Okay first of all...
THANK YOU! to everyone who reviewed my story or stories! Sorry if it's a little confusing... and the whole ball thing came early...way toooooo early, but it was the only way to fit the story without rearanging it too much. And this has got to be the shortest chapter on the whole site! Arrgh! But, I promise that I'll make this more interesting and understandable without being so boring. Got any tips or advice for the story or my writing? Feel free to tell me, im willing to improve.(That way I'll get 'A's in english! Woohoo!) Maybe this will clear things up a bit, if it doesnt and something still confuses you, tell me.
Reynna Cozeniko: Age 15, short, has silver hair that goes down to her knees and black bangs, icy blue eyes, loves jeans and Chuck Taylors, is a lightning demon, twin bro is Sirano, best bud is Ganaru, and can be moody but is really cheerful and loves pranks, lives in Ningenkai(human world), is captin of the Universal Spirit Detectives.
Sirano Cozeniko: Age 15,( taller than Rey)Yusuke's height, has short spiky silver hair with a black patch of hair at the side, blue eyes, loves band tee shirts, is a lightning demon, twin sis is Reynna(he's 5 mins older),gf is Minoko, always cheerful, loves jokes, lives with all his teammates in Ningenkai.
Ganaru Kozina: Age 15, brown hair, brown eyes, LOVES capris and the color red, is a wind demon, hyper and joyful, loves pranks and jokes, lives with teammates.
Aiden: Age 20, black hair that falls into his green eyes, engaged to Shinatzu, very tall, laid-back and easy going, is a water demon, lives with teammates in ningenkai.
Minoko: Age 15, violet eyes and hair always up in a loose bun, is a ferry girl/ assistant to the Universal team, loves Sirano,and lives with the USD team.
hope that clears it up. Also the Universal team takes care of things all over the world instead of just Japan. They also only get missions bigger than the Dark Tournament and Toguro missions. They strictly work for King Enma, not Koenma. Jr. is just the mission giver- guy.
Chaos and Destruction
Chapter 2: The Ball Pt.1
"Say what?"
"You and your teammates are going to a ball today."
"Since when?"
"Since now! Since my dad planned it!"
"I ain't goin'!"
"Yes you are!"
"No I'm not!"
"Yes you are!"
"No!"
"Yes!"
"No!"
"Yes!"
The argument between Koenma and Yusuke will continue like this for a while so I will tell you what the hell they're talking about.
Fashback
Right when the Spirit Detectives entered the toddler's office, an invitation was shoved in Kurama's hand.
The red head looked at it skeptically. "An 'Annual Hero's Ball'? What's this all about?"
"It's a ball that all the hero's and highly respected people come to mingle. This year you guys are invited and you're allowed to bring dates but I wouldn't. Eventually someone will get drunk and start a riot, it's not the safest place, but it's respectable." Koenma answered off-handedly, casually waving his hand.
"When do we go?" Kuwabara asked, taking the card from Kurama.
"Tonight, appaerantly," Kurama stated, snatching back the stolen paper.
"Whose else is going?" Hiei wondered, snatching the card from the fox.
"The Universal team, Botan, Ogre, and I, and many respected demons," Koenma informed, taking back the invite.
"Say what?" Yusuke blurted, starting the previous conversation.
End flashback
"You are going and that is it!" Koenma yelled out, pounding his tiny fists on his desk.
"Jeez,"Yusuke said. "I think it's time for your nap."
Koenma sat back in his chair and rubbed his temples. "It is…"
AT THE BALL!
Universal Spirit Detectives POV
"Are you guys ready yet?" Minoko called from the hallway of the team's apartment. She was wearing a long strapless dark red dress, that went down to her knees and hung low on the back.(The dress was longer at the back, the tip reached the floor.) She had on a gold necklace with matching earrings. She also had a pair of black boots.
"Yeah, I am," Reynna stepped out of her room. She had a black dress that stopped at the ankles and had a red trimming along the end. She had a belt hanging on her hips, and silver and gold accessories. In stead of heels she had a pair of black and white converse. Her hair was down, as usual, but she added some glitter to it, making it sparkle.(Ever do that? It's funny, and shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiny! I have an obsession for shiny things…)
Minoko sighed. As usual, Rey was never one to wear high heels. "Nice chucks," she chuckled.
"I know. I can't walk in heels, I'd bust my ass." Reynna grinned. It's better when she's in a good mood.
"Im ready!" Ganaru screeched as she bounded down the stairs in her red mini dress and black capris. At the last step she almost tripped over her heels and onto Aiden, who just walked into the room, like the innocent little guy he is.
"Oh jeez," Aiden mumbled. "I'd laugh if she fell in the punch bowl…"
"God, that would of hurt," the clumsy girl spoke. "Now where's miss Olsen?"
"Right here," Sirano grunted, still not realizing he was called a girl. Both Aiden and Sirano had on a tux that wasn't buttoned, but instead of a white undershirt Rano had on a 'The Used' black tee shirt.
"We'd better get going!" Minoko cheered and opened a portal to the ball.
See? Told ya it was short...its pitiful. Could some one give me ideas to pass some time at the ball cuz I think what I was gunna out in is about 10 minutes long...its supposed to last for hours! groan...ugh... oh and thanks to the people who put me on your favorite lists!
