, and it was hard to see Adderfang walk right onto the road.
The dark brown tom padded across the Thunderpath sightlessly, he couldn't see the monster coming towards him.
"Adderfang!" Sunstar yowled, Brokenstorm watched to see what the tom would do; he stopped in the middle of the Thunderpath and curled up into a ball.
"Adderfang get back here!" The leader yowled again,
The monster passed to reveal that Adderfang had not been hurt; it had gone right over him. He hurried to the other side and sat waiting for the other cats, Brokenstorm came last, keeping his distance from Sunstar, when he met with the dark brown tom he mewed,
"What were you thinking?"
"I'm not so helpless am I?