"Hey all you wonderful people first I'd like to thank my very first reviewer bbllgirl4ever thank you for the wonderful review.

And for all you slow people out there and the people who run the site I do not own that which is from Tamora pierce books. Now on with the story.


The four stopped arguing and turned around. They looked up and saw the young man mounted on a gelding with his hand on his sword hilt. They were so shocked and scared that they couldn't talk finally Susan regained the ability to talk.

"Hello my name is Susan and these people are my friends Kathleen, Tomy, and Devin. Who are you?"

"My name is Alan... Sir Alan of Pirate's Swope."

Wow these people look weird the blond one is wearing a strange pair of breeches, the girl with hair like Aly, Kathleen, has a short skirt on, The Boys have weird shirts on.

That guy looks like something out of my history book thought Tomy.

"So I guess what we all would like to know is where are we?" asked Kathleen.

"Pirate's Swope of course"

"Where in the world is Pirate's Swope?" Asked Tomy and Devin together.

This time Susan answered "Tortal south east of the capital Corus."

"How do you know that" asked the three guys.

"Wait it's your books isn't it you're such a bookworm" said Tomy.

Well Susan and Tomy kept arguing until Alan got tired of listening to them and said loudly.

"Well since you have no were to go you can stay with me at my parents... home"

"Well that's awfully nice but..." started Devin, but Kathleen and Susan interrupted

"We'd be happy to and thank you very much"

"but we..." started Tomy but shut-up when Susan shot him on of those "shut-up or die glares"

Alan smiled and pulled out a mirror to tell his parents he would be bringing guests with him. His parents were fine with it and he led the four strangers down the road to Pirate's Swope. Susan was glad that her friends were there because if they weren't she might have gotten lost you see she was daydreaming about a boy (a/n three guesses who) but she was pulled out when they stopped and got their first view of Pirate's Swope...


Dun dun dun hehe that's the end of the chapter I know you probably want to kill me right now but then you wouldn't find out what happened would you? I'll update after one or two reviews.

Susan