Tortal and the characters from it do not belong to me O.K?
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maliaphire: Thanks for reviewing you are really nice. hummmmm I hadn't thought of that but now that you ask yeah I think she is or mabe one of the other characters. Maybe even in this chapter.
The morning of the second day of Midwinter (a/n does anyone know how long it is?) Susan was up earlier than others and since she knew her friends very well she had decided to read rather than face the wrath of her friends at about 6 in the morning. As she was reading she thought about the night before and how much fun she had.
I never knew dancing could be so much fun! Why haven't I danced more often?
She was rereading Alanna the First Adventure for the fourth time soon she got bored of it and decided to go out and explore a bit. First she walked up to Tomy's door, since she knew that he got up early sometimes, and knocked. When there was no answer she decided to go outside because it was a nice morning and if he had gotten up and gone anywhere it would probably be outside.
When she got outside she saw someone but is was not Tomy.
"Hello Alan"
"Hello, your awake earlier than I thought you would be."
"Really why didn't you think I would be up early" Though this is earlier than I usually get up so I guess he's right.
"You seem like my mother and she is not a morning person"
"Well at home I'm not but here... I can't sleep as late."
"Hey I'm going to go and practice my tilting. Do you want to watch?"
"Sure, I'd love to."
She followed Alan to the stables to get his horse and then to the tilting ground. She sat on the fence as he rode his horse to the far end of the field. He missed on his first pass but after that it was perfect. Susan was so enthralled by tilting, which she had never seen before, that she didn't even notice the man who had walked up and stood behind her.
"Hello"
"Wha" thud she fell off the fence. Laughing, Raoul of Golden Lake and Mallorie's Peak helped the teenager up on to her feet.
"Are you alright?"
"You almost scared me to death!"
"Sorry"
Alan rode over to see if she was alright. By the time he got there Lord Raoul had already helped her up.
"Are you ok?"
Why does everyone ask me that if I'm not dead then I'm ok! "Yeah I'm alright"
Alan who hadn'e noticed Raoul looked around.
"Hello Raoul. Have you met Susan?"
"We haven't been introduced but I have met her."
The bell rang for the pages to get to their first classes.
"I have to go the my sister is comming today and I have to get ready." said Alan as he ran back to the castle.
After a few minutes of silence Susan said
"You do realize we still haven't been introduced to each other don't you?"
"No we haven't... Hello my name is Sir Raoul of Goldenlake and Malorie's Peak."
"Hello, Sir Raoul, my name is Susan."
"Well Susan would you like to see the practice courts? I wanted to watch the pages and squires practice."
"Yes I'd love to."
She and Raoul walked down to the practice courts talking to Raoul on the way.
Well what did you all think? I hope you liked it and see, maliaphire, they did talk. please review and I hope to have a new Chap. done soon since school ends next Thursday woohoo!