Hey sorry it took so long but I couldn't figure out how to write this next chapter. Anyway I hope you like it. As always that which belongs to Tamora Pierce doesn't belong to me.


Susan was walking up to her room with her cousins and friends she was thinking about what had happend that day.

I can't believe I was wrong. Those three have a lot of explaining to do.

They all went into Susan's room and sat down. (Kat, Susan ,and Alan on the bed; Tomy and Susan's oldest cousinTyler on the desk; and Susan's other cousins Kristy and Kevin on the floor)

"Alright you three, I want to know what you're doing here, not that I'm not thrilled to see you."

"Well we were playing tag in your yard and Kevin ran through this wierd looking mist and disapeared so Kristy ran after him and then I ran after her." Said the oldest cousin Tyler.

"And I ran after them to make sure they would be ok." concluded Tomy.

"Thanks for caring about my cousins Tomy but what I don't get is why you all ran after Kevin. Common Sense would have told you that you should get an adult to go after him so that your parents wouldn't think that you were kidnapped!"

"Ah don't be so hard on them, Sue. They were just taking care of their brother." said Kat.

"Yeah I guess your right, but what are we going to do we have to get them home."

"You know we ARE still here!" Said Kristy sounding annoyed.

"Yeah right, sorry. Hey Alan do you think Numiar will be able to find a way for us to get home?"

"Probably, but it might take a while." Does she really want to leave?

"Good." I wish that I didn't have to leave but I miss my family and other friends.


Sorry, reading this chapter was probably a royal waste of your time, but I couldn't think of anything else to write. I promise the next onewill be better. Anyway I would like to thank my reviewers for the last chapter

maliaphire - thanks for the review I think that you have reviewed all my chapters and I enjoy reading the reviews you send.

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People if you are still reading my story after this chapter God Bless You. You are wonderfull! Please review and remember constructive critisism is always welcome.