Hi Well I guess my last chapter wasn't as bad as I thought it was I would like to thank my reviewers:

maliaphire - Thank you for reviewing I can't tell you that if I did there wouldn't be a reason for you to read would there?

seabiscuit0810 - Why do you think that I have any idea why I had my cousins go there? I guess that it is just something that just popped into my mind that I decided to use.

Tidsmagi - Thanks I'm glad you didn't think that it was a waste of time, and don't cry I'll continue the story I want to know how this story will end as much as you do. (grin).

Any way on to the story I own very little of.

Days after her cousins arrived Susan and Tyler were playing Chess when Alan came to talk to Susan.

"Checkmate." said Tyler as he finished his move.

"You always win." Susan said Why on earth did I agree to play him... at least no one saw him beating

"Hey you're pretty good lad." said Alan "maybe you should play against Sir Myles or Sir Raoul they are both good ... at least better than your cousin."

I was wrong again!

"Everyone is better than Susan."

I am going to hurt him so badly...

"Hello...Susan"

"What! oh sorry what did you say?" why do I always zone out when he wants to talk to me?

"I said that I need to talk to you."

"O.k. where?"

"Let's go to your room."

"Alright... see you later Ty."

They walked down to Susan's room and sat down.

"So what's up?"

"Well you know about the war we had with Scantra a few years ago."

"Yeah what about it?"

"Well now Sarain has decided to attack us and I have to go and protect our borders."

"Why the borders Sarain doesn't border Tortal?"

"I know but Jon doesn't want to make us go to Sarain were our enemy will have the advantage."

"Whose side is Scantra on?"

"Their neutral. Hopefully it will be easy to beat Sarain and the fighting will be over soon or not happen at all but ..."

"You still have to go. Are all the knights going?"

"No the Myles, the two older princes (Roald and Liam), the king and, Raoul are all staying. Anyway would you promise me one thing"

"Sure, what?"

"Please don't leave with out saying good-bye to me first."

"Of course I could never leave with out saying good bye. Just be careful I want to be able to say goodbye because I want to not because I have to."

"Alright. Well I should finish getting ready to go. We leave in the morning."

"Yeah... see you later."

Well that's the newest chapter I hope you like it. At least it added something for me to write about. Any way please...Please...PLEASE review. Oh yeah just to let you know the characters that are mine are based on people I really know.

Kathleen is based on my best friend who is 18 years old and has red hair and green eyes.

Tomy is based on another friend of mine he is 14 and is African-American.

Devin is based on a boy from my church Youth Group. He is also 18 he has black hair and dark eyes.

Susan is based on me. I'm 15 and have blonde hair and blue eyes.

Tyler, Kristy and Kevin are based on my cousins. Tyler (Ty) is eleven and has blonde hair and brown eyes; just like Kristy who is seven. Kevin is 6 and has brown hair and eyes.

And to clear something else up I am making this up as I go along so don't ask what's going to happen next I have no idea. and I'm using my friend's and relatives real names.