From last chapter:
MarshallsGRL07: WAIT! u agree with him!
GRYFSEEKER: Auto response: I am away from my computer right now.
And now on to my latest chapter!
Monday (Still same day)
MarshallsGRL07: don't pull this whole "I'm away" stuff on me. i know you better than anyone. stop acting like a coward and get back here. you got yourself into this and i expect you to get yourself out!
GRYFSEEKSER has returned.
GRYFSEEKER: All right I'm back. Happy?
MarshallsGRL07: Very, thank you.
MarshallsGRL07: Now what were you saying about actually agreeing with him?
GRYFSEEKER: Well I know that Blaise is your cousin and that Draco is his best friend, but they are still Slytherins. How do you know they won't turn you into Voldemort? I mean, they parents are Death Eaters.
MarshallsGRL07: yes Blaise and Draco are Slytherins but basing that as the center of your argument is a stretch! it's such prejudice! and you want to know how i know that they won't turn me into Voldemort? it's because i know my cousin and i know he won't do anything to hurt me.
MarshallsGRL07: And to set the record straight, over the summer Draco left his family and Voldemort and the Zabinis were kind enough to take him in since he and Blaise are best friends. and don't even try to start in on how the Zabinis are Death Eaters too! Son mi familia y rechazo oír cualquier cosa mal dicho contra ellos!
MarshallsGRL07: do you get it now?
GRYFSEEKER: Wait. What did you say in Spanish?
MarshallsGRL07: if i have to tell you it ruins the message now doesn't it?
GRYFSEEKER: gulps...Message?
MarshallsGRL07: yup! a message and i'm sure you'll find out what it means very soon. i'm gonna go.
GRYFSEEKER: Wait! Hermione come back!
MarshallsGRL07: Auto Response: Son mi familia y rechazo oír cualquier cosa mal dicho contra ellos.
GRYFSEEKER: Oh come on Hermione! Come back!
GRYFSEEKER: Nothing? Fine. Ciao, or however you say goodbye in Spanish.
GRYFSEEKER has signed off.
Hermione stared at the screen, reading the messages from Harry over and over again. A new IM window popped up from GottaLoveAnItelxican
GottaLoveAnItelxican: hey there o cousin of mine. How's it going?
MarsharllsGRL07: two words...don't ask
GottaLoveAnItelxican: that bad? what happened?
MarshallsGRL07: nothing life threatening or anything so don't worry.
GottaLoveAnItelxican: come on now, i know that when you start w/all that "it's no big deal...don't worry" shit. it's GOT to be something...whats wrong?
MarshallsGRL07: ok but u promise not to freak out or tell Draco so that he can freak out?
GottaLoveAnItelxican: No, now tell me
MarshallsGRL07: fine, you dont have to be all bossy
GottaLoveAnItelxican: when i'm talking to you i do. now spill.
MarshallsGRL07: it's really nothing, i was just talking to Harry right before you IMd me, no big deal.
GottaLoveAnItelxican: ok...talked to potter, "no big deal"...o god what did he do now?
MarshallsGRL07: he agrees with him
GottaLoveAnItelxican: i'm sorry but is that supposed to mean something to me?
MarshallsGRL07: GRYFSEEKER: Well I know that Blaise is your cousin and that Draco is his best friend, but they are still Slytherins. How do you know they won't turn you into Voldemort? I mean, they parents are Death Eaters.
GottaLoveAnItelxican: that bastard. he actually told you that!...you just wait 'til i get my hands on him!
MarshallsGRL07: Blaise! you promised!
GottaLoveAnItelxican: that was before i knew what that 'lil...thing had done to me poor Mia. ratto bastardo. qualcosa come questo mio piccola cugina!
MarshallsGRL07: Blaise! language! if you're going to swear. at least do it in a language i understand!
GottaLoveAnItelxican: Auto Response: i'm off Gryffindor hunting
MarshallsGRL07: usted espera justa. voy a escribir al papá y su mama usted e i ambos saben que él no estará contento!
MarshallsGRL07: ¡y si usted piensa no estarán contentos, esperan hasta que consigo un asimiento de usted!
MarshallsGRL07 has signed off.
GottaLoveAnItelxican has returned.
GottaLoveAnItelxican: mio dio, che cosa io otten me?
GottaLoveAnItelxican has signed off.
What do you think? This was a little forced in the beginning but towards the middle and w/ Blaise and Mia's conversation I started to get really into it. If Harry and hermione's conversation seems either a little fake or clichéd sorry and I'm trying my best but I honestly can't control what comes out or how it does.
Translations before any of you ask what was said in the various languages (remember these are all ROUGH translations, w/ romance languages the order is switched around):
1) Son mi familia y rechazo oír cualquier cosa mal dicho contra ellos! (In Spanish)- They are my family and I refuse to hear anything bad said against them!
2) ratto bastardo. qualcosa come questo mio piccola cugina (in Italian)- Rat bastard. To do something like this to my little cousin!
3) usted espera justa. voy a escribir al papá y su mama usted e i ambos saben que él no estará contento! (in Spanish)- You just wait. I'm going to write to dad and your mother. You and I both know that they will not be pleased!
4) ¡y si usted piensa no estarán contentos, esperan hasta que consigo un asimiento de usted! (in Spanish)- And if you think they will not be pleased, wait until I get a hold of you!
5) mio dio, che cosa io otten me? (in Italian)- My god, what have i gotten myself into?
And now responses to my wonderful reviewer (and the other one)
bevdeb- rite "firstly"- this is in the HP section for a reason! u r a dummass, and i have clearly mentioned numerous times THIS IS AN AU FIC which means...it is original!
"secondly"- nowhere does it say that hermione can't b mexican and besides this is my fic. she's mexican so what? get the FUCK over it!
"thirdly"- having the bks end up being HHr is YOUR OPINION! i personally think draco is really hott and i like his character better than harry's and I think that hermione and draco are better fitted...plus this IS MY FANFIC!
and "finally" i had a lot of shit that had to be explained otherwise i would have had many ppl asking all kinds of Qs so i decided to give background info...im not going to comment on the not being stupid part...i'll get to it in a few minutes.
a few minutes later
now i can comment...despite all of ur ignorance and rudeness...i STILL think ur a dummass!
GCgurl21- Hope you like this chapter!